His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!
Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(1 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...“Trouble how do these things work?” Holly asked.
“Battery powered.” he replied “These are brilliant, nothing on the market can beat them.”
“BATTERY!” Holly thought. She pressed the emergency button and was plunging down at an unimaginable spead.
“Nothing can beat them huh?” she thought as she landed.
“Holly! You OK?” came a voice.
“I’m fine, you on the other hand are about to be killed. The batteries have gone flat.Oh and we are in … that’s right the middle of no where!” she spat.
“These things can charge themselves back up, besides as if the B’wa Kell are gonna come here- so no need to panic.”
“I’m not anyway how long do they take to charge?” she asked casually- how long could it be? 10 minutes maybe 15?
“Four hours.” Trouble answered.
Meanwhile…..
Hazel was sitting, her mind was thinking of the most horrific things. What if that happened to her ONLY daughter? She wouldn’t cope neither would her Dad- he was Holly’s idol. She would run to the other end of the Earth just to prove she was his daughter. She was athletic, brave and smart but it wasn’t what she thought her daughter would be like. Maybe Holly was everything she could never be.
“Have they found her?” she asked Foaly.
“Her Dad’s going to look for her.” he replied.
“He’s not being on a mission since he was injured six years ago!” she exclaimed.
“He’ll bring her home.” he replied.
“BUT WHAT IF HE CAN’T?” she cried- Hazel was not the type of woman to break down so suddenly.
“What if he doesn’t find her? She’ll be found by some mud man! She’s only 60, I wish he’d remember that.”
“I do.” he said as he came in “But she’s not a baby, she’s not a doll that you can dress up.”
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Holly woke up, it was daylight. She didn’t panic, her father would NEVER panic. She looked at the wings they were ready to go.
“Trouble.” she said walking over to him “Lets go, we’ll find your Dad and he’ll get us back. He can’t be far now.”
She strapped on the wings.
“You kiddin’ a know your the Commander’s daughter ‘n’ all that but it’ll be dangerous. The B’wa Kell will just be shooting at them. What if we got caught in the cross fire?” he asked her.
“I am not Hazel Trouble. I can fly faster than anyone else you know, I can do it!”
November 28th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!
November 28th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!
November 29th, 2007 at 11:52 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:09 am
oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)
November 30th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
*stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*
November 30th, 2007 at 11:10 pm
lol
December 3rd, 2007 at 10:09 am
omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?
December 4th, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK here is your theme song no one can here.
Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!
December 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
YAY!!!! plz update soon!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???
December 7th, 2007 at 8:18 am
ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:23 am
This is like my most favorite story!!!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:43 pm
Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time
December 28th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
sorry that makes NO sense-
I’ll try and update sooner. lol
December 31st, 2007 at 5:59 am
oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz
January 7th, 2008 at 4:24 am
hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:57 pm
hollyfly.gif- YAY!
January 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Updated!!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
which chapters? haw much did u update?
January 26th, 2008 at 1:40 pm
15 & 16 are new.
January 26th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:41 pm
very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:57 pm
I am a little confused but whatever!
oh and there r no words on 16.
May 10th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Like it, but the end was too sudden.
June 10th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
sequel soon