~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly

Written on February 1st, 2008 by Jelly

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  • Category: General
  • Author: Jelly
  • Word Count: 3860
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“Okay,” said Holly, laying down a map in front of her and Minerva. “This is where Chix is.” She pointed to a spot in Northern Canada. “He’s in a hamlet called Fort McPherson, a rural town out in the middle of nowhere. He was put there because of the cold temperatures. I think they said it would help him get back to normal somehow.” Minerva waited for her to continue. “Well?” she said after a moment. “Are we going or not?” “Right now?” said Holly, startled. ”Why not?” Minerva replied. “I guess we aren’t going to HQ then! let me go change course!”

Holly ran to the steering wheel. Several minutes past. “Holly, hurry up!” shouted Minerva. a green flash appeared followed by an ear shattering, BOOM!!!! it shook the shuttle! It was followed by a burst of hot wind from the pipes. Holly rushed back to the cabin , and flung open the door. Several things were on fire. She sprayed everything down and then turned to Minerva, who was whimpering in the corner. “What happened!?” asked Holly, alarmed.

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11 Reviews for “~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly”

  1. Jelly Says:
    February 1st, 2008 at 11:14 pm

    Here u r!

  2. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    February 2nd, 2008 at 12:19 am

    OMG! ALL THE COMMENTS ARE GONE!! NOOO! I WANTED to continue it…but … hopefully everyone likes it!

  3. Jelly Says:
    February 2nd, 2008 at 3:56 pm

    yeah, that’s what happens when u repost something! I hope Olive sees this!

  4. Jelly Says:
    February 6th, 2008 at 8:08 pm

    Hey Mahi, do u noe if Olive wants 2 join Comedy in turns yet?

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    February 6th, 2008 at 10:29 pm

    no… she never answered, ask her in a comment on one of the stories she wrote….

  6. Hunter Says:
    March 2nd, 2008 at 4:58 am

    I loved it. I just simply loved it. Great plot, great story line, and the ending… Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    March 2nd, 2008 at 7:24 pm

    yay.. lolz thanx.

  8. Jelly Says:
    March 2nd, 2008 at 8:57 pm

    totally! :D

  9. songfic_freak Says:
    April 29th, 2008 at 9:47 pm

    funny! kind of mean to holly, no offense. still liked it

  10. Minerva Paradizo Says:
    June 5th, 2008 at 3:26 am

    OK. There was some really not good spelling and grammar. I think Holly and Artemis and Foaly were OOC….
    4/5. Good job!

  11. AF rules Says:
    July 30th, 2008 at 1:59 am

    WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING! The ending was strange!

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