I Love You
Written on February 15th, 2008 by mayqueen17Story Details
- Category: General and Romance and Poetry/Songfictions
- Author: mayqueen17
- Word Count: 762
- Read 273 times
(10 votes, average: 3.8 out of 5)
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Happy Valentine’s Day to everybody here on AFC!!! I hope you don’t mind Arty acting very OOC in this! If anybody recognizes this, it’s because I’m the same person who wrote this I swear! Just letting you know! I hope you enjoy it!
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Artemis (much to his parents’ surprise) ran up on stage and whipsered something in Jonathan Chase’s ear and took the microphone from the stand. He looked nervously at Diana but took a deep breath, “Diana?” He paused for a brief moment to check her reaction. “I-I would l-like you to stay there a-and just listen.” He nodded to her brother who started to play.
Look into my eyes - you will see
What you mean to me
Search your heart - search your soul
And when you find me there you’ll search no more
Don’t tell me it’s not worth tryin’ for
You can’t tell me it’s not worth dyin’ for
You know it’s true
Everything I do - I do it for you
Look into my heart - you will find
There’s nothin’ there to hide
Take me as I am - take my life
I would give it all I would sacrifice
Don’t tell me it’s not worth fightin’ for
I can’t help it there’s nothin’ I want more
Ya know it’s true
Everything I do - I do it for you
Meanwhile, all of the fairies plus Juliet and Butler, stood there in the security room with their mouths wide open.Holly in a daze said, “Oh… my… God.”
Juliet nodded, “I gave him this idea, but I didn’t know he’d be so serious about it!”
Vinyaya raised an eyebrow at her, “I don’t know him that well, but he seems to always be serious… about everything.”
Everybody agreed with that statement and just listened.
There’s no love - like your love
And no other - could give more love
There’s nowhere - unless you’re there
All the time - all the way
Don’t tell me it’s not worth tryin’ for
I can’t help it there’s nothin’ I want more
I would fight for you - I’d lie for you
Walk the wire for you - Ya I’d die for you
Ya know it’s true
Everything I do - I do it for you
The chorus of ‘awwwwws’ and sobbing came after he finished and he beckoned Diana outside to the balcony opposite from the fairies. While Diana with a still beet red face grasped the railing.
Artemis took a breath and with a shaky voice, “D-Diana?” She looked at him with tear-brimmed eyes and nodded ever so slowly. “I-I want t-to let you know that…” He filled his lungs with air, “I love you.”
Diana’s eyes widened at the words and looked at Artemis with eyes filled with love, sincerity, and hope. They just staered into each other’s eyes until Artemis took a step forward and crushed his lips to hers, encapturing them in a passionate kiss. Both of them shutting down their minds and eyes, and he wrapped his arms around her waist and hers around his neck, not wanting to let go for anything.
When they pulled away from each other, Artemis kept his eyes closed and let the sweet strawberry taste dull his thoughts. It wasn’t until Diana placed her petal soft hand on his cheek did he open his eyes.
“Did you hear me?”
“…. No.”
Diana smiled and her emerald green eyes seemed to as well, “I said… I love you too.”
The teenaged couple smiled at each others as Diana pulled Artemis’ face to hers as they kissed once more, not knowing that the same thing was happening to another couple up above.
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On the roof, Cupid’s great granddaughter and Trouble were watching them from above. He looked at her, she looked at him. Trouble placed his hand on hers and Holly smiled. And they too, looked into each other’s eyes and got lost in the moment and made their lips touch. They both opened their eyes when they pulled away.
“H-H-Holly?”
“Yes, Trouble?”
“I-I-I…”
She laughed, “Spit it out!”
He looked at her all serious, “I love you.”
Her face went from happy to serious too. She scooted closer to him and kissed him. She only broke the kiss for a few moments to mumble, “I love you too.”
The two embraced while kissing each other and they didn’t let go until Diana and Artemis did… at the stroke of midnight.
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What did you think? Be honest!
February 15th, 2008 at 4:45 am
FCD OMG that was so cute! I love it! The perfect v-day story. Happy v-day by the way. I love this holiday!
February 15th, 2008 at 7:30 am
omg soooo cute!!!! i lurvv lovey dovey stufff….
February 15th, 2008 at 1:22 pm
Thanks! Happy V-Day to you guys too! You really think the shipper stuff is good? I don’t think so……
February 16th, 2008 at 12:06 am
AHHH!!! Sorry about that. I really am sort of creeped out by Artemis’s actions… Nice lines though.
February 16th, 2008 at 1:31 am
Like I said, Arty was gonna be VERY OOC in this!
February 18th, 2008 at 1:03 am
I’m new here so what does OOC mean?
February 18th, 2008 at 1:08 am
Outta charachter (Arty’s acting unlike himself)
February 18th, 2008 at 1:10 am
Mayqueen17…I LOVE YOU!! LOVE YOU!!! LOVE!!!
February 18th, 2008 at 3:43 pm
YOU’RE DEAD PEANUT (TWIN BROTHER)BUTTER!!!!
February 18th, 2008 at 3:44 pm
Why?
February 18th, 2008 at 3:50 pm
I saw you typing this under MY name today!!
February 18th, 2008 at 3:51 pm
ALL RIGHT IT IS THE TRUTH!!!!!
February 18th, 2008 at 3:51 pm
WOW! I LOVE THAT ITS SUCHA CUTE STORY! AAAWWWWWWW!!!! PERFECT FOR V-DAY! OH YEAH HAS ANYONE WATCHED THE SHOW ‘ FRUIT BASKET ‘YOU HAVE TOO ITS AWESUm!
February 18th, 2008 at 7:17 pm
OMG… and I was wondering why you said you “loved” Mayqueen17.
February 18th, 2008 at 9:38 pm
Yeah, my brother sucks.
February 18th, 2008 at 9:39 pm
HEY!!!i’M TELLING MOM!!!
February 18th, 2008 at 9:43 pm
You’ve been on your computer all day, haven’t you Peanut Butter *hackhackJerome*.
February 18th, 2008 at 9:44 pm
HEY!!!! YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO TELL MY NAME!!!!!
February 18th, 2008 at 9:45 pm
Whats FDC mean?
February 18th, 2008 at 10:12 pm
FCD is First Comment Dance.
And do not fight in the archive comments. Next time I am deleting your posts.
-BlackOpal
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This story was a little cutesy for me. Not as much substance as I’d like. It was just them telling each other they loved them, there wasn’t much else to the fic.
It was very well written though. It flowed well and was a good level of descriptive.
So I loved the writing, but the plot was sort of flat for me.
Still, good job.
February 19th, 2008 at 12:54 am
Oh, sorry about that BlackOpal, but this was my first time making a one-shot.
But thanks! I really appreciate that! (=^.^=)
February 19th, 2008 at 2:17 pm
Sorry.
February 19th, 2008 at 2:18 pm
Yeah, sorry.
February 21st, 2008 at 2:26 pm
Aw! Love it!
February 28th, 2008 at 12:55 pm
OMG!!! it was so totally AWESOME!! u must be related to Eoin Colfer 2 hav such good wrighting talents! plz plz plz continu!
March 4th, 2008 at 8:39 pm
OMG!!! You know you could’ve entered my comtest (it was valentine’s day themed). Anyway, I love this story so much!!! I just went Aaaaawww from beginning to end!
ps 5/5 well done!!!
March 5th, 2008 at 12:12 am
I’m sorry! I wrote this unfortunately two days after you announced the winner! T_T
March 17th, 2008 at 9:37 pm
This should B in comedy I was laughing and laughing i still am
June 7th, 2008 at 7:11 pm
It’s not funny! I sweet and beautiful. You put two of my favorite ships into one story! Artemis/OC, and H/T!
June 29th, 2008 at 6:14 pm
WHO IS DIANA!?
September 7th, 2008 at 2:39 pm
i’m a little over-mushed, but don’t worry, that’s just me. besides, you issued a warning!
8)