His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!
Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
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She had done it. For once she had disobeyed her mother it felt great! The surface was beautiful, she would see it nearly every day when she became part of the LEP- because it was going to happen despite what her mother said her done.
“Hey Short, come here.” Trouble shouted she ran over.
“What is it?” she asked.
“How about we go into the city.” he said.
“WHAT! We’d be seen!” she never thought it before but her mother was right- he was crazy!
“We can sheild. Why not? Still scared what mum’ll say? Besides my Dad’s got a mission there if anything goes wrong we’ll get help Hazel.”
“DON’T EVER CALL ME THAT! I’m Commander Short’s daughter, not hers. I’ve nothing to do with Hazel and just to prove it- I’ll go, in fact race you to it!”
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Hazel Short stormed into Police Plazza.
“Holly Short you idiot! You know our daughter!” she yelled at her ex-husband.
“I got that part, but she’s at home with you.” he replied.
“No she’s not, Trouble’s mother said Holly and THAT boy came here with THAT boy’s father!”
“Don’t be stupid, he’s got a mission- a highly dangerous one at that.” he replied.
Foaly came in he’d been listening to them. You’d would never have thought at one point they loved each other. Their daughter was the only reason they went near each other now. He knew Holly didn’t believe it but her mother did love her more than anyone as did her father.
“Actually Foaly began they were at Tara.” he began.
“What do you mean were at Tara?” her father asked.
“They’re not near it any more.”
“Your Holly is approching the B’wa Kell..” he explained.
Her mother started screaming in a high pitch. Then she managed to calm down so that he could sort of make out (through the wailing as)
“YOU……scream….GET..scream….HER…scream..BACK..scream…. OR..scream…YOU..scream…WILL BE…scream….DEAD AND…scream…BURRIED..scream….WITHIN AN….HOUR!”
November 28th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!
November 28th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!
November 29th, 2007 at 11:52 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:09 am
oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)
November 30th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
*stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*
November 30th, 2007 at 11:10 pm
lol
December 3rd, 2007 at 10:09 am
omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?
December 4th, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK here is your theme song no one can here.
Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!
December 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
YAY!!!! plz update soon!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???
December 7th, 2007 at 8:18 am
ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:23 am
This is like my most favorite story!!!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:43 pm
Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time
December 28th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
sorry that makes NO sense-
I’ll try and update sooner. lol
December 31st, 2007 at 5:59 am
oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz
January 7th, 2008 at 4:24 am
hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:57 pm
hollyfly.gif- YAY!
January 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Updated!!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
which chapters? haw much did u update?
January 26th, 2008 at 1:40 pm
15 & 16 are new.
January 26th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:41 pm
very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:57 pm
I am a little confused but whatever!
oh and there r no words on 16.
May 10th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Like it, but the end was too sudden.
June 10th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
sequel soon