Life Of A Teenage Heiress
Written on July 25th, 2008 by SalaliStory Details
(3 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...In the end I just put the cake outside her door and then went to bed. When I woke up the next morning the cake was still there, and the bits of dust I had put on my door hadn’t moved, so I was reassured that she hadn’t somehow tampered with my room while I slept.
After wondering what Minerva would do if I simply cut one of the collars off a shirt, I closed my eyes and grabbed one. It was a dark green.
Ew.
Black slacks were the closest thing to jeans that Minerva had let me keep. So after attiring myself and managing to successfully descend the stairs, albeit ungracefully, I made it into the kitchen, where my bag sat ready and waiting on a chair.
Ew.
It was a Monday. I hate Mondays.
Then An walked down the stairs.
Aw, crap!
Guess what? I got to take her to school.
And so began my torment.
Butler drove us to school in the Bentley. As usual, I hid my face out of embarrassment. An exited gracefully. I had to escort her around the school to all my classes, where she sat next to me. What had to be the most embarrassing was that she knew everything the teacher’s were talking about, and several of them asked me afterward if she was staying.
When Butler drove us home, I was very ready to sit in my room and listen to music. And do homework, of course, what are you talking about?
But, of course, Martemis had to know how our day went.
“Fine,” I told them, sulking at the bottom of the stairs.
“It was very interesting,” An responded gracefully. Geez, everything about that girl.
Does she think she understands how to get to her classes?
“I think I’ll need just one more day, to verify my route.”
Did she learn anything new today?
“Not really. I suppose, since it’s the end of the year, that no one is going through anything new, but most of it was things I had learned back in the United States.”
Then we were excused.
If anything, the next day was worse. An managed to find a quicker route to a class that I had been late to every day, and managed to get an A on a pop quiz the teacher said she didn’t have to take.
Correction : I don’t just hate Mondays. I hate school with An.
July 25th, 2008 at 9:25 pm
A good beginning. One or two grammar mistakes. Butler seems very in-character.
A scene from the story:
Artemis kept telling her to pick up. “It is disgusting and has a bad smell,” he would tell her. “I see no reason as to why you would keep those clothes there. Have the maids wash them, and you can wear them sooner.”
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Artemis wouldn’t say that. It’s not in his personality.
Many descriptive words were used. I would like to see more of this story. Update soon.
July 25th, 2008 at 9:28 pm
Wow. That was fast.
Right. Fixing. I have the feeling that Artemis is going to be veeery OOC in this fic, however, as a warning. *sigh*
July 26th, 2008 at 1:09 am
This looks like it’s going to be good. Please continue.
July 26th, 2008 at 11:29 am
continue!
its really good so far! ad whos diana?
July 26th, 2008 at 2:27 pm
Its guuuuuuud!!..So continue…cant wait for moooore…
July 26th, 2008 at 11:48 pm
When will you continue? Can you update Enemy of Old? I am eagerly waiting updates on that and this. This story is really, really, really good.
July 27th, 2008 at 3:24 am
Wow. I’m always suprised by how many comments I get on this site.
Captain Short 711 - Diana is… well, she’s a character from the first fic in this series, “Daughter of a Legend”. So, this might not make too much sense if you haven’t read it. I’m including a basic summary in the next chapter, however.
EvilOpal - Unfortunately, “Enemies of Old” has sort of died. I think that in trying to make it funny I lost hold of the plot, and so it’s not really going anywhere. I could try and spin it out for a few more chapters, but it’s probably not going to get finished. Sowwy.
August 17th, 2008 at 9:22 pm
hemorrhaging?????
August 22nd, 2008 at 11:52 pm
It means internal bleeding.