His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!
Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(1 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...“What would my Dad do?” she thought as she looked back at Robyn House. She walked forward faster.
“Where are we going?” Charlotte asked.
Holly didn’t reply. She was doing something highly illegal but she owed Tiff one also there was something inside her made her WANT to do this.
Holly stopped at the side of the road knowing eventually someone would stop. Charlotte started to moan.
“I’m tired, what are we doing? For fronds sake how much longer? By the way- someone will spot me. I’m a Robyn!”
This was a good point. Holly had already thought about it.
“Put your hood up on that stupid jacket and wear these.” she said passing her a pair of glasses. Without the blonde-hair-blue-eyes combo she wouldn’t be recognised. A shuttle pulled up and a woman rolled down the window.
“Hey girls, need a lift.”
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“Your mad!” Charlotte declared “I mean- BREAKING in to someone’s house!”
“I’m not- this is mine. My mother has the stupid necklace OK! After that I’ll take you up to see it. We’ll be back by tomorrow got it? Now just shut up.”
Charlotte stood outside the house and watched Holly sneak round the side.
Meanwhile…
Hazel Short sat listening to the evening news- some girl had dissappeared from Robyn’s House. Her name was Catherine no Cara..well it began with a C anyway. She heard a bang.
“What was that?” she thought. She got off the couch and looked out the back. Nothing seemed wrong until she saw the ladder fall to the ground.
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“That’s twice that’s happened! Stupid ladder!” Holly thought as pulled herself through the window. Her mother hadn’t wasted anytime in getting rid of her. There wasn’t a sign she’d ever been here. She walked down the hall and into her mother’s room. The woman was so predictable! The necklace was in the second drawer of the cabinet.
” My Dad always told me she never changes.” Holly thought as she heard footsteps.
“Whoever you are!” came a voice “Come out!” I mean it!
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November 28th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!
November 28th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!
November 29th, 2007 at 11:52 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:09 am
oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)
November 30th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
*stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*
November 30th, 2007 at 11:10 pm
lol
December 3rd, 2007 at 10:09 am
omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?
December 4th, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK here is your theme song no one can here.
Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!
December 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
YAY!!!! plz update soon!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???
December 7th, 2007 at 8:18 am
ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:23 am
This is like my most favorite story!!!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:43 pm
Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time
December 28th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
sorry that makes NO sense-
I’ll try and update sooner. lol
December 31st, 2007 at 5:59 am
oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz
January 7th, 2008 at 4:24 am
hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:57 pm
hollyfly.gif- YAY!
January 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Updated!!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
which chapters? haw much did u update?
January 26th, 2008 at 1:40 pm
15 & 16 are new.
January 26th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:41 pm
very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:57 pm
I am a little confused but whatever!
oh and there r no words on 16.
May 10th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Like it, but the end was too sudden.
June 10th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
sequel soon