His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!

Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxx

Story Details

“Just come and stay with me- Dad’ll be away with Saphire all half term.” Tiff suggested as they sat in the school dinning hall. The food was as bad as ever!

“Are you kidding? My mum’ll be waiting at the gate in case I try and escape punishment! Who’s saphire?” Holly sighed.

” My Step mum- the 13th this decade! I’ve not met her but according to my Dad she’ll be able to relate to me- she’s probabally the same age as me! I know exactly what she’ll be like. I know how she’ll act. I know what she’ll say and when she’ll say it.  Statistics and past expeirence show she’ll call me Tiffany or THAT kid, giggle at ANYTHING, do nothing but shop, divorce my poor Dad within a year and walk away with millions!  Seriously you’d think he’d learn!”

“Sorry I wish I could be at half term- I’m going to try and see an old friend.I’ve got dentention I better go.” she replied

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29 Reviews for “His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!”

  1. lbutler Says:

    I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!

  2. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
    ( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!

  3. 017350 Says:

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!

  4. A very angry Jelly. Y CAN"T I LOGIN?!?!?!?! Says:

    oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!! :lol:

  5. xxemxx Says:

    before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!

  6. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)

  7. Jello Says:

    It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!

  8. Jello Says:

    *stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*

  9. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    lol

  10. lil.arty Says:

    omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?

  11. Jelly Says:

    OK here is your theme song no one can here.
    Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!

  12. Jelly Says:

    YAY!!!! plz update soon!

  13. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???

  14. lil.arty Says:

    ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!

  15. Jelly Says:

    This is like my most favorite story!!!

  16. xxemxx Says:

    Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time

  17. xxemxx Says:

    sorry that makes NO sense-
    I’ll try and update sooner. lol

  18. lil.arty Says:

    oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz

  19. Jelly Says:

    hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!

  20. xxemxx Says:

    I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!

  21. Jelly Says:

    hollyfly.gif- YAY!

  22. xxemxx Says:

    Updated!!

  23. Jelly Says:

    which chapters? haw much did u update?

  24. xxemxx Says:

    15 & 16 are new.

  25. shanette Says:

    wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
    I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!

  26. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!

  27. Jelly Says:

    I am a little confused but whatever! :D oh and there r no words on 16.

  28. Steven Says:

    Like it, but the end was too sudden.

  29. xxemxx Says:

    sequel soon

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