Human Concert
Written on May 13th, 2008 by English-MinervaStory Details
- Status : Incomplete
- Category: General
- Author: English-Minerva
- Word Count: 633
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“Hey you guys!” shouted Holly running into Foaly’s Operations Booth, she was waving an invitation in her hand, “Guess what we’re invited to! My cousin Emily goes to a human school and boy can she sing! She is having a concert at her school and we are all invited!” She was incredibly excited, she had a trick up her sleeve that she wanted to show everyone at the concert. “I only listen to Mozart, Holly, you know that. Minerva too.” answered Artemis, Minerva sat at the laptop next to him. “I don’t listen to music at all” replied Butler and Juliet simultainiously, they seemed to be doing that a lot. “I’m more into hoof-music.” said Foaly. “You lot are so BORING! Anyway you’re not going to be watching it… you’re going to be in it.” corrected Holly. She wondered what their response would be, she really wanted to go with Trouble as well, he was stood at the door. Everyone was silent. “All of you. Butler and Juliet are the bodygaurds, Foaly is the laser techni guy and Arty, Minerva, Me and Trubs are singing our own songs.” Still silence. More silence. “WHAT!?” they cried all of a sudden, it was loud enough for Root to come running in. “If you’re gonna shout do it somewhere else otherwise I have the orthority to arrest all of you!” he threatened, then stormed out. This was his usual mood. Even more silence. Holly was getting bored. “Well if you change your minds come and see me. Bye bye” She left. The rest gradually filtered away. Would they do the concert in front of humans? Could they sing? Could they be bothered? So many questions, 1 week to decide. Oh dear.
Read the next chapter to find out what happens! Coming soon
Some other stories by English-Minerva:
- Her Name Was Captain Holly Kelp
- I'll Have To Tell Her
- Hell Unleashed
- Opal Koboi II reveals secret about Root
- Letters



May 14th, 2008 at 1:26 am
Remove Sool from it, correct grammar/spelling, everyone’s VERY OOC, the story’s too random, and who says mega-excited anymore?
May 14th, 2008 at 2:25 pm
i do mega-excited if you gave it pharagraphs it would be betterother wise it was fine like star so rudely pointed out they are occ but hey everything does’t have to be perfect!
May 14th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
Thanks for the comments and I have taken them into account. Please give me more comments and I hope you like it. There will be another chapter so be warned!:p