Kgerrad’s contest story
Written on December 5th, 2007 by JellyStory Details
Loading ...In honor of the girls coming to the school a party was held the week after the little breakfast episode. Artemis didn’t want to come but when Keegan reminded him of the little secret he was holding, he had to comply. This was probably a better time than ever to become the annoying girls’ friend. Artemsi put on his best suitthi8nking this was a sophisticated like all the other ones he had been to. He walked down the stairs to the ballroom to find he had been absolutely wrong. Everyone was wearing street clothes. Even the annoying ones! Some obnoxious music was playing. By the sound of the chorus Artemsi could tell it was “I don’t Wanna be in Love” or something to that effect. Looking out on everyone he could see Nicole, Jaylee, Carrie , and Maxi “Dancing” in front of the speaker. (for those of you into fashion read the stuff in bold print if you aren’t just move ahead to the regular stuff.)
Maxi was wearing a Green tank-top with bluejeans
Carrie was wearing blue jeans with a long-sleeved red shirt
Jaylee was wearing a black skirt with a blacktop with a purple halter top underneath held together by a metal heart.
Nicole was wearing Capri pants (despite the fact it was winter!) and a pink top.
Artemis sighed. Going up to the speakers he would be risking his hearing and his reputation considering what he was wearing. He forced himself forward. When he got 3 yards away from the speaker almost everyone had seen him and and laughed, That is except for the little group by the speakers. He reached out and was going to tap one of them on the shoulders when they all ran out. He followed them casually. When he got to the hall only two were there, Nicole and Jaylee. “Where did the other two go?” he asked. Nicole looked up from her nachos and wiped her mouth. With a wet, cheesy finger she pointed to the girls dormitory. Artemis looked up. Boys weren’t even aloud on their staircase!
He nodded back at Jaylee and Nicole. Nicole had shared her Nachos with Jaylee, who’s face was now covered in cheese. Maybe he would talk to them later… Artemis began walking back o his room when he saw Red hair shoot out the door. Maxi! He thought. Quietly he stepped out the door, so not to be caught by the dean.
What he saw surprised him. The were committing a federal crime! Vandalism! Something white went over a branch and got caught. More decorated the tree. The toilet paper was Hardly visible by the snow that was falling making this the perfect time to T.P.
After following them around the school for about 2 hours they stopped and dropped their now empty bag of toilet paper. Carrie looked up at the sky and whispered something to Maxi. She to looked up and did some demented dance. Carrie Did the same thing only with more diving. Soon, 50 yards away, he could hear them shouting numbers. “56, 57!”
“72, 70 uuhh I lost count.” They both sat down and started rolling balls. After each had made about 40. They looked back. Straight at Artemis. Maxi picked up on of her snowballs and chucked ti at Artemis, hitting him square in the chest. Carrie had as may as she could in her arms and threw them like a wind propeller. He screamed running past The Dean’s office, back into the building. He locked the door behind him, and heaved a sigh. How could anyone want to be those people’s friends?
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December 5th, 2007 at 1:37 am
R,R&R!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 1:53 am
I liked it. It’s understandable, and you display Artemis’s personality well. A few grammar issues, but nothing serious. All in all, a good story. I would rate it 4/5. But I will wait until you’ve written a little more in this to rate it.
December 5th, 2007 at 1:59 am
oops! It’s Bartleby’s oh well we can pretend right?
December 5th, 2007 at 2:00 am
Sorry pplz vinyaya above was me. I forgot to change my name back
December 5th, 2007 at 2:25 am
okay , I reallly liked it and it was totally awesome! i will wait to rate it though
( i am mad , because i wrote a page long messgae for you in this and then it got deleted!)
December 5th, 2007 at 6:36 am
I like it please continue!
December 5th, 2007 at 9:46 pm
HEHEHEHEHEHEHE I like this!!!!!!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 10:45 pm
WHAT?!?!?!?! idk wht u r talking about Olive! NEW TITLE TOO!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 11:03 pm
COTINUE.
December 6th, 2007 at 8:49 am
i like it! it is seriously goin somewhere and i hope u continue
December 7th, 2007 at 12:46 am
I will!…. this weekend.
December 7th, 2007 at 12:52 am
does anyone have any ideas they would like in the story? I m stuck.
December 8th, 2007 at 1:59 am
anyone?
December 8th, 2007 at 2:26 am
um….no? IDK….well..maybe..nahh…idk…..maybe , ……..I still don’t know………lol….sorry
December 8th, 2007 at 2:28 am
OK I will update 1 more time tonight… If u don’t like it I will delete it and try 2 think of something else.
December 8th, 2007 at 7:43 pm
I updated partially!! But i was thrown off the computer by my bro. so yeah not done yet…
December 8th, 2007 at 7:57 pm
nice update , i totally want u to continue!
December 8th, 2007 at 10:30 pm
any ideas?
December 9th, 2007 at 4:00 am
UPDATED!!!
December 9th, 2007 at 4:32 am
luv the update , though i was a bit confused at who was saying wut when kegan and Artemis thought but i get the idea.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:18 pm
2 anyone else confused: Keegan is going 2 blackmail Artemis if he doesn’t get Carrie, and her friends to b friends with him so that Keegan can stop being friends with them cause they are annoying.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:41 pm
okay
December 15th, 2007 at 5:08 pm
does any1 have any ideas now?
December 27th, 2007 at 4:58 pm
I have an idea! OKAY this is pretty stupid but what if (I SAID WHAT IF) what if Artemis starts liking the girl that threw the paper airplane and then they meet up and stuff, but then Holly gets all jealous and so does minerva and then he has a big problem. Then Holly comes to the school disguised as a human and so does Minerva to try to break them up. Then Holly and Minerva get in a big fight on who gets to be with Artemis and … something else wierd happens … i don’t know what next.
December 27th, 2007 at 5:00 pm
By the way MERRY LATE CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Sweet! I love the update! 4 stars!
January 1st, 2008 at 5:03 pm
when will u update , and thats a pretty good idea symojen but now if jelly uses taht i will noe wut happens!
January 9th, 2008 at 2:12 am
YOU CAN’T USE ME AUNT! Well, actually you can, but when you said “Nicole”, that was so right! An acurate discreption of tadabop would be a group of girls who think they are all that and think they rule the school, but they are really just about as popular as a bag of asparigus.
January 9th, 2008 at 2:16 am
Thank you! I will update it within the next couple of weeks..
January 9th, 2008 at 3:26 am
UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!
January 13th, 2008 at 2:13 am
Updated again!
January 29th, 2008 at 12:20 am
AWESOME STORY! (this is Kgerred logged in as worstemeny)
January 29th, 2008 at 12:31 am
good 4 u…..
Oh the dememted dance was them chasing snowflakes!
March 8th, 2008 at 8:55 pm
With all due respect to the people in this story I changed their names from real life to adding an ‘e’ to almost everyone. and adding a little twist.