Stay In Control ( A Songfic. ‘Disturbia’)

Summary: The song is Disturbia, Artemis is the main one it's talking about. It's based on the parts where in the TAC, when he was in his mind # 2.

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I was going through all of these different songs and this one reminded me of Arty’s Atlantis Complex. So I’m making that into my songfic. Thank you if you told me a song, but I really thought that this would be a great song for the complex theme. The song it’s called ‘Disturbia’ by  Rihanna. I hope you like it, the last one I made was terrible, I literally had to delete it. Also I underlined the parts that made me think that it was like the Complex.

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“Disturbia”   Inside Artemis’s head after Holly shot him the first time.

Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum
Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum
Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum
Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum

What’s wrong with me?
Why do I feel like this?
I’m going crazy now

Artemis woke up in a strange room, but it was familiar. It was his study, but there was the was a screen that wasn’t there before. ” I guess I’m in my head, oh that means that Orion guy is out there, that’s not good for anyone.” He thought. On the screen it looked like there was static, no it was pure white snow. Suddenly a set of eyes were on the screen, one blue and the other hazel. “I’m coming Holly!” Artemis yelled at the screen, then ran forward. But the wall screen didn’t let him pass, it shocked him and he fell to the ground.

No more gas in the rig
Can’t even get it started
Nothing heard, nothing said
Can’t even speak about it

All my life on my head
Don’t want to think about it
Feels like I’m going insane
Yeah

It’s a thief in the night
To come and grab you
It can creep up inside you
And consume you
A disease of the mind
It can control you
It’s too close for comfort

While he was on the ground he closed his eyes, breathed real hard. “I will not ever let this disease take over me! I need to take control of my mind, so it can’t take over me first.” Artemis thought over and over again. Suddenly there was a female voice in the strange room, it was Holly. ” Artemis wake up, we need you right now. Wake up, Artemis!” She said. So he got onto his knees and struggled to get up. When he was finally up he went to the back of the room and ran head first as fast as he could towards the screen.

Throw on your brake lights
We’re in the city of wonder
Ain’t gonna play nice
Watch out, you might just go under
Better think twice
Your train of thought will be altered
So if you must faulter be wise
Your mind is in disturbia
It’s like the darkness is the light

Disturbia
Am I scaring you tonight
Disturbia
Ain’t used to what you like
Disturbia
Disturbia

When he hit the wall, half of his body was sucked into it. While the back side was sticking out able for anything there to get him, if there was anything there. He wiggled trying to get free from the walls grip. Suddenly he felt something pulling him out little by little at a time. Then after a couple of pulls he was free, but when he look up he saw these red flying fours. They were flying straight for him. He noticed the desk in the room it had space below it, so he quickly ran to the other side of the room and hid under it.

Faded pictures on the wall
It’s like they talkin’ to me
Disconnectin’ your call
Your phone don’t even ring

I gotta get out
Or figure this stuff out
It’s too close for comfort

It’s a thief in the night
To come and grab you
It can creep up inside you
And consume you
A disease of the mind
It can control you
I feel like a monster

Throw on your brake lights
We’re in the city of wonder
Ain’t gonna play nice
Watch out, you might just go under

Better think twice
Your train of thought will be altered
So if you must faulter be wise
Your mind is in disturbia

It’s like the darkness is the light
Disturbia
Am I scaring you tonight
Disturbia
Ain’t used to what you like
Disturbia
Disturbia

After a couple of minutes of sitting under a small desk he looked up over the top of it, but just a little to see the flying things. They were all fours, not even a five to rely on to save him. He got up, closed his eyes again and yelled out with fear.” Your not going to take over me! I am the only one who has control of my mind, not you f.. fo..fou..fours!” Then everything went black and again he fell back to the cold floor of his mind.

Release me from this curse I’m in
Trying to maintain
But I’m struggling
You can’t go, go, go
I think I’m going to oh, oh, oh

Throw on your brake lights
We’re in the city of wonder
Ain’t gonna play nice
Watch out, you might just go under
Better think twice

Your train of thought will be altered
So if you must faulter be wise
Your mind is in disturbia
It’s like the darkness is the light

Disturbia
Am I scaring you tonight
Disturbia
Ain’t used to what you like
Disturbia
Disturbia

Slowly his eyes opened, he was somewhere els not that death trap of a mind Artemis called it. They were under water in a submarine. On his right side on the floor lay Holly his fair maiden, He turned his head forward, it was stiff he must have been like that for a while. When his head made it into the position to look forward he saw something that scared him more then the evil fours. It was…. Foalys behind. All was good he thought, also it was better for him to see his fair maiden safe. Or was she?

Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum
Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum
Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum
Bum bum be-dum bum bum be-dum bum

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Thank you sorry if there was any mistakes I was eating not a taco, but a blueberry muffin. Also I know it’s just like the plot of the one part from the book. But it went with it, also I went to the store today. They had chips that tasted like…. Tacos no for real! They were amazing. And Again thank you, I hope I don’t have to delete this one to. 🙂

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7 responses to “Stay In Control ( A Songfic. ‘Disturbia’).” Join in!

  1. artemis_fowl_the_second July 14th, 2011 at 2:20 am 1

    that’s really good 🙂 for a title how about, and i’m just spit-balling(not litteraly, it’s a saying) ‘disturbia’ yeah, since that’s the song you used…
    yeah there are some good taco chips, there are some that taste like tacos and some that don’t they taste like… ah this is a PG site… ah… poop! and i’m kinda surprised that you weren’t eating a taco, isn’t that like your main food sorce?(i’m just guessing)
    i only saw a few mistakes, i like the ending, very mysterious.
    oh and great details by the way.
    loved it 5/5 🙂

    Me Says
    I was reading some songs fics and won one them was the same song and they called it that. So I’m trying not to copie them even though thier gone. 🙂

  2. FantasyDevourer July 14th, 2011 at 6:04 am 2

    I agree with above: Disturbia

    Second comment! 😀

    Me Says:
    Ok I think I got it. I hope everyone does not just yell out ‘Disturbia’! 🙂

  3. Oh, nice job. This made sense, and the song went pretty well with the whole Atlantis Complex.
    Title… Hmmm… I agree. ‘Disturbia’

    (Gaaahhh! Short review!)

    Amber Says:
    Ok antother named it Disturbia. Got it. 🙂

  4. Ummmmmmmmmm. Well, it’s a good idea, but the style of writing is SO not Colfer, and Artemis is too painfully formal to think like that.

    Amber Says:
    Well…. First of all I’m not trying to be Colfer! Second of all No One and I mean no one would even try to write like him, because he is the best at that. And last you said that he was ‘too painfully formal to think like that.’ Remember he was under the complex so his mind was kinda messed up and all. Thats all I have to say to you. (Wow that was a long…. Reply!)

  5. sorry, i kinda just skimmed it cuz i’ve been off for a week or something and need to catch up on everything. what i got though, was that i liked it. great job! it really did go with atlantis complex. I do agree with everyone else that it should be disturbia for the title. if you don’t want that, though, you could use ‘stay in control’ or something. idk, i just thought of something fast. 5/s!

    Me Says:
    You know I’m going to use that! ‘Stay In Control’ thats great! 🙂

  6. in_love_with_Arty_6302 July 27th, 2011 at 7:51 pm 6

    Well, IS SHE??????!!!!!

    Amber Says:
    Did you read ‘The Atlantis Complex’ because it has the awsner in it.

  7. “Laid Holly ‘is’ fair maiden’

    only typo i could find! this is amazing!

    5/s

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