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Nevar

Summary: Ebony circled above. She knew these were the subjects. And she thought to herself: Now what? Of course, the obvious […]

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Ebony circled above. She knew these were the subjects. And she thought to herself: Now what?

Of course, the obvious answer would, at this point, to reporte back to the alphe Platinum. But Ebony toyed with this idea. Little did she know it was a turning point.

If she reported the subject’s location back to Platinum, well, it was what she was expected to do. But then… who picked her to be the alpha anyways?

So, she made the split-second decision, knowing full-well the effects. She would not regret it. Ebony swooped down, and then, in one swift, single movement, knocked out our drowsy heros once again. It was only once she had them by the scruffs of their necks that the saw the loophole in her plan. Weren’t there supposed to be two more?

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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25 responses to “Nevar.” Join in!

  1. *singing* if you are clever, you can figure out the the secret of the title… ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. You have spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. Proofread, and get a beta. There’s a list to the left of this page.

    Anyway, good story. I would have enjoyed it a lot more if it had proper spelling and such, but… No, I didn’t manage to guess that name. What name? Tell me!

  3. Pretty good. Now, the main issue I saw was Beckett. That is how you spell his name. If you fix that, it would help. ๐Ÿ˜‰
    Interesting idea. Update, it there’s more. ๐Ÿ˜€ I’d love to see how far this goes… ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

    ~CC

  4. I appologise for all the spelling mistakes. I can never spell Beckett’s name right. HOWEVER, the title i spelled that way for a reason. (hint: try looking at it upside down. That helped me come up with a title.) I shall go edit now. I need to.

  5. Cool story. But you know, same problems as everyone said. I just looked at the title upside down and said, “OH!” It’s raveN!! But wait, why is it raveN?

  6. YAY!!!! you got it! it’s ‘raven’ backwards! this reason will reveal itself in time. ;))

  7. Okay, i have edited and updated. Should have better spelling now. I was editing it by hand, rather than using spellcheck. Now you can read this without fear. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  8. come ON people! SOMEBODY read this! Please!
    รขโ‚ฌยฆMy story is dead. *sighรขโ‚ฌยฆ*

    Comments merged, one at a time, please ๐Ÿ˜‰

  9. Captain Awesome August 5th, 2010 at 7:11 am 9

    I read it, so it’s not dead. It’s awesome.

  10. UUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAATTTTTEEEEE

  11. you NEED to update!!!!!

  12. Artiholi180 iz watchin you ^_^ August 20th, 2010 at 4:39 am 12

    NOOOOO! dont end here! keep going =)))) please…..0.0 (puppy eyes) i like this story…….. Please update, Falcon.
    -Dex out-

  13. *demonic voice* YOU SHALL UPDATE OR I SHALL BUG YOU AT SCHOOL!!!!!!

  14. WOAH YOU GUYS ARE AT THE SAME SCHOOL…
    wait i wonder if we go to the same school might have not noticed you before or something

  15. UPDATE ALL YOUR STORIES AND STOP SAYING YOU’RE A BAD WRITER!!! FoalyIsAGenues- yeah I have been seriously thinking about that, it would be SO freaky if everyone on the site went to the same school and we never knew it… But then I’d probably love school cuz I wouldn’t be the only insane one!

  16. if you dont update i stop reading

  17. lets see. holly hanging out at fowl manor, parents leaving for vacation, and people get eaten by random creature that appears to be from other dimension…….. i like it

  18. Alright, peoples. I updated… and more is comeing. Soon. I promise. *shoves update-hateing, REAL Falcon into closet*

  19. No, really, I updated… Has this story died again???

  20. I’m dying!!!!!

  21. @FoalyIsAGeneus
    Do you live in colorado?

    @Fal, one of the dying breed of fangirl who doesn’t want to marry Arty

    It is NOT dead. Just slightly ignored.
    How does this have to do with the Para Files????

  22. It has to do w/ da Paradox Files because…

    That’s where I got the idea.

    D’arvit. I hate this new format.

  23. Update, please! it’s nov. 1st 2011!

  24. How dare you end on a cliffhanger?!

    No mistakes. You are good at reading through, I always end up having a few leftover mistakes.

  25. I am still confuzzled.

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