His daughter (Updated)-6/2/08!
Written on November 28th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
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“Ow.” Holly said laughing before she punched her Dad back.
“I would prefer you taught our daughter how NOT to get into a fight in the first place.” Holly’s mother said to her.
“C’mon Mum… it’s only…” Holly began.
“ENOUGH! Bed Holly, OK?” her mother snapped.
“It’s only 8 Hazel, you can’t be serious she’s 60.” her father tried to argue.
“Holly get up stairs this instant!” she yelled at her. Holly heard her Dad leave, she wished she could stay with him.
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Holly lay on her bed throwing the cruchball off the wall and letting it bounce back to her. Why was her mum so against her having any fun? Her phone started ringing.
“Holly if that’s Touble Kelp you don’t even think about answering it!” her mother called.
“It’s.. Lili Frond.” she lied and her mother shut up- Lili was the kind of girl she wanted her daughter to be friends with and not Trouble- he was like Holly.
“Hey Trouble.” she answered.
“What took you so long?” he asked.
“I’m at my mum’s not my Dad’s idiot- what do you think?” she snapped.
“Hey calm down Hazel. Anyway meet me round at my house.”
“DON’T CALL ME THAT! I’m not like my mum, anyway I can’t you know she doesn’t even let me train when I’m staying at hers.” she sighed- yeah staying with her Dad in Haven would be much better than here.
“I thought you wanted to be in the LEP? I thought you hated always doing exactly as she told you?”
“Fine I’ll be there.” she said before she threw the phone away.
“Maybe I shouldn’t…” she thought before she remembered her mother screaming her name.
“Holly, are you listening? Holly you know you haven’t a chance of getting into the LEP, Holly behave, your only a little girl, you’re so like you Dad! HOLLY! HOLLY!”
That’s all she ever said! Holly shoved on the dirty old trainners she wore for crunchball. She opened her window before she jumped out onto the shed roof and climbed down the ladder when she got to the ground it clattered behind her.
“Holly Short- what have you done?” she heard her mother storm upstairs. She ran opened the back gate, not feeling a pang of guilt. She ran threw street after street. They all looked identical so borning.
“What do you expect it is the suburbs?” Holly thought before she got to Trouble’s street. She didn’t knock she’d been at the messy house a million times before. She’d even met all of his seven siblings. She went in.
“What’s kept you Short?” Trouble asked.
“Nothing! Now why did you want me to come over?” she asked.
“Y’ know my Dad’s in the LEP right? Well said he was gonna take me to the surface- want to come?”
“YOU BET!” she said in a way typical of Lili Frond.
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“Holly?” her mother called “You better have your room tided!”
She never answered. She went upstairs.
“Holly Annabella Short..” she said before she opened the door.
“Holly? Holly?” she said going around her room in a blind panic “Holly? Holls? Holly Darling?”
She looked out of the window- she saw the ladder. She wasn’t stupid, she was no longer worried but she was furious.
“HOLLY!”
She went downstairs and knew where she’d be. She was going to make sure her daughter learned her lesson this time.
AN: I’ll update soon, I don’t anything except Hazel Short and Holly’s Dad.
November 28th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
I like it keep going holly’s dad sounds cool!
November 28th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
totally awesome story , can u plz continue it?pwetty pweze? ( SWEET FACE?) Now?
( You answer - not now!) *Grrrrr*( Meen ugly face!) I SAID NOW AND I MEEN NOW!!!!!
November 29th, 2007 at 11:52 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT’S SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:09 am
oooooooooooohhhh I have never seen anything like this before! It is such a good idea! I can’t WAIT for more!!!!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:11 pm
before you read Chapter 4 and decide to kill me, it’s not what it seems!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:36 pm
god… NO!!!okay , i still wanna hear what happens next, tell me what happens ! ( I mean u must continue)
November 30th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
It hit a bird who hit her head right??!?!?!?! How can I survive with the suspense?!?!?! I am getting fat here waiting for the 5th chapter! U MUST CONTINUE SOON!
November 30th, 2007 at 10:59 pm
*stares @ crackers guiltily and feeds them to dog*
November 30th, 2007 at 11:10 pm
lol
December 3rd, 2007 at 10:09 am
omg luv this story….u always do magnificent ones…is it her father who got shot ??? coz coz coz yea….is it?
December 4th, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK here is your theme song no one can here.
Dun dun dew dun dun dew dew dun dun dew dew doo doo dun dun dee dee goo goo ga ga jun jun jun jun jun whoooooooooooooooo YEAH! *jazz hands* so how do you like it? GOOD! NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!
December 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
YAY!!!! plz update soon!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
yeah , im kinda confused , but the thing is she left , and and then her dad got arrested? wuhh???
December 7th, 2007 at 8:18 am
ohhhh….he died…..plzzzz update this is goooooOoOoOOOOOd!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:23 am
This is like my most favorite story!!!
December 28th, 2007 at 8:43 pm
Thanks to all those who have reviewed I’ll trying and update sooner next time
December 28th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
sorry that makes NO sense-
I’ll try and update sooner. lol
December 31st, 2007 at 5:59 am
oh a map to artys! continue…plzzzzzz
January 7th, 2008 at 4:24 am
hmmm…. How does she know about Artemis Fowl already? Why wouldn’t holly just sneak out and run to Trouble’s? WhERe aRe THEY? Y AM I SCREAMING? so many questions! I hope u continue soon!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:53 pm
I’ll update “Grow up” soon. Thanks to everyone who has reviewed!
January 9th, 2008 at 8:57 pm
hollyfly.gif- YAY!
January 23rd, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Updated!!
January 25th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
which chapters? haw much did u update?
January 26th, 2008 at 1:40 pm
15 & 16 are new.
January 26th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
wow, that was really good. It had a really interesting plot.
I LIKED IT ALOT! UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:41 pm
very intresting plot , I LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!
January 26th, 2008 at 4:57 pm
I am a little confused but whatever!
oh and there r no words on 16.
May 10th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Like it, but the end was too sudden.
June 10th, 2008 at 8:52 pm
sequel soon