Kgerrad’s contest story
Written on December 5th, 2007 by JellyStory Details
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Artemis sat in his dorm reading war and peace. Keegan walked over to him backwards shouting something at the door laughing. He turned around to face Artemis. “Ooooh you don’t know what your missing!” he sighed. “Yes I do now leave me alone.” Artemis replied not even bothering to look up from his book. ” no you don’t!” “Ok i don’t”
Keegan started to walk away but then he turned on his heels back to Artemis. ” I bet you couldn’t make ONE friend out of all of my new friends.” he said ” I don’t really care.” he said back. ” Yes you do.” Keegan sneered. Artemis finally looked up from his book. “And why is that?” “Because I have dirt on you.”
“No you don’t.” Artemis said hoping it was true. “It is true. I saw you talking into your ring, I know you have secret little friends. and I’m going to tell the Dean.” “Why?” Artemis asked actually getting worried for The fairies. “Because I feel like it.” He said looking at his nails. “What do you want?” He asked. “For you to take those annoying girls off my back. I figure you slip in and I slip out aye?” Artemis shook his head. Keegan was incredibly stupid. He could get out of this. “Fine.” said Artemis. “It’s a deal.” He shook Keegan’s hand and went back to his book. This was going to be too easy. Or so he thought.
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December 5th, 2007 at 1:37 am
R,R&R!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 1:53 am
I liked it. It’s understandable, and you display Artemis’s personality well. A few grammar issues, but nothing serious. All in all, a good story. I would rate it 4/5. But I will wait until you’ve written a little more in this to rate it.
December 5th, 2007 at 1:59 am
oops! It’s Bartleby’s oh well we can pretend right?
December 5th, 2007 at 2:00 am
Sorry pplz vinyaya above was me. I forgot to change my name back
December 5th, 2007 at 2:25 am
okay , I reallly liked it and it was totally awesome! i will wait to rate it though
( i am mad , because i wrote a page long messgae for you in this and then it got deleted!)
December 5th, 2007 at 6:36 am
I like it please continue!
December 5th, 2007 at 9:46 pm
HEHEHEHEHEHEHE I like this!!!!!!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 10:45 pm
WHAT?!?!?!?! idk wht u r talking about Olive! NEW TITLE TOO!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 11:03 pm
COTINUE.
December 6th, 2007 at 8:49 am
i like it! it is seriously goin somewhere and i hope u continue
December 7th, 2007 at 12:46 am
I will!…. this weekend.
December 7th, 2007 at 12:52 am
does anyone have any ideas they would like in the story? I m stuck.
December 8th, 2007 at 1:59 am
anyone?
December 8th, 2007 at 2:26 am
um….no? IDK….well..maybe..nahh…idk…..maybe , ……..I still don’t know………lol….sorry
December 8th, 2007 at 2:28 am
OK I will update 1 more time tonight… If u don’t like it I will delete it and try 2 think of something else.
December 8th, 2007 at 7:43 pm
I updated partially!! But i was thrown off the computer by my bro. so yeah not done yet…
December 8th, 2007 at 7:57 pm
nice update , i totally want u to continue!
December 8th, 2007 at 10:30 pm
any ideas?
December 9th, 2007 at 4:00 am
UPDATED!!!
December 9th, 2007 at 4:32 am
luv the update , though i was a bit confused at who was saying wut when kegan and Artemis thought but i get the idea.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:18 pm
2 anyone else confused: Keegan is going 2 blackmail Artemis if he doesn’t get Carrie, and her friends to b friends with him so that Keegan can stop being friends with them cause they are annoying.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:41 pm
okay
December 15th, 2007 at 5:08 pm
does any1 have any ideas now?
December 27th, 2007 at 4:58 pm
I have an idea! OKAY this is pretty stupid but what if (I SAID WHAT IF) what if Artemis starts liking the girl that threw the paper airplane and then they meet up and stuff, but then Holly gets all jealous and so does minerva and then he has a big problem. Then Holly comes to the school disguised as a human and so does Minerva to try to break them up. Then Holly and Minerva get in a big fight on who gets to be with Artemis and … something else wierd happens … i don’t know what next.
December 27th, 2007 at 5:00 pm
By the way MERRY LATE CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Sweet! I love the update! 4 stars!
January 1st, 2008 at 5:03 pm
when will u update , and thats a pretty good idea symojen but now if jelly uses taht i will noe wut happens!
January 9th, 2008 at 2:12 am
YOU CAN’T USE ME AUNT! Well, actually you can, but when you said “Nicole”, that was so right! An acurate discreption of tadabop would be a group of girls who think they are all that and think they rule the school, but they are really just about as popular as a bag of asparigus.
January 9th, 2008 at 2:16 am
Thank you! I will update it within the next couple of weeks..
January 9th, 2008 at 3:26 am
UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!
January 13th, 2008 at 2:13 am
Updated again!
January 29th, 2008 at 12:20 am
AWESOME STORY! (this is Kgerred logged in as worstemeny)
January 29th, 2008 at 12:31 am
good 4 u…..
Oh the dememted dance was them chasing snowflakes!
March 8th, 2008 at 8:55 pm
With all due respect to the people in this story I changed their names from real life to adding an ‘e’ to almost everyone. and adding a little twist.