His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!
Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(1 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...“You should be in the hospital.” Holly’s mother said.
Holly was listening through the wall, she could only make out what they said when one of them shouted.
“You’re not sending Holls away, all she did was the right thing!” her father yelled.
“Says who? Lets face it, I’ve had it. Your injured- don’t you get it? Your injury’s are going to effect you forever!”
“Who says?” he replied “I’ll check myself out of that stupid hospital in a minute of it means Holly’s going to be OK. She’s my daughter.”
Then they started to yell at each other.
“Dad’s injury… I thought it was a few broken bones.” she thought “What does mum mean effect him forever?”
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Holly woke up crying.. all that with the surface, and her Dad happened a week ago..he’d died from internal bleeding straight after she heard him say “my daughter.” He was so great, much cooler than her mum- he wasn’t even old! Only 190! But the doctors couldn’t do anything and she was going to Robyn House because he wasn’t there to fight her corner. She’d do it herself then! She’d show then how a like her and her Dad were. She was going to be quicker than quick. Faster than fast. Stronger than strong- no way was she going to sit around and cry. She remembered what Trouble’s Dad had said to her
“He didn’t die saving your friend in the hope you’d break done. No he knew you’d be OK. You will be Holly- I promise.”
AN: To make it clear-
Everything that happened BEFORE the bold print was a flash back. Don’t worry Trouble’s Dad’s right- She will be OK, she just has to learn how to fight for herself..
November 28th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!
November 28th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!
November 29th, 2007 at 11:52 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:09 am
oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)
November 30th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
*stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*
November 30th, 2007 at 11:10 pm
lol
December 3rd, 2007 at 10:09 am
omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?
December 4th, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK here is your theme song no one can here.
Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!
December 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
YAY!!!! plz update soon!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???
December 7th, 2007 at 8:18 am
ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:23 am
This is like my most favorite story!!!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:43 pm
Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time
December 28th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
sorry that makes NO sense-
I’ll try and update sooner. lol
December 31st, 2007 at 5:59 am
oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz
January 7th, 2008 at 4:24 am
hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:57 pm
hollyfly.gif- YAY!
January 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Updated!!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
which chapters? haw much did u update?
January 26th, 2008 at 1:40 pm
15 & 16 are new.
January 26th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:41 pm
very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:57 pm
I am a little confused but whatever!
oh and there r no words on 16.
May 10th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Like it, but the end was too sudden.
June 10th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
sequel soon