Kgerrad’s contest story
Written on December 5th, 2007 by JellyStory Details
Loading ...The next day The girls came down to breakfast. A few ,still confused, girls came down in their Pajamas with their blindfolds resting on their heads like sun-glasses. Mrs. Miller grabbed two by the ear and ushered them off to their rooms, the rest followed. Carrie and her friends walked down the steps with the exception of Maxi who was most obviously a morning person by the way she skipped all the way to the buffet. Most unfortunate for Artemis they sat at his table again along with Keegan. They all started talking to him at once. Keegan tipped his chair back on to legs and smiled smugly at Artemis. Maxi and Carrie stopped talking. Maxi frowned, making everyone else stop talking too and stare at her. She looked at her plate where 4 eggs and 4 pieces of bacon had been. now there was two bacon pieces left and a crescent of eggs making her plate look like this. 
. Maxi looked up and stared at Carrie who smiled revealing the other part of her eggs. Artemis looked away and baby barfed in his mouth a bit. as soon as Carrie had sufficiently swallowed Maxi’s eggs Artemis turned back to look at his new “friends” Keegan got up and walked away. Jaylee and Carrie got up too about to follow him to his new table. As they walked to Artemis, he stuck his arm out like a the train crossing guard. Artemis cleared his throat and looked up at Jaylee and Carrie. ” I’m sorry but you can’t move from table to table.”
“But Keegan di-” began Jaylee. Artemis shook his head in hopes they would just shut-up and sit down. Maxi lifted her brow and stared at Artemis.
“You know, you aren’t a very good lier.” Artemis glared at her. How did she know he was lying? It had taken years of practice to fool the lie detector and now some girl had seen right through him. What was this world coming to? Carrie pushed her way past Artemis. Nicole snickered.
Artemis was already losing.
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December 5th, 2007 at 1:37 am
R,R&R!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 1:53 am
I liked it. It’s understandable, and you display Artemis’s personality well. A few grammar issues, but nothing serious. All in all, a good story. I would rate it 4/5. But I will wait until you’ve written a little more in this to rate it.
December 5th, 2007 at 1:59 am
oops! It’s Bartleby’s oh well we can pretend right?
December 5th, 2007 at 2:00 am
Sorry pplz vinyaya above was me. I forgot to change my name back
December 5th, 2007 at 2:25 am
okay , I reallly liked it and it was totally awesome! i will wait to rate it though
( i am mad , because i wrote a page long messgae for you in this and then it got deleted!)
December 5th, 2007 at 6:36 am
I like it please continue!
December 5th, 2007 at 9:46 pm
HEHEHEHEHEHEHE I like this!!!!!!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 10:45 pm
WHAT?!?!?!?! idk wht u r talking about Olive! NEW TITLE TOO!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 11:03 pm
COTINUE.
December 6th, 2007 at 8:49 am
i like it! it is seriously goin somewhere and i hope u continue
December 7th, 2007 at 12:46 am
I will!…. this weekend.
December 7th, 2007 at 12:52 am
does anyone have any ideas they would like in the story? I m stuck.
December 8th, 2007 at 1:59 am
anyone?
December 8th, 2007 at 2:26 am
um….no? IDK….well..maybe..nahh…idk…..maybe , ……..I still don’t know………lol….sorry
December 8th, 2007 at 2:28 am
OK I will update 1 more time tonight… If u don’t like it I will delete it and try 2 think of something else.
December 8th, 2007 at 7:43 pm
I updated partially!! But i was thrown off the computer by my bro. so yeah not done yet…
December 8th, 2007 at 7:57 pm
nice update , i totally want u to continue!
December 8th, 2007 at 10:30 pm
any ideas?
December 9th, 2007 at 4:00 am
UPDATED!!!
December 9th, 2007 at 4:32 am
luv the update , though i was a bit confused at who was saying wut when kegan and Artemis thought but i get the idea.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:18 pm
2 anyone else confused: Keegan is going 2 blackmail Artemis if he doesn’t get Carrie, and her friends to b friends with him so that Keegan can stop being friends with them cause they are annoying.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:41 pm
okay
December 15th, 2007 at 5:08 pm
does any1 have any ideas now?
December 27th, 2007 at 4:58 pm
I have an idea! OKAY this is pretty stupid but what if (I SAID WHAT IF) what if Artemis starts liking the girl that threw the paper airplane and then they meet up and stuff, but then Holly gets all jealous and so does minerva and then he has a big problem. Then Holly comes to the school disguised as a human and so does Minerva to try to break them up. Then Holly and Minerva get in a big fight on who gets to be with Artemis and … something else wierd happens … i don’t know what next.
December 27th, 2007 at 5:00 pm
By the way MERRY LATE CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Sweet! I love the update! 4 stars!
January 1st, 2008 at 5:03 pm
when will u update , and thats a pretty good idea symojen but now if jelly uses taht i will noe wut happens!
January 9th, 2008 at 2:12 am
YOU CAN’T USE ME AUNT! Well, actually you can, but when you said “Nicole”, that was so right! An acurate discreption of tadabop would be a group of girls who think they are all that and think they rule the school, but they are really just about as popular as a bag of asparigus.
January 9th, 2008 at 2:16 am
Thank you! I will update it within the next couple of weeks..
January 9th, 2008 at 3:26 am
UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!
January 13th, 2008 at 2:13 am
Updated again!
January 29th, 2008 at 12:20 am
AWESOME STORY! (this is Kgerred logged in as worstemeny)
January 29th, 2008 at 12:31 am
good 4 u…..
Oh the dememted dance was them chasing snowflakes!
March 8th, 2008 at 8:55 pm
With all due respect to the people in this story I changed their names from real life to adding an ‘e’ to almost everyone. and adding a little twist.