Maximum Ride
Written on July 8th, 2008 by AF rulesStory Details
(9 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
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Holly,Butler and Max began explain everything that happened after my “death”,but then green goo started to come out of the walls. The goo molded together and created a big blob,then it turned in to large snake. Nothing moved for a moment,then Tomas said “Shapeshifters,I hate shapeshifters.”
The giant snake lunged at Holly. I pulled out my pocket knife,jumped on to the snake,then I stabbed it in the eye. The snake screeched in pain. Then it transformed in to 3 huge dragons,and they started to blow fire. Max,Iggy,and Fang fought the 1st one. Angel,Gazzy,Nudge,and Aryan fought the 2nd. Me,Holly,Butler and Tomas fought the 3rd one. As we battled I noticed that I was stronger and faster then ever before.
As we fought I scanned for a weakness,then I saw it. “The small crystal on it’s forehead is it’s weakness.” I yelled to the group. Butler jumped towards the dragon and landed on it’s tail. Then he started to crawl toward it’s head. The monster tried to shake him of but it didn’t work. Butler jumped on to the head of the dragon,pulled out his gun and shot the crystal. The crystal shattered in to little tiny pieces.
The dragon roared in pain,then it melted back to blob form,and disappeared. Then the 2 other dragons died not too long afterwards.
July 8th, 2008 at 2:00 pm
OMG I LOVE MAXIMUM RIDE!!!! great job!
July 9th, 2008 at 9:29 pm
DUDE, NICE update!!! only, did you read the fourth book, cause i think all the flyboys are dead. but no, the fourth book sucked, it was short and lame!!!!! update soon plz!
July 13th, 2008 at 3:37 am
:’( y did artemis die? Y??? n e ways, u should put something in with fang n max getten all lovey, and fang flirting with holly. max would be soo mad!!!
July 13th, 2008 at 5:32 pm
I’m trying to think of a way to bring back Artemis. Any ideas?
July 14th, 2008 at 9:05 pm
how about… MAX’S DAD!!! Jeb brought Ari back to the land of the living after max killed him so why not artemis!! Oh, and you should make artemis a genetic freak too. Like make him have some of holly’s genes or something!
July 15th, 2008 at 1:19 am
NICE!!!!! very very very good!!! huh, what powers will he have????? he should have like, idk teleportation or turn into a block of wood or something. CONTINUE!!
July 15th, 2008 at 4:26 pm
How come only one person is commenting on this story?
July 16th, 2008 at 3:17 pm
Cause everyone else sucks!!! lol, no. umm, put up a announcement that you updated, make a very good cliff hanger, and maybe make it more personal, ya no, like ask for people to make a character, pick a few, and put it in your story, if it has a person they can relate to they might like the story better. especially if it is their own person. just a few suggestions,
July 16th, 2008 at 4:44 pm
Thanks Arty_and_Holly_4ever! YOU RULE!!!
July 19th, 2008 at 4:05 am
Hi there, AF rules. If you haven’t checked your character ideas announcement lately, there is a character idea from me.
Plz make Artemis come back to life. 
Nice Story!!!
July 19th, 2008 at 4:07 am
Oh, and arty and holly 4eva, I 4 one do not suck!
July 19th, 2008 at 4:09 am
By th way, when u update, how do you make appear on th recent updates list?
I update one of my stories all th time and it never shows up!!
Keep up all th awesome work!
TroubleKelp signin’ out!!!
July 19th, 2008 at 4:12 am
TroubleKelp,In chapter 8 Artemis will come back
:D
To show your updates on the Recent Updates list you have to write a story saying that you updated. Does that help?
July 19th, 2008 at 11:02 am
No, not really. But I’ll keep trying.
I’m writing a story close to what this is. I started writing it before I heard of your story.
It’s called Determin Fomorian: The last Fomorian.
July 19th, 2008 at 11:04 am
Yaaay! Artemis the Fowl (geddit?) is back! Wooooo!
July 19th, 2008 at 2:35 pm
ha ha. no i guess YOU dont suck, cause you did comment! lol. n e who… UPDATE!!! who cares if no one looks at it now, they will. I mean, with Jelly’s story a week on the farm, i was the only person who read it for a while, but now, almost everyone has read it and it’s sequil. Eventually, your story will be read by everyone!
cause it IS very good. 
July 19th, 2008 at 5:44 pm
Arty_and_holly_4ever, I’m also having a sequel, but practically it will be in my blog, for the time being, anybody can add more comments to my AF and the Mallan Rebellion, Thanks!
(Maximum Ride was very good, great job!)
geniustkw
July 21st, 2008 at 1:16 am
Okay, neways, did any one read the new book!!! i read it 2 times!!!!!! TALK TO ME PEOPLE! What did you think
July 22nd, 2008 at 10:56 am
Wowooooh I read chptr 10 plz update really soon!!!
I can’t wait 2 see what you do with my character!
July 22nd, 2008 at 4:58 pm
oh gosh, you NEED to update soon. i cant wait to see what happens next. If you ever need ideas, drop me a line. this is one of my favorite fanfics! so yea. umm. CONTINUE! if you dont i’ll come and find you and set my sister on you (she’s the ROOT of ALL evil) so you dont want to Not continue. lol
July 22nd, 2008 at 5:49 pm
arty_and_holly_4ever,I think my brother is more evil then your sister.
My brother is a living version of Stewie Griffen,from family guy. I WIN!!!
By the way I’m going to update this story at least once a week.
July 23rd, 2008 at 8:11 am
So what if your brother is a mini of Stewie Griffin.
My brother is so evil, he is an escaped soul from hell! I swear!
lol kidding.
Plz update.
I read your new idea, called Halo. Nice.
You should read mine. It’s called Fairy: 2435.
July 23rd, 2008 at 3:10 pm
what part of ROOT OF ALL EVIL dont you guys understand! lol. that is a good thing that you are going to update.
July 23rd, 2008 at 3:11 pm
twas very good btw! i loved it! oh, and he should have retractible wings, but he doesnt know that until he falls from an airplane n yea… loved it!
July 23rd, 2008 at 4:56 pm
Artemis will have retractable wings!
July 24th, 2008 at 2:15 am
*Keyboard Dance*
xfgiyiutIYTIYTVfytgkiyvty ut
July 24th, 2008 at 2:17 am
N e wayz, what series of books did you cross with Artemis Fowl to get this story?
:bubbly: :mrblue:
XD
July 24th, 2008 at 2:18 am
PLZ continue!!!!!!
July 24th, 2008 at 2:55 am
LOVE IT!!! very funny ending. TroubleKelp- Maximum Ride series. (duh) lol. sooo… update? now!
July 24th, 2008 at 4:02 am
Hey I updated my story Artemis Fowl And The Dumb Anime Charicters so please check it out.
I’m really happy that you like my story! I will update as soon as possible!
By the way,what do you think Opal should sent out to kill Artemis and the gang this time?
July 24th, 2008 at 3:36 pm
what about…
1. those things that attacked the flock in book 4
2. that one guy that max fought in the third book. wasnt it omega or something?
3. Random blobs of mush! lol
July 24th, 2008 at 8:13 pm
nice use of blobs and shiftshapters!!!!!!
July 25th, 2008 at 5:34 am
aah4eva is right with all the blobbies and stuff in chapter 13 but it was a bit jumpy.
I didn’t notice much of a storyline in it. newayz update soon plz.
I can’t find the Maximum Ride series in my library! Dang!
I’m gonna go read your Dumb Anime story!
I’m trying to find out what time you would update so I don’t have to keep looking all the time.
Which country do you live in?
I’m in Australia and it’s currently 6:30 PM
:D
This is BlackOpal. Please don’t double post. I combined your comments.
July 25th, 2008 at 4:11 pm
umm, the first book is called Maximum Ride: the angel expirement. Its by James Patterson. But then again, i am from the us, so it might not be out any where(tho that doesn’t make sense, it was out for a while) else.
July 26th, 2008 at 12:29 am
Dude, pretty good story but one BIG prob. Too little detail, The idea had potential, but you didn’t strech out the story enough plus the whole switching views all the time got really annoying. Try to bring mre detail. By the why i’m gonna start writing some things soon look for some storys by me. Good luck!
Father1005
July 26th, 2008 at 10:17 pm
Remember me AF rules i wtite a Mr story too and you were the first commenter. ty for that.
July 27th, 2008 at 8:45 am
to aah4eva] I found out that MRAE is out in Aus so I’m looking for it.
to AF rules] Plz update or else I’ll eat cheese!!! (lol)
I’m updating DF: TLF as we speak.
July 27th, 2008 at 5:58 pm
that is good. it is a wonderful and funny book! TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY!! !YEA FOR ME!
July 27th, 2008 at 7:28 pm
HAPPY BIRTHDAY arty_and_holy_4ever!
July 28th, 2008 at 6:16 am
When r u gonna update? Chapter 13 has been sitting on the end for days! (Not angry)
Happy Bday AAH4eva!
:D CHICKENS
July 28th, 2008 at 6:18 am
4 yesterday.
July 28th, 2008 at 7:01 pm
Sorry, I’m just trying to figure out how their going to find Opal.
July 30th, 2008 at 8:56 am
Thats okay.
July 30th, 2008 at 3:54 pm
yea! an update. now i need more. only… so grub died?????
August 1st, 2008 at 1:09 am
It looks that way aah4e.
I got the first book in the MR series yesterday! I can’t put it down!
August 1st, 2008 at 9:38 am
Oh btw, Aryan has dragonfly-like wings.
August 2nd, 2008 at 12:40 am
sooo, how is the book so far???? It is an awesome book. sooooooo, when is the new update????
August 2nd, 2008 at 2:07 am
I finished the book! Wow! It was pretty awesome!
But of course Erasers looked pretty normal - until they started morphing, and tried to bite your freaking head off.
For some reason I couldn’t stop laughing at that part.
I second AAH4eva. where is another update?
August 2nd, 2008 at 3:09 am
MY BRAIN WONT WORK!!! HELP!!! Thanks for the comments btw.
August 2nd, 2008 at 5:55 am
*50th comment dance*
Ummmm… Ideas… lets see…
Has Commander Root died in your story?
If he hasn’t, then make him form some kind of Freedom League, (TY to naughty dog) or if he has, give Max (or some1 else
) some sort of new power kinda thingo. Um.
) and the rest stop them at the last moment.
Then Opal unleashes her robots on the humans but Max, Iggy, Gazzy (
n e wayzez, I hope this gives you some ideas.
:D
August 2nd, 2008 at 6:48 am
YAY! I FINNALY HAVE 50 COMMENTS!!!
I thank TroubleKelp and Arty_and_Holly_4ever. THANKS GUYS!!!!!!!!!
August 2nd, 2008 at 7:47 pm
And thank you, AF rules, for such a loverly story. the only thing is… you need to update, like now! sooooo… yea.
congrats!
August 3rd, 2008 at 7:15 am
3 cheers n all that!
Oooooh… chapter 16…
Hooray!
Artemis Fowl: A new hope
Geddit?
like in Star Wars? Nah, don’t worry it didn’t make sense 2 me either!
August 3rd, 2008 at 8:02 pm
lol, i dont get it but what ever. LOVE the update, it could have been longer but hey, dont mind me!
August 4th, 2008 at 9:25 pm
NICE NICE NICE!! holly thinks artemis is hot, lol. good!
August 5th, 2008 at 8:07 am
How did Artemis know how to shoot the robots?
Heheheheh. Arty’s got a girlfriend!
Gazzy has been a little OOC
Socks!!!
August 5th, 2008 at 5:33 pm
I agree. I need to make Gazzy talk more.
August 5th, 2008 at 6:04 pm
and nudge!!!! the chatter box…
August 6th, 2008 at 7:38 am
What about the Gasman’s ‘explosive’ digestion habits?
Iggy is a pyromaniac (obsession with fire and explosions - I should know
*nudge*)
don’t forget that!
August 6th, 2008 at 9:51 pm
60th comment dance! n e who, ha ha ha very nice!!! omg!!!! ha ha. cant stop laughing!
August 8th, 2008 at 7:27 am
Three cheers and all that! (again).
THANK GAWD ITS FRIDAY AFTERNOON!!!
Yay chapter 19 update!
Heheheh still giggling over chapter 18.
kneewho, big twist in chapter 19 and a big cliche too!
August 8th, 2008 at 5:18 pm
I have finally read The Time Paradox!!!!
It is a really freakin awesome book!!!!
August 8th, 2008 at 5:30 pm
I KNOW RIGHT!!!! i really really enjoyed this chapter! continue PLZ.
August 9th, 2008 at 8:16 am
I got the Time Paradox today!
I didn’t think it would come out in Australia for a few weeks yet.
Oh well, who gives! I read it! It’s good!
*snifle* It’s a pity that Colfer won’t be publishing another one for a few years now.
August 11th, 2008 at 1:53 am
when r u gonna upd8? Did u run out of ideas?
August 11th, 2008 at 11:53 pm
Tomarrow im going to be leaving for 5 days. So I probbaly wont be updating in awhile
August 12th, 2008 at 7:38 am
kk c u.
August 18th, 2008 at 4:06 am
YA! IM BACK BABY! There should be more updates soon!!!!!!!!!!!
August 18th, 2008 at 10:50 am
yay! chapter 21. DON’T CALL ME BABY!!! rofl.
finally, a gun!!!
*turns into Nudge*
Eww. I’m a girl now.
*turns back into self*
now THAT was twisted. rofluts
August 18th, 2008 at 4:15 pm
yes, yes, yes!!!! welcome welcome welcome back!!! nice update! ha ha. Mr. Kelp is having a melt down! lol. ha ha ha!
August 19th, 2008 at 1:40 am
I stuck myself in a freezer rofl. not.
STOP MAKING MAX AND ARTEMIS SLAPFIGHT!!!
BRING SOME TANKS OR SOMETHING IN!!! ROAR!!! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!!!
okay, I’m better now, I just had a sugar high. rofluts!!!
August 19th, 2008 at 6:16 pm
Welcome back AAH4E
What does rofluts mean?
August 19th, 2008 at 7:29 pm
thank you soooo much! Welcome back urself! n e who… i cant wait for more. and i dont know what rofluts means. sry. Trouble is just CRAZY! lol
August 20th, 2008 at 1:46 am
omg omg omg hell???? i need more!
August 20th, 2008 at 4:08 am
rofluts means
Rolling On Floor Laughing Unable To Speak. (duh rofl)
Yay chapter 23!!! *75th comment dance*
August 20th, 2008 at 8:45 am
btw, If you could invent a MR character that resembles yourself, what would its name be, any special powers, age, etc?
I haven’t thought mine yet
August 20th, 2008 at 4:11 pm
that would b AWESOME!!! if i could be like 2% bird, i would
my name would b ashley
Powers would b stop time and read minds
age would b 14
n wings would b black. that would b sooooo cool! af rules what about u????
August 20th, 2008 at 5:20 pm
Well………I would have angelic wings and golden armor.
My name would be Criston.
My powers would be to control light and fire,move at the speed of light,and to have super strenghth
Age would be 12
August 20th, 2008 at 5:22 pm
hihi!
update plzzzzz
August 20th, 2008 at 6:09 pm
omg will he stay dead??? plz more!
August 21st, 2008 at 1:10 am
Hey all!!! me here I m at school and don’t want to log on encase I get in trouble.
My name would be Alex, my flock-name Adge or Aj for agility,
Powers: Morph into Tiger-DNA Flying Eraser like thingy, and be the fastest, most agile flyer in the flock and be able to eat ten Snickers bars without throwing up. (lol).
Wings: Harris’s Hawk (my DNA is combined with Harris’s Hawk).
History: Experimental Eraser who escaped from the school. Accidentally finds the flock on their way Washington DC.
Age: 12
Downside: Metabolism 3x Max’s, hyperactive, super-sarcastic, bit ’squeamish’ about romance (vomits when Fang and Max kiss).
August 21st, 2008 at 1:43 am
omg omg omg omg omg omg that w-was AWESOME! ohhhh i cant wait for the sequal
August 21st, 2008 at 8:07 am
ditto!!!
August 21st, 2008 at 8:33 pm
I just started “Maximum Ride II” YAY ME!!! Please check it out.
August 21st, 2008 at 8:43 pm
yes!!! i so just did! i’ll comment there next!