Kgerrad’s contest story
Written on December 5th, 2007 by JellyStory Details
Loading ...This is a little bit of real life kinda what is happening in at our school No Kgerrad the secret is not in here.
Artemis stepped out of the limo and carefully walked to St. Barkley’s ( Is that right?) Today it was no longer St. Barkley’s school for young gentlemen but just St. Barkley’s. Today was different and tomorrow would be the same as today but probably different because they were allowing girls to attend. when he entered the doors the usual silence was gone replaced by high-pitched chatter. As he put his jacket away and gathered his pencils Artemis was tripped at least 4 times each one ending in giggling girls and angry glares produced by himself. Sitting in class was n’t much different but he got a good look at the people who and tripped him and some.
The first girl had dark black hair with orange streaks in it. Her clothes were all black and VERY tight the were skull tattoos up and down her sleeveless arm. I wonder how SHE got in here? he thought. The next one was were clothes to the dress code but by the looks of it she was a t.t.a.t.a.b.o.p. ( say: tat-a-bop ) which stood for think they are all that and a bag of potatochips. anyway modesty was NOT one of her virtues if she had any. the third was dressed like well If I got into details this wouldn’t be pg13. there were several other girls too but most of them chattering away to the first three and likely to act the same way. But then there was one last group talking a bit more silently than the others but that wasn’t what got Artemis’s attention it was the fact that none of the girls were wearing make-up and their clothes were all uniform plus they had actually welcomed several Barkley boys into their group yet not flirting with them! well with the exception of one ( A.K.A. Nicole)
When the teacher came in everyone turned around and sat silently except for the few who thought they were class clowns and kept throwing spit-balls at Artemis. Eventually Artemis timed when they were being spit and as soon as e realized this he ducked from the last spit-ball hitting the teacher. He spun around from the map he was pointing at and grabbed the two students by the ears pulled them out of the classroom and hit them both soundly with a ruler. (like Mrs. Miller would do) Within the next hour of teaching 37 spit-balls hit Artemis and 14 kids where sent to the hallway and the vice principal Ms. Harvey and the principal Mrs.ganushi came in. By the time class was half over all the regular St. Barkley students remained (6 including Artemis ) and 7 new ones. While the teacher taught a paper airplane was sent to the front row ( Artemis was the last one there) Artemis opened it up to find a crudely drawn smiley face along with the message “HI!”
Artemis looked back to see a girl waving at him with a huge smile on her face waving. Later to be known as “Maxi” He sat up straight again and rubbed his forehead. How can a genius live with such morons in his school? He could see this was to be a loooooooong day.
I will continue in three comments, reviews, messages etc. from people who think the story is going somewhere.
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December 5th, 2007 at 1:37 am
R,R&R!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 1:53 am
I liked it. It’s understandable, and you display Artemis’s personality well. A few grammar issues, but nothing serious. All in all, a good story. I would rate it 4/5. But I will wait until you’ve written a little more in this to rate it.
December 5th, 2007 at 1:59 am
oops! It’s Bartleby’s oh well we can pretend right?
December 5th, 2007 at 2:00 am
Sorry pplz vinyaya above was me. I forgot to change my name back
December 5th, 2007 at 2:25 am
okay , I reallly liked it and it was totally awesome! i will wait to rate it though
( i am mad , because i wrote a page long messgae for you in this and then it got deleted!)
December 5th, 2007 at 6:36 am
I like it please continue!
December 5th, 2007 at 9:46 pm
HEHEHEHEHEHEHE I like this!!!!!!!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 10:45 pm
WHAT?!?!?!?! idk wht u r talking about Olive! NEW TITLE TOO!!!
December 5th, 2007 at 11:03 pm
COTINUE.
December 6th, 2007 at 8:49 am
i like it! it is seriously goin somewhere and i hope u continue
December 7th, 2007 at 12:46 am
I will!…. this weekend.
December 7th, 2007 at 12:52 am
does anyone have any ideas they would like in the story? I m stuck.
December 8th, 2007 at 1:59 am
anyone?
December 8th, 2007 at 2:26 am
um….no? IDK….well..maybe..nahh…idk…..maybe , ……..I still don’t know………lol….sorry
December 8th, 2007 at 2:28 am
OK I will update 1 more time tonight… If u don’t like it I will delete it and try 2 think of something else.
December 8th, 2007 at 7:43 pm
I updated partially!! But i was thrown off the computer by my bro. so yeah not done yet…
December 8th, 2007 at 7:57 pm
nice update , i totally want u to continue!
December 8th, 2007 at 10:30 pm
any ideas?
December 9th, 2007 at 4:00 am
UPDATED!!!
December 9th, 2007 at 4:32 am
luv the update , though i was a bit confused at who was saying wut when kegan and Artemis thought but i get the idea.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:18 pm
2 anyone else confused: Keegan is going 2 blackmail Artemis if he doesn’t get Carrie, and her friends to b friends with him so that Keegan can stop being friends with them cause they are annoying.
December 9th, 2007 at 7:41 pm
okay
December 15th, 2007 at 5:08 pm
does any1 have any ideas now?
December 27th, 2007 at 4:58 pm
I have an idea! OKAY this is pretty stupid but what if (I SAID WHAT IF) what if Artemis starts liking the girl that threw the paper airplane and then they meet up and stuff, but then Holly gets all jealous and so does minerva and then he has a big problem. Then Holly comes to the school disguised as a human and so does Minerva to try to break them up. Then Holly and Minerva get in a big fight on who gets to be with Artemis and … something else wierd happens … i don’t know what next.
December 27th, 2007 at 5:00 pm
By the way MERRY LATE CHRISTMAS EVERYBODY!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Sweet! I love the update! 4 stars!
January 1st, 2008 at 5:03 pm
when will u update , and thats a pretty good idea symojen but now if jelly uses taht i will noe wut happens!
January 9th, 2008 at 2:12 am
YOU CAN’T USE ME AUNT! Well, actually you can, but when you said “Nicole”, that was so right! An acurate discreption of tadabop would be a group of girls who think they are all that and think they rule the school, but they are really just about as popular as a bag of asparigus.
January 9th, 2008 at 2:16 am
Thank you! I will update it within the next couple of weeks..
January 9th, 2008 at 3:26 am
UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!
January 13th, 2008 at 2:13 am
Updated again!
January 29th, 2008 at 12:20 am
AWESOME STORY! (this is Kgerred logged in as worstemeny)
January 29th, 2008 at 12:31 am
good 4 u…..
Oh the dememted dance was them chasing snowflakes!
March 8th, 2008 at 8:55 pm
With all due respect to the people in this story I changed their names from real life to adding an ‘e’ to almost everyone. and adding a little twist.