~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly

Written on February 1st, 2008 by Jelly

Story Details

  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: General
  • Author: Jelly
  • Word Count: 3860
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  • 11 votes, average: 3.91 out of 511 votes, average: 3.91 out of 511 votes, average: 3.91 out of 511 votes, average: 3.91 out of 511 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5 (11 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
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Holly was at Fowl Manor. She knocked on the front door. Butler answered it. “Hello?” he asked. “It’s me,” said Holly. “Aren’t you going to invite me in?” Butler couldn’t help but grin. “Of course!” After Holly had unsheilded, Butler led her up to Artemis’ room. She knocked. “Come in, Butler,” said Artemis. “It’s me,” said Holly, entering the room. Artemis turned. “Captain Short,” he said with a grin. “What brings you here?” “It’s an emergency,” she replied. Then, she explained what had happened the previous night. Artemis listened intently. Then, she mentioned something she hadn’t mentioned to Foaly. “Before the police arrived I heard the victim mutter something: ‘It was Artemis Fowl…’. I didn’t mention this to Foaly or Trouble.” “Why not?” inquired Artemis. “Because I didn’t want to add you to the suspect list,” replied Holly. “But back to the subject… I need your help to solve this… Or else they’ll lock me up!” “Okay,” replied Artemis casually. “Where should we start?”

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11 Reviews for “~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly”

  1. Jelly Says:

    Here u r!

  2. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    OMG! ALL THE COMMENTS ARE GONE!! NOOO! I WANTED to continue it…but … hopefully everyone likes it!

  3. Jelly Says:

    yeah, that’s what happens when u repost something! I hope Olive sees this!

  4. Jelly Says:

    Hey Mahi, do u noe if Olive wants 2 join Comedy in turns yet?

  5. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    no… she never answered, ask her in a comment on one of the stories she wrote….

  6. Hunter Says:

    I loved it. I just simply loved it. Great plot, great story line, and the ending… Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  7. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    yay.. lolz thanx.

  8. Jelly Says:

    totally! :D

  9. songfic_freak Says:

    funny! kind of mean to holly, no offense. still liked it

  10. Minerva Paradizo Says:

    OK. There was some really not good spelling and grammar. I think Holly and Artemis and Foaly were OOC….
    4/5. Good job!

  11. AF rules Says:

    WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING! The ending was strange!

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