~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly

Written on February 1st, 2008 by Jelly

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  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: General
  • Author: Jelly
  • Word Count: 3860
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Evil Clones? Well…. maybe .. but no one would try and pull that off after what happened to Opal….” As she said Opal’s name Holly’s eyes saddened..

“Opal, an enemy I presume?”Minerva said trying not to pick at the fact because she saw how Holly suddenly became sad.

“Yes….. Opal…she was…SHE”Holly’s eye’s widened.

“She was the only one who tried cloning and NO ONE would try it after her…..EXCEPT HERSELF!THAT’S IT! SHE DID IT! SHE MADE THE CLONE ! SHE KILLED THE BOY! SHE…she…SHE TRIED TO BLAME ME!” Holly exclaimed out loud!

“Why would she…I’d rather not ask……”Minerva said in a rather bored tone.

“Thanks mudgirl…”Holly said as she went towards the door.

“Wait.”Minerva said and she clicked a button on a tiny remote and a metal wall shut down in front of the door.

That startled Holly and she fell back.

“Oh.. sorry didn’t mean to scare you … but, I want to come along, I mean…..Artemis is my friend and I..”She said as she clicked another button and the metal door moved away.

Holly got up and smiled…”I need all the help I can get.”

Minerva returned the smile and they went off to find Opal…. that meant getting back to the LEP and that would be hard to do with a mudgirl with her.

“There’s one one way we can get back.. and I’d rather not take that option… well not alone, I was about to go Mulch for help but then I realized I had no shuttle.. there was one way I could have gone Chix is being treated up here and he has a communicator back to LEP, we can go to him and ask him to send us transportation…” Holly explained

“Great, why didn’t you want to go alone?” Minerva asked.

“Because he is a flirt….. and trust me if any girl comes to him alone he won’t give her what she wants until an hour of flirting is over…..” Holly sighed ……

Back at HQ

”Holly has come back… she is on her way here .. she’s be here soon.. in an hour or so”Lili reported to Trouble.

“Yes.Alright that will be all.” Commander Kelp said (Yes he is the commander now)

Lilli went outside his office and to her desk, she sat down and went through papers.

She opened up a file that said “Chix Verbal”

Description-blah blah blah blah………. and it went on….. Lilli smiled to herself and thought “They forgot to write Flirty.”

When she moved the File aside she saw Opal Koboi’s file.Her smile disappeared.

“I wish I could burn this thing!That woman is so….”Lilli picked up the File and threw it in the trash.

“Oh well… we have the file in the computer and th LEP main frame.. if I need it I’ll get it from there … built there’s no use in seeing her name everyday.” Lilli thought.

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11 Reviews for “~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly”

  1. Jelly Says:

    Here u r!

  2. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    OMG! ALL THE COMMENTS ARE GONE!! NOOO! I WANTED to continue it…but … hopefully everyone likes it!

  3. Jelly Says:

    yeah, that’s what happens when u repost something! I hope Olive sees this!

  4. Jelly Says:

    Hey Mahi, do u noe if Olive wants 2 join Comedy in turns yet?

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    no… she never answered, ask her in a comment on one of the stories she wrote….

  6. Hunter Says:

    I loved it. I just simply loved it. Great plot, great story line, and the ending… Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    yay.. lolz thanx.

  8. Jelly Says:

    totally! :D

  9. songfic_freak Says:

    funny! kind of mean to holly, no offense. still liked it

  10. Minerva Paradizo Says:

    OK. There was some really not good spelling and grammar. I think Holly and Artemis and Foaly were OOC….
    4/5. Good job!

  11. AF rules Says:

    WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING! The ending was strange!

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