His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!
Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(1 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...Holly was going to beat Charlotte at her own game. Or at least try…. she wasn’t sure how it was going to work exactly.
Charlotte had made her the offer (well she didn’t really deal in “offer’s”-demands were more her thing). Charlotte figured that if there was a map engraved on a bit of metal to THIS old house (Fowl Manor) there would be one to everyone-including Robyn’s Castle (known to everyone outside the Robyn family as “the nest”). It was a grand house on the surface and was completly isolated. Charlotte simply wanted Holly to sneak out, get her the map and take her to it.
In return she would cut a deal and get Tiff out of detention. One slight catch…Holly was planning on getting caught so she’d be thrown out of the school and be rid of it. Charlotte would NEVER get near the surface.
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“You so copied that goal!” Tiff told her impressed “You done it the EXACT same way Thomas did in last year’s cup final, cross it over play it back and then suddenly kick with the left straight in!”
“Yeah my dad showed me how..” she stopped. This was wrong, sinking to a level Charlotte would.
“Cheat” said a voice in her head “Thought the great commander’s daughter could handle this school.”
Holly sighed she knew what she was going to have to do- what she promised Charlotte and go to the surface.
An hour later..
Charlotte’s POV
I do not wait! I simply don’t. Robyn’s have never had to and I am a Robyn. If my pretty blue eyes, golden curly hair, slim frame and light brown skin didn’t tell you then the designer clothes will!
“Flawless.” I say out loud, after all I am clever, pretty and every girl would do anything to be for a minute. I want to see if there’s anything worth while having still in our home. Not that or several other homes aren’t filled with the most amazing things- it’s like something out of a dream world. Plus I’ve never been to the surface and the rest of the family have. Mummy and Daddy better take me there! They give me everything I want because I’m their princess. Although mummy did say “no” when I was 45. Imagine my embrassment when I had to walk out of the store empty handed. I called Daddy and made her pay. She learned her lesson and has yet to disobey me again.
I’ve really had enough now. Waiting for her- doesn’t she know who I am? Here comes that scruffy, scrawny girl now.
I wonder what took her so long.
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“You used to go to a posh school didn’t you?” Chix asked the new girl.
This was a stupid question. There were 3 school’s- Haven Acadmey, Atlantis Secondray and Robyn House. You don’t go to a posh school, you go to THE only posh school.
“Yes but at half term mother told me she simply wasn’t sending me there. I often wonder if she’s had some sort of menatl breakdown- sending me HERE!”
“Snob.” Trouble thought until he actually thought about what she said.
“What’s half term?” he asked her.
“It’s in 4 months- the pupils go home from the school for a week.” she replied.
He couldn’t believe his luck. Just four months..
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November 28th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!
November 28th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!
November 29th, 2007 at 11:52 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:09 am
oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)
November 30th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
*stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*
November 30th, 2007 at 11:10 pm
lol
December 3rd, 2007 at 10:09 am
omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?
December 4th, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK here is your theme song no one can here.
Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!
December 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
YAY!!!! plz update soon!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???
December 7th, 2007 at 8:18 am
ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:23 am
This is like my most favorite story!!!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:43 pm
Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time
December 28th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
sorry that makes NO sense-
I’ll try and update sooner. lol
December 31st, 2007 at 5:59 am
oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz
January 7th, 2008 at 4:24 am
hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:57 pm
hollyfly.gif- YAY!
January 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Updated!!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
which chapters? haw much did u update?
January 26th, 2008 at 1:40 pm
15 & 16 are new.
January 26th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:41 pm
very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:57 pm
I am a little confused but whatever!
oh and there r no words on 16.
May 10th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Like it, but the end was too sudden.
June 10th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
sequel soon