His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!
Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(1 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...Charlotte left it after that, she gave her the necklace back.
“Probabally plotting. The brat, the filthy rich brat, the stupid selfish…” Holly thought.
Tiff was snapping her fingers in front of Holly when she came out of her daydream.
“Are you gonna eat that or turn it into a liquid? You’ve been sitting starring at it for ages!” Tiff laughed.
“I’ll leave it, why is the food here so bad?” Holly asked.
Tiff shrugged her shoulders flicking her dark hair- it was her response for a lot of things. One of the teachers gave her detention for it for a month! She’d launched into a lecture about
“Don’t you dare! You answer me young lady (..)! For your lack of self discpline a month’s detention!”
When Holly pointed out it wasn’t fair (she hadn’t punished Charlotte for the same thing!) she gave her lines. Robyn’s House more like Witch Castle….
Tiff left to go to prison no …detention service. Holly left lifting the heavy bag,and slowly walked down the corridors. She looked out of the window. It was dark already and she had an essay to finish. There was no way she was going back to her room to watch Charlotte turn the room into something out of a fashion magazine. Holly looked down at her feet and her badly damaged shoes- they looked as old as the building! She was trying not to get bored or think about her Dad, she had enough to deal with when something caught her eye. A coin!
No student was allowed money, someone must have dropped it. She ran to the pay phone (used only by staff) and dialed a number she’d known off by heart since she was little.
“Hey it’s the Kelps…” the answering machine began. She punched the wall in furstration. She didn’t bother leaving a message.
“Hey Polly.” came a sweet girly voice- Charlotte “I’ve got a deal for you.”
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Kelps Home.
“Will someone get that phone?” Trouble called.
No one did he went into the menu to find out where the call had came from.
He looked at the bold print and guilt swept over him
THE LAST NUMBER TO CALL WAS- 072467 09762- ROBYN’S HOUSE
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November 28th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!
November 28th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!
November 29th, 2007 at 11:52 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:09 am
oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)
November 30th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
*stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*
November 30th, 2007 at 11:10 pm
lol
December 3rd, 2007 at 10:09 am
omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?
December 4th, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK here is your theme song no one can here.
Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!
December 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
YAY!!!! plz update soon!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???
December 7th, 2007 at 8:18 am
ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:23 am
This is like my most favorite story!!!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:43 pm
Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time
December 28th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
sorry that makes NO sense-
I’ll try and update sooner. lol
December 31st, 2007 at 5:59 am
oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz
January 7th, 2008 at 4:24 am
hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:57 pm
hollyfly.gif- YAY!
January 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Updated!!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
which chapters? haw much did u update?
January 26th, 2008 at 1:40 pm
15 & 16 are new.
January 26th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:41 pm
very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:57 pm
I am a little confused but whatever!
oh and there r no words on 16.
May 10th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Like it, but the end was too sudden.
June 10th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
sequel soon