~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly

Written on February 1st, 2008 by Jelly

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  • Category: General
  • Author: Jelly
  • Word Count: 3860
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”Well Artemis was no help…… God , I came to ask him for help… and.. now who will help me… might as well get myself ready for prison…..” Holly said flying with her sheild on in the open sky. She always felt so free here, suddenly she stopped right there in mid-air…”Artemis was acting so strange and I didn’t even notice….. he would never laugh like that… something must be wrong…” Holly said and flew with Turbo speed Back to Fowl Mansion.

Back at Head Quarters

”Why do I … You don’t think I made a mistake by letting Holly go ? Do you? What if she was the murderer and I just let her go free? She could be running away right now for all we know!B-But.. I still trust her!” Trouble Kelp argued trying to figure out if he had done the right thing.

” You like her don’t you?” Lilli said, she tossed her blond hair back from her shoulder , she was sitting at his desk…..he was in the commander seat and she was in the client seat.

“I-I–don’t.No , not really.. I mean, no , why would you think that?” Trouble said calming down and having a sip of coffee (It was a coffee break)

Lilli smiled slyly and she spun the spoon around in her coffee”You liked her from the first day she came to LEP,but she never returned the feeling, did she? , and now she doesn’t even work for the LEP anymore……You lost her Kelp.”

“But— she might be a criminal.”Trouble said sipping the last drop of coffee. Lili got up and brushed her gray plaid skirt with her hands

“coffee break is over.. back to work.” She said picking up the two mugs in a tray and she walked away and once she reached the door she turned the knob and turned her head a back a little

“You just going to have to trust her, don’t lose faith in her… Just trust her.”She said softly and left . Trouble Kelp smiled. That’s right, all he had to do was trust her.

AT FOWL MANSION
“What do you mean Artemis hasn’t been here for days all day? I JUST SAW HIM!” Holly said to Butler

“No , Holly..Sadly someone kidnapped him yesterday and asked for somethings and since Artemis didn’t give it…. they kidnapped him… “Butler said Solemnly.

“But, I just met him, you answered the door!”Holly protested.

“Holly, I just returned 10 minutes ago and haven’t been here all day , I was looking for him.” Butler explained.

Holly nodded and thanked Butler for this time…”Was that an illusion then?That wasn’t the real Artemis I talked to?”Holly thought as she flew into the air.

“For some reason this seems to connect to the murder…”Holly thought…….”So the little boy who was killed did say ‘It was Artemis Fowl’ Did Artemis have something…….that the murderer wanted?” Holly thought.

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11 Reviews for “~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly”

  1. Jelly Says:

    Here u r!

  2. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    OMG! ALL THE COMMENTS ARE GONE!! NOOO! I WANTED to continue it…but … hopefully everyone likes it!

  3. Jelly Says:

    yeah, that’s what happens when u repost something! I hope Olive sees this!

  4. Jelly Says:

    Hey Mahi, do u noe if Olive wants 2 join Comedy in turns yet?

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    no… she never answered, ask her in a comment on one of the stories she wrote….

  6. Hunter Says:

    I loved it. I just simply loved it. Great plot, great story line, and the ending… Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    yay.. lolz thanx.

  8. Jelly Says:

    totally! :D

  9. songfic_freak Says:

    funny! kind of mean to holly, no offense. still liked it

  10. Minerva Paradizo Says:

    OK. There was some really not good spelling and grammar. I think Holly and Artemis and Foaly were OOC….
    4/5. Good job!

  11. AF rules Says:

    WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING! The ending was strange!

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