Never-changing Fear and Responsibility
Written on November 2nd, 2007 by HollyShortStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: HollyShort
- Word Count: 488
- Read 135 times
Author’s Notes: Okay, weird title, but I forgot which word it was where your mind is set on something and won’t change so I just wrote “Responsibility”.
Chapter One: Aimless Fear
Holly did a summersault, barely missing a shot fired by Opal Koboi herself.
“A year in prison hasn’t helped your aim!” Holly yelled at Koboi.
“Holly! Look out!” Artemis called, being restrained from battle by Butler.
A shot had been fired in a perfect path towards Holly’s heart.
Everything happened in slow motion.
Artemis got out of Butler’s restraining grip and ran towards Holly, screaming “NO!”
As Artemis took the shot meant to hit Holly and fell, everything sped up again.
Holly stared, eyes wide, tears crawling down her face. No. Artemis. Dead. It couldn’t be. But it was.
Finally, Holly found her voice. Her scream shook E7 and rocks fell from the ceiling. Her scream pierced the heavens. It could be heard throughout Haven.
“ARTEMIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
She fell to her knees, her eyes widened and sparkling with tears. He had died. He was gone. He wasn’t coming back.
“Total despair isn’t very fetching, is it?” Koboi asked Holly, unaware that Butler was sneaking up behind her. Butler strangled her until she dropped to the floor, unconcious. He ran to Holly.
“Holly, heal Artemis! Hurry!” Butler said, voice shaking. Had he failed? Was his career…gone? Tarnished?
“Heal,” Holly whispered, her fingers on Artemis. Nothing happened.
“HEAL!” she said, a bit louder.
She was in shock. He really was gone. He wasn’t coming back.
“No…” Holly’s shoulders shook with sobs. “No!… Artemis. ARTEMIS! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Finally, Holly shook her face clear of tears. She stood up, her back straight and rigid, hands clenched in fists at her side. Her eyes were determined.
“I will not let Opal Koboi go free,” she said. Her voice was strong. “I will not let her go free. I will haunt her forever. I swear, I will avenge Artemis. He won’t have died in vain. I’ll make good use of my life.”
As she looked upward, past the rocky ceiling of E7, past the clear blue sky above, past the clouds, and to the heavens, she vowed in her mind,
Artemis, I will avenge you. I will win. Opal Koboi will not go free. Not after killing you. Opal Koboi will not go free!!!!


(4 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
November 2nd, 2007 at 9:54 pm
:P I know, killing Artemis in the first chapter? But this fiction has a really good ending in store.
November 2nd, 2007 at 9:57 pm
kool , * first comment dance* cool , yah…you killed him? but now that you said THAT im okay with it…nice story intense.
November 2nd, 2007 at 9:59 pm
The slow-mo part would be dragged out in a movie
“Holly! Look out!”
*enter slow-mo world*
*laser shoots reallllllyy slowly at Holly*
*Artemis runs really slowlllllyyyyy screaming “Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo”
You get the point.
November 2nd, 2007 at 10:21 pm
I love the slow motion part I can just imagine that! So funny!
November 3rd, 2007 at 7:22 pm
FUNNY? FUNNY?! you thought that was funny?! poor Arty!!!!! i lurved it!!!
February 12th, 2008 at 2:53 am
I agree with Arty’selfriend! This was not really bad, but I didn’t like some part of it but I can’t tell what part it is.