~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly
Written on February 1st, 2008 by JellyStory Details
(11 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
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“ Trouble, you can’t believe I did this!, Really , Why would I?” Holly protested.
” Holly, you know the rules, I’m sorry but this is …………..doesn’t look…..” Trouble looked for the right words.
Holly rolled her eyes.
“When do I have to take the voice recording thing ?” Holly sighed.
“Right now.” Trouble stated
Once they reached the Facility Foaly was there.
“I’ll be going now , we’ll be back once the tests are over.” Trouble said and left.
“You don’t believe I -” Holly started.
” No, look Holly, I didn’t believe you killed Root , neither do I believe you did this , let alone you don’t have the gut to kill a kid for no apparent reason, but I will have to take the test , I’m under orders here.” Foaly said.
Holly went inside the testing room.
“Say , ‘ Don’t make me do this! ‘ ” Foaly said.
“Don’t make me do this.” Holly said blankly into the microphone
After a few more tests like that Foaly asked Holly to step out , she saw that Trouble and another elf were there. The other elf was taking notes down , he looked nervous.
Trouble saw Holly looking questioningly at the elf and said,”New on the job”
Holly nodded.
Trouble looked at Foaly, as Foaly flipped through some papers.
“Okay ,this may seem confusing , but ….” Foaly started
“Out with it!” Holly said immediatly.
“Okay! Okay!”Foaly said.
“Someone messed around with the system… I could only get half the results and its broken down now… according to half these results there is a fifty-fifty chance of Holly being the murderer…. if only we had the other half , then we would be able to know what really happened.” Foaly said.
“Don’t you have camera’s on acorn Avenue?” Holly asked.
“Someone’s tampered them” Foaly said.
“Well , Holly , I guess we’ll have to take you into custody until we figure out who…”Trouble started.
“WAIT! What if I find the real culprit?What if I can prove it wasn’t me?”Holly asked
“Well……” Trouble started.
“That’s a great idea.”Foaly said.
“Fine , but I won’t entrust you with any more weapons then you already have.”Trouble said as he walked out but before he took the last step towards the door he turned his head and said,
“You’ll need a genius to figure this one out and it can’t be Foaly”Trouble stated.
“Don’t worry about it…” Holly smiled.
“Good Luck Holls.” and with that he left.
Holly nodded.
“So , If I’m right , when are you gonna meet the genius?” Foaly asked.
“Right now.He should be awake.”Holly asked as she left to go Fowl Mansion.
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11 Reviews for “~Mystery in Turns~ by: 017350, Mahi, & Jelly”
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February 1st, 2008 at 11:14 pm
Here u r!
February 2nd, 2008 at 12:19 am
OMG! ALL THE COMMENTS ARE GONE!! NOOO! I WANTED to continue it…but … hopefully everyone likes it!
February 2nd, 2008 at 3:56 pm
yeah, that’s what happens when u repost something! I hope Olive sees this!
February 6th, 2008 at 8:08 pm
Hey Mahi, do u noe if Olive wants 2 join Comedy in turns yet?
February 6th, 2008 at 10:29 pm
no… she never answered, ask her in a comment on one of the stories she wrote….
March 2nd, 2008 at 4:58 am
I loved it. I just simply loved it. Great plot, great story line, and the ending… Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!
March 2nd, 2008 at 7:24 pm
yay.. lolz thanx.
March 2nd, 2008 at 8:57 pm
totally!
April 29th, 2008 at 9:47 pm
funny! kind of mean to holly, no offense. still liked it
June 5th, 2008 at 3:26 am
OK. There was some really not good spelling and grammar. I think Holly and Artemis and Foaly were OOC….
4/5. Good job!
July 30th, 2008 at 1:59 am
WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING! The ending was strange!