Highschool years

Written on September 18th, 2007 by Vinyaya

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  • Author: Vinyaya
  • Word Count: 2405
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The next day, Holly was sitting on her bed trying to pluck up the courage to leave the dorm. Lili hadn’t come back last night. She had probably stayed in Troubles room. Her face burned with jealousy. Everyone was against her. Opal was Lili’s friend and Trouble hated her now.
She walked down the stairs towards the main Hall. She strode into the canteen. Everyone stopped talking when they saw her, all of them wearing similar expressions of disgust on their faces. She gritted her teeth and walked over towards the serving area.
She spent the day in a blur of alienation and misery. The only people who talked to her were the really sleazy guys. They didn’t care how crazy a girl was, as long as she was hot. She didn’t see Trouble at all that day.
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Over the next few weeks Holly didn’t speak to anyone but she didn’t see Lili and Trouble together at all. This was little comfort though because on top of her worries and complete collapse of social life she was failing in three subjects. She no longer had Trouble to help her with military tactics because he had switched places with a sprite.
 The sprite was another of her worries. His name was Chix Verbil and he was a complete nuisance. But she had nowhere to sit so she ended up sitting with him and his horrible pervert mates at lunch. She had even stopped styling her hair.
She was always quite proud of it before but now it was a messy shoulder length piece of rag. This was to do with the pervert boys always hitting on her. She fervently hoped Chix and his gang would not make it passed the first year exam, that was if she made it. Not likely, she had to admit. Holly Short was thoroughly depressed.
It was not until first period Monday that she really lost it though. Chix was his normal sleazy self all period. After Military tactics though, things started to get nasty. He grabbed her by the arm and pulled her into a tight and very uncomfortable hug. The he started kissing her. He pushed her roughly into a cupboard and then followed her in. He grabbed her hands and pushed them away and placed kisses along her neck. When she tried to remove him though, he pushed harder. She pleaded with him to let her go.
“I thought you were all into violence darling.” He muttered sleazily.
“HELP!!!!!!!!!!”
“No use screaming darling, everyone’s in class…”
That’s when Trouble opened the door.
“Not everyone.” And he knocked Chix out cold.

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59 Reviews for “Highschool years”

  1. Vinyaya Says:
    September 18th, 2007 at 5:37 pm

    soz i will fix it later…and put it inot chappies…

  2. captainshort101 Says:
    September 18th, 2007 at 7:27 pm

    hm…. this sounds alot like mine. but then again mine sounded alot like yours. now im confused. Its really good, except for a lot of cursing.

    4.99/5

  3. captainshort101 Says:
    September 18th, 2007 at 7:30 pm

    and i dont picture chix like that. but anyway…

  4. lbutler Says:
    September 18th, 2007 at 8:13 pm

    nice i like it!!!

  5. 1crazyhollyfan Says:
    September 18th, 2007 at 11:48 pm

    i love you vinyaya!!! that came out really wrong…i love yer storys

  6. bpqq Says:
    September 19th, 2007 at 12:55 am

    i love it, been waiting for u to add on to the orginal one lol.And plz o plz dont make me wait for the next one! ill go crazy -.-

  7. Jade Malice Says:
    September 19th, 2007 at 2:19 am

    Vinyaya it was very good. Personally I didn’t mind the cursing. It added quite a lot of color. However I wouldn’t think Holly one to give up so easily. Please continue if you don’t I’m going on strike and won’t write a single story until you do! :D

  8. lil.arty Says:
    September 19th, 2007 at 6:52 am

    another highschool storie!!! YAY.
    can’t wait until u add more

  9. Unappreciated genius Says:
    September 19th, 2007 at 8:52 am

    Vinyaya- i have to say. your one of the most talented writers on here.

  10. Vinyaya Says:
    September 19th, 2007 at 4:13 pm

    thanx all but i’m afraid i have to delete the swearing or the story will be deleted brb!

  11. Vinyaya Says:
    September 19th, 2007 at 5:04 pm

    there and i also spilt it into chappies!

  12. Jade Malice Says:
    September 20th, 2007 at 2:31 am

    I really like this! Vinyaya please continue. Gah! I’m like you and Holly’s biggest fan! :D

  13. Vinyaya Says:
    September 20th, 2007 at 7:18 pm

    as am i yours!

  14. artyrox Says:
    September 23rd, 2007 at 10:10 pm

    ok i cant quite imagine chix in that manner but overall id say it was an excellent piece of writing much like ur previous ones.Keep up the good work and you’ll go far (geez i sound like one of those weird life couches who ses keep this going and you’ll go far) any way seriously id say that ur practically famous on this site :)

  15. Vinyaya Says:
    September 25th, 2007 at 9:19 pm

    lol thanx!

  16. luv-artygirl Says:
    September 27th, 2007 at 4:37 am

    ohhhh!!!I AM JUST SOOOOO IMPATIENT!!! KEEP ADDING!!! please? I WILL TRY TO WAIT BUT WELL…..;)

  17. Vinyaya Says:
    September 27th, 2007 at 5:17 pm

    ok i will add tonight!

  18. Jelly Says:
    September 29th, 2007 at 8:59 pm

    I like it but Chix is a little ooc

  19. Holly Short 999999999 Says:
    October 1st, 2007 at 11:21 pm

    Do you think that Chix is starting to get really wierd? I can not imagine the real Chix doing that. Is he really that sleazy in this story? I like, but I am kinda confused about the Chix part.

  20. Jelly Says:
    October 2nd, 2007 at 11:03 pm

    CONTINUE SOON!

  21. Jelly Says:
    October 8th, 2007 at 3:02 am

    dude continue!

  22. Vinyaya Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 7:17 pm

    ok lol

  23. Lilly Frond Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 8:54 pm

    this is sooo good r u goning to continue today?

  24. Vinyaya Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 8:57 pm

    oh go one then.

  25. Lilly Frond Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 9:07 pm

    plz continue!!

  26. Lilly Frond Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 9:08 pm

    What?

  27. HOLLYRULZ!! Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 9:54 pm

    Ok how did she break her leg? and second when was she invited to a party plz explain.

  28. Vinyaya Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 10:01 pm

    i will in the next chappy be patient lol…

  29. HOLLYRULZ!! Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 10:04 pm

    Okidookie I will try to obbtain that virtue.
    *snicker* like that’s gonna happen! :)

  30. MMK Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 10:15 pm

    Have I really never reviewed this before? I guess not, which is weird, because I’ve read it and I definitely like it. Romances are not really my thing, but this is a very good story. I really like how you don’t portray either Holly or Trouble as perfect- they often get overcute in these types of stories.

  31. HOLLYRULZ!! Says:
    October 9th, 2007 at 10:17 pm

    definetly.

  32. Vinyaya Says:
    October 10th, 2007 at 4:42 pm

    Yeah in my earlier stories holly and trouble are definatley too cute. In the actual books though holly is a grumpy little sod most of the time.

  33. BlackOpal Says:
    October 10th, 2007 at 8:48 pm

    I really like it… it is a bit too cutesy for my general taste, but every now and again I like some pure fluff.
    Maybe add another element, something a little less happy, just to add depth to the story. You don’t really need too, but if you want to make it a novel length fic then that might help. And maybe make Holly a little bit more feisty. I just love how prickly she can be sometimes.
    Good job, keep it up! Definitely one of the better H/T’s out there. (Not that they aren’t all great, I just like this one a lot).

  34. Vinyaya Says:
    October 10th, 2007 at 9:15 pm

    uh this isn’t gonna end up an h/t lol i never said who she was snogging…

  35. 1crazyhollyfan Says:
    October 11th, 2007 at 3:30 am

    Lol, great as usual! From your biggest fan, you have done a great job!!!!

  36. kiwi Says:
    October 13th, 2007 at 11:13 pm

    NO I’M HER BIGGEST FAN!!

  37. katya345b Says:
    October 14th, 2007 at 2:49 am

    love ur story but it would be better if you could hurry up and add on!!!!

  38. Vinyaya Says:
    October 14th, 2007 at 10:00 am

    ok lol how bout you tie for biggest fan?

  39. Jelly Says:
    October 16th, 2007 at 11:54 pm

    NEVER! i am your BIGGEST fan EVER!

  40. Vinyaya Says:
    October 21st, 2007 at 3:37 pm

    *sighs* whatever i can have a fan club i suppose lol…

  41. Jelly Says:
    October 26th, 2007 at 5:32 am

    I shall be the leader and we will stalk you!

  42. Vinyaya Says:
    October 26th, 2007 at 4:30 pm

    lol. How? I live in scotland remember!

  43. Jelly Says:
    October 26th, 2007 at 6:24 pm

    Well… I guess I could steal a plane from the untited Italian Airport and then some how get to the U.K. unless my followers don’t live in Italy that could be a problem…
    CONTINUE!

  44. lil.arty Says:
    October 27th, 2007 at 10:19 am

    uh Jelly….why don’t you just buy a ticket to scotland? much easier :) hee hee i’ll come. (im not stalkin anyone thou) lol

  45. Jelly Says:
    October 27th, 2007 at 5:53 pm

    I thought that stealing a plane from Italy to Scotland would be much easier I mean no security! lol plus it would have so much adrenaline rush! :)

  46. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    October 31st, 2007 at 3:43 am

    I really liked the story , I really wish u’de continue.

  47. Vinyaya Says:
    October 31st, 2007 at 5:51 pm

    ok lol but i am starting to get scared!!! i thought i was safe on my little united kingdom island!!

  48. Jelly Says:
    October 31st, 2007 at 9:42 pm

    lol ohhh that’s funny! safe from people like me!

  49. lil.arty Says:
    November 5th, 2007 at 1:14 am

    i think no one is ever goin to be safe from jelly….she will always find a WAY!!
    lol

  50. Jelly Says:
    November 5th, 2007 at 1:24 am

    Dun dun dun dan dun dun dun dun dan dan dweedele dee dweeldle dee doooooooooooo! My new theme song! pretty spyish huh? oh wait you can’t hear it! Oh well! :)

  51. luv-artygirl Says:
    November 9th, 2007 at 4:24 pm

    We(probably)won’t stalk you if you keep ON WRITN’!I’m not sure about Jelly.Just keep the updates and stories a-comin’!

  52. lil.arty Says:
    November 10th, 2007 at 9:43 am

    lol write stories or get stalked by a person with a theme song that we can’t hear

  53. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    November 11th, 2007 at 9:37 pm

    lol

  54. Jelly Says:
    November 11th, 2007 at 10:08 pm

    plz continue? *puppy dog eyes* *turns evil*
    :evil: NOW!!!! grrrr.

  55. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    November 11th, 2007 at 11:39 pm

    lol again , PLZ CONTINUE , PLLLLZZ UR A TOATLLY AWESOME WRITER! and i neeeeedd to read ur stories!!

  56. Jelly Says:
    November 16th, 2007 at 2:15 am

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  57. MylesandBeckett Says:
    March 24th, 2008 at 3:40 am

    Hola, i like the story, especily the SOS part

    P.S. how do u do the smile?

  58. lil.arty Says:
    March 24th, 2008 at 4:40 am

    wat smile ?? :) :D :( :’(

  59. lil.arty Says:
    March 24th, 2008 at 4:56 am

    wait a moment….i only jsut read hapter 6……NO!! THAT CANT BE THE ENDING!!! theres to many opitunities for good ideas!!! reconsider???

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