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Inseparable

Summary: Annika and Jason have been inseparable since they were five, until the cousins discover secret truths about their families.

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*Prologue*
The little girl pressed her hands to the window, crying out as her home of five years grew steadily smaller.
“Hush, hush,” Nanny McEvans crooned gently. “There’s a war in England. It’s not safe there. Your parents sent you to live with your aunt and uncle in America.”
If the girl heard her, she gave no implication; preferring, instead, to watch England shrink to the size of a dot as the plane rose high above the clouds.
Six years later
Annika caught the ball easily, grinning at her cousin. She had been living with Jason since she was five, and could barely remember England, where she was born.
“Annika! Jason!” Jason’s mother called.
“Mom, can we have a camp-out tonight?” Jason asked. The family lived in a rustic suburban house just a few miles from the nearest town, but the dense forest made it seem like they were in the middle of nowhere. The night was warm, and the stars were bright; the perfect night for a camp-out.
But apparently Jason’s mother had other ideas. Glancing worriedly at a grizzled old oak by the stream, she firmly refused and went back inside.
Jason gave Annika a sideways look, a mischievous twinkle in his dark eyes. Jason was very short for a twelve-year-old boy, and his ears were slightly pointed. His classmates teased him of being a pixie.
“Wahadda ya say, ‘Nik? Listen to mom or have a camp-out?”
Annika laughed, green eyes glinting with the same mischievous spark that was in Jason’s eyes. “Definitely a camp-out,” she said, tossing her long, dark hair over her shoulder. “How about by that old tree near the lake?”
“Definitely,” Jason agreed.
They ran inside and grabbed their camp-out stuff, then snuck back outside and settled by the old oak. As the full moon rose in the sky, they settled into their sleeping bags.

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  1. Okay first things first. * first comment dance *. Hahah

    Second. I like the story so far I don’t know much about it yet,but the writings good and I don’t spot and grammar mistakes. So update soon please

  2. Absent_Minded_Professor February 22nd, 2012 at 3:01 pm 2

    Only two errors:
    “’Definately,’ Jason agreed.” Definitely should be definitely.
    “…green eyes ginting with te same mischievous spark…” Missing an “h” in “the.”

    The writing looks good so far. I just think you should press enter twice for each paragraph so it isn’t all together.

    By the way, what is it a crossover with?

  3. It’s a crossover with Harry Potter. I don’t want to give too much away, but it has to do with where Annika’s from.
    And thanks for pointing out the mistakes. I wrote that on a three-year-old iPod, so typos tend to crop up more often when I do that.
    Happy reading!
    ~Elfie

  4. Okay you no idea how scary it is to me that your choose such a rare and unused name as Annika.
    Don’t get me wrong I love the name, in fact it’s my name. My name is spelled Annaka, though.

  5. Lol, I had no idea! There’s an Annika in my class, so I just used it. 🙂

  6. LEPofficerHollyShort February 23rd, 2012 at 12:30 am 6

    How dose this have anything to do with AF. Not being rude *smily face*

  7. I belive they will come in at a later chapter. I could be wrong though.

  8. Grizzled old oak by the stream, huh? I’m guessing there’s a bend in that stream…and that there’s a full moon tonight… *grins* Update, please!

  9. Hmm, once again, not professional. But not bad at all 😀 Upadate, please.

  10. Ny bane is Annika and it is spelled exactly like that! This is freaky and I love Harry Potter and my twin brother’s good friend is named Jason. *shivers*Now if you used the name Ethan, I would be creeped.

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