I Spy With My Little Eye
Written on November 7th, 2008 by HelenStory Details
(7 votes, average: 4.43 out of 5)
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This is my first time writing a biography (kind of) of one of my missions.
I suppose it could be better, but, as I’ve said, this is my first report, and I don’t usually write at all. I’m usually on missons. I’m important to the faucility. Don’t ask me which one. I can’t say, because even we don’t use the name.
Let’s start with the basics. My name is Zenna. I’m an assassin.
You might be surprised, but I’m really good at it. Maybe it’s because I lost all my family members in a fire when I was just one years old. I never show any expression, in case someone sees how vunerable I am. If people see that you’re vunerable, they hurt you. They bully you. They taunt you.
After a few years of experiencing that, I stopped responding to things that I don’t like. It worked, and for a few years more my life was better. Not good, but better than before, at least.
One day, the people came. From the organisation we weren’t allowed to say the name of. They looked at lots of other kids there in the orphranage, but rejected all of them. Until they came to me.
They poked me, they prodded me. They made funny faces at me and they gave me sweets. I didn’t respond, just sat there looking on impassively. I didn’t take the sweets either. For some reason they were delighted.
They signed some papers, and brought me somewhere that I was supposed to call headquarters. Then I was borught to a spacious room and left to myself. I explored the room, but there was nothing, just a thick mattress on a bed. I was tired. Many things happened that day.
I crawled onto the mattress and slept.
That was my first day there.
November 7th, 2008 at 4:05 pm
ooo i like this one. i think it’s cool.
November 7th, 2008 at 4:20 pm
Ya this is cool, srry but, your gonna HAVE TO UPDATE!
November 8th, 2008 at 1:21 am
WHY DOESN’T ANYONE DO THE FIRST COMMENT DANCE ANYMORE??!!!!
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
was all I had to say. forgive me for stretching the page.
November 8th, 2008 at 1:45 am
lol *fourth comment dance* lol i love this story, how your charater saw the Butler, quite good aqually i love it!
November 8th, 2008 at 1:35 pm
Oh, thanks!
Btw, who rated me five? I’d like to kiss (not really) that person!
November 8th, 2008 at 11:24 pm
This is really cool! The kid-assassin thing is kinda sretching it, but I love how everything sort of ties in so far.
November 9th, 2008 at 12:20 am
hmmmm, reminds me of the book “I’d tell you I love you, but then I’d have to Kill you” A book about a kid supergenius/spy.
November 9th, 2008 at 7:47 am
Oh, that.
Huh?
November 9th, 2008 at 1:01 pm
I like the idea. And I can’t wait to see what happens next. The last chapter (5 at the moment) reminded me a bit of my own fic, Broken. Can’t wait until you update again
November 10th, 2008 at 1:36 pm
Okay, but you are SO wrong. You are SO gonna be surprised when I next update. Sorry, I don’t have time now, so maybe tomorrow.
November 10th, 2008 at 9:20 pm
Helen, it seems like a good story. Yours usually are. But could you read my story “Butler’s mission?” I’d like your input.
November 10th, 2008 at 11:14 pm
i dont aprove of the last part
November 11th, 2008 at 1:28 am
Three words. Pelt. You. Fish.
November 11th, 2008 at 2:12 am
Lol, i read broken, it’s kinda like that. Well, i love the whole freaking thing at the moment please update. i wanna know what happens lol
November 11th, 2008 at 10:28 am
Update or I delete your story!!!!!!!!!!!
November 11th, 2008 at 10:29 am
Haha, you don’t know my password, so boo boo sucks to you!
November 13th, 2008 at 2:51 am
YAY!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!
That kiss. Like Artemis would actually kiss someone to make them spill!!!!
November 13th, 2008 at 2:40 pm
Yeah, but don’t forget, he’s not really the same after, yeah, even after TLC. I think.
November 14th, 2008 at 3:06 am
OMFG I LOVE THE CH. 6 UPDATE OMG I JUST LOVE IT. IT WAS LIKE I WAS THERE. OMG, YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!
November 15th, 2008 at 10:07 am
Where are you??? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Pretty please?
November 15th, 2008 at 4:17 pm
Update! Does Artemis seriously like her, or is he pretending? UPDATE!!!!!!
November 15th, 2008 at 4:32 pm
I agree with belldonner.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
I could go on if you like.
November 16th, 2008 at 3:32 am
Okay, she told me yesterday that she wasn’t gonna update unless you guys stop pelting her with whatever. (I personally approve of your methods)
But since she… okay, I will stop but I dunno about you. Just stop pelting for a while. She updates, then you can pelt all you like.
Don’t tell her about what I said. She’ll punch me.
November 16th, 2008 at 3:36 am
What, is she your sibling or something?
November 17th, 2008 at 6:48 am
She’s my classmate. NOT sibling. I WILL PUNCH YOU REALLY HARD FOR APPROVING OF THEIR METHODS OF GETTING ME TO UPDATE!!!
Yeah, and I already updated.
December 27th, 2008 at 12:07 pm
I UPDATED, FINALLY!!!
December 27th, 2008 at 1:04 pm
Twenty-seven comment dance? I like it so much and it was also a bit kinda freaky on the starting
December 28th, 2008 at 1:37 am
Later, later?!!
OH, COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!
thnks 4 updatin’ tho.
December 28th, 2008 at 8:25 am
Awwwwwww, read it got to chappy 8 Later, later. i’m going to die with this cliff hanger. >:D i do wonder with her, ‘why would he keep me here if her knew i was a threat’ i love it. Ok, im not going to babble O.o
December 29th, 2008 at 12:04 pm
Then pressure me and I’ll spill… *Reconsiders* or maybe not, just to keep you in suspense.
January 7th, 2009 at 6:34 am
Oh, and btw, by saying, “Clover was my sis, after all,” didnt u mean either, “Castillia was my sis, after all,” or, “Clover was my name, after all.”
Just askin’ o.o?
January 7th, 2009 at 10:58 am
Huh? Oh, that. Zenna is actually Callista’s sister, but lost her memory and was taken in by the orphranage and was named Zenna. Callista has NO idea that Zenna is actually her beloved dead (she thinks) sister, Clover, whom which she named her organisation after.
Clear? Okay, maybe not.