Highschool years
Written on September 18th, 2007 by VinyayaStory Details
(25 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
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Trouble Kelp gazed up at the LEP academy. He swallowed nervously. I hope this is the right decision. He thought noticing a girl walking past him. She had short red hair and a very good figure. Oh for heavens sake. Already got a crush. He sighed. Then he strode over to her.
” Hey! Your first day too? ”
” Erm yes. What class have you got first? ”
” Eh… I think I have Military tactics with Vinyaya.”
” Hey same! Looks like we have identical classes! ” She said holding her timetable up to his.
” I’m Trouble. Trouble Kelp.”
” Trouble? Nice! I’m Holly Short.” As she spoke Trouble stared at her lips. They were red cute bow lips, very cherubic and beautiful. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Stop staring at her lips!!!!!
” Hey Trubs!” Called his younger brother, Grub. Trouble blushed furiously.
” Don’t call me Trubs!!!!!”
” Ehh… I’m gonna go and leave you two to your cat fight…” Said Holly smirking.
” No wait! This is Grub, my younger brother. We have to go now Grub bye!” Said Trouble in a rush. Then he strode of towards the academy. Holly looked at Grub, smiled and then followed after Trouble. He is very nice looking! she thought, smiling. Then realized what she had just thought and frowned. Trouble turned around and smiled at her. Her heart gave a flutter. You can’t be serious. She thought smiling back. Him?
They walked towards the academy talking mainly about cruchball an their aspirations in the LEP. Trouble said that he wanted to be part of LEP retrieval. Then he asked Holly what she wanted to do. Probably something easy like traffic. He thought. The LEP had good pay so many girls were hired to do traffic duty and that was about it.
” I want to be in Recon.”
” Recon? Good for you! I’ve never heard of a girl getting into Recon! Maybe you will be the first!”
” You know that you are the first person ( including my family) to not say ‘ You? In Recon? Keep dreaming girl!’ I appreciate it.” She said grinning. She liked this Trouble guy. He was open minded. They walked into the main hall and went over to a woman bustling about with a clip board.
” Holly Short?” Said the woman.
” Yes.”
” Your dorm is up the stairs, first door on the right. And you are?” She said looking at Trouble.
” Trouble Kelp. ”
” Follow miss Short but take the first door on the left. She ticked their names of on her clip board. Both of you report down to here in an hour for your first classes.”
*****
About 45 minutes later, there came a tentative knock on Holly’s door. ” Holly?” He poked his head around the door to see Holly sitting on her bed. There were two other girls in the room.
” Oh, hi Trouble! This is Lili Frond and Opal Koboi. My roommates.”
” Eh, Hi. I was just wondering if you wanted to sit with me in military tactics?”
” Yeah sure that sounds great!” She said giving him a dazzling smile. He nodded and then closed the door, leaning, with his back against it saying a silent thank you prayer. That is when Holly opened the door. Needless to say, trouble fell backwards on top of her.
He stammered a hasty sorry, and rushed out of the door. Holly leant up on her elbows and looked at Lili and Opal, who were whispering and giggling. ” What are you whispering about?” said Holly.
” Nothing, just that it is so obvious that you are in love and so is he.” Said Lili smiling.
” I… I don’t-”
” Come off it Holly, we’re just admiring your good taste.” Said Opal with a know-it-all grin on her face.
Holly sat there staring for a minute then grinned sheepishly.” Maybe I do then.”
*****
Trouble slid into the seat Holly had saved for him. ” Listen, I’m really sorry about the door thing, I really am, I-”
” It’s fine, don’t worry about. Actually, it was pretty funny.” Trouble blushed from his toes to the tips of his pointed ears. Then the lesson started and they had to be quiet.
‘ Do u get any ov this?’ wrote Trouble on a corner of his jotter.
‘ Yeah u hav 2 match up the weapons with the names lol’
‘ I know but i don’t know any ov them lol’
‘ Copy me then lmao’
Unfortunately at that moment Vinyaya decided to walk around the desks and check their work.
” Mr Kelp?”
” Yes Miss?”
” What is the meaning of this?”
” Emm…”
” I’m sorry to have to give you a detention on the first day, but perhaps it will drum the importance of independent work into you. You too Miss Short. After school detention for both of you. One Hour. My room. ”
“Yes miss.” They said morosely.
‘Ooops.’ wrote Trouble.
‘ u do realize what we r gettin a detention 4 ?’
‘ well we can’t get in any deeper in the poo so doesn’t matter lol’
‘ b seein u after skool 2 day then ’
‘ its a date 
‘
I wish… Thought Holly.
Some other stories by Vinyaya:
- Trouble, on Holly and Artemis
- In The End
- Talent
- Aphrodite ~The Adventure Continues~
- The Holly Short Novellas
September 18th, 2007 at 5:37 pm
soz i will fix it later…and put it inot chappies…
September 18th, 2007 at 7:27 pm
hm…. this sounds alot like mine. but then again mine sounded alot like yours. now im confused. Its really good, except for a lot of cursing.
4.99/5
September 18th, 2007 at 7:30 pm
and i dont picture chix like that. but anyway…
September 18th, 2007 at 8:13 pm
nice i like it!!!
September 18th, 2007 at 11:48 pm
i love you vinyaya!!! that came out really wrong…i love yer storys
September 19th, 2007 at 12:55 am
i love it, been waiting for u to add on to the orginal one lol.And plz o plz dont make me wait for the next one! ill go crazy -.-
September 19th, 2007 at 2:19 am
Vinyaya it was very good. Personally I didn’t mind the cursing. It added quite a lot of color. However I wouldn’t think Holly one to give up so easily. Please continue if you don’t I’m going on strike and won’t write a single story until you do!
September 19th, 2007 at 6:52 am
another highschool storie!!! YAY.
can’t wait until u add more
September 19th, 2007 at 8:52 am
Vinyaya- i have to say. your one of the most talented writers on here.
September 19th, 2007 at 4:13 pm
thanx all but i’m afraid i have to delete the swearing or the story will be deleted brb!
September 19th, 2007 at 5:04 pm
there and i also spilt it into chappies!
September 20th, 2007 at 2:31 am
I really like this! Vinyaya please continue. Gah! I’m like you and Holly’s biggest fan!
September 20th, 2007 at 7:18 pm
as am i yours!
September 23rd, 2007 at 10:10 pm
ok i cant quite imagine chix in that manner but overall id say it was an excellent piece of writing much like ur previous ones.Keep up the good work and you’ll go far (geez i sound like one of those weird life couches who ses keep this going and you’ll go far) any way seriously id say that ur practically famous on this site
September 25th, 2007 at 9:19 pm
lol thanx!
September 27th, 2007 at 4:37 am
ohhhh!!!I AM JUST SOOOOO IMPATIENT!!! KEEP ADDING!!! please? I WILL TRY TO WAIT BUT WELL…..;)
September 27th, 2007 at 5:17 pm
ok i will add tonight!
September 29th, 2007 at 8:59 pm
I like it but Chix is a little ooc
October 1st, 2007 at 11:21 pm
Do you think that Chix is starting to get really wierd? I can not imagine the real Chix doing that. Is he really that sleazy in this story? I like, but I am kinda confused about the Chix part.
October 2nd, 2007 at 11:03 pm
CONTINUE SOON!
October 8th, 2007 at 3:02 am
dude continue!
October 9th, 2007 at 7:17 pm
ok lol
October 9th, 2007 at 8:54 pm
this is sooo good r u goning to continue today?
October 9th, 2007 at 8:57 pm
oh go one then.
October 9th, 2007 at 9:07 pm
plz continue!!
October 9th, 2007 at 9:08 pm
What?
October 9th, 2007 at 9:54 pm
Ok how did she break her leg? and second when was she invited to a party plz explain.
October 9th, 2007 at 10:01 pm
i will in the next chappy be patient lol…
October 9th, 2007 at 10:04 pm
Okidookie I will try to obbtain that virtue.
*snicker* like that’s gonna happen!
October 9th, 2007 at 10:15 pm
Have I really never reviewed this before? I guess not, which is weird, because I’ve read it and I definitely like it. Romances are not really my thing, but this is a very good story. I really like how you don’t portray either Holly or Trouble as perfect- they often get overcute in these types of stories.
October 9th, 2007 at 10:17 pm
definetly.
October 10th, 2007 at 4:42 pm
Yeah in my earlier stories holly and trouble are definatley too cute. In the actual books though holly is a grumpy little sod most of the time.
October 10th, 2007 at 8:48 pm
I really like it… it is a bit too cutesy for my general taste, but every now and again I like some pure fluff.
Maybe add another element, something a little less happy, just to add depth to the story. You don’t really need too, but if you want to make it a novel length fic then that might help. And maybe make Holly a little bit more feisty. I just love how prickly she can be sometimes.
Good job, keep it up! Definitely one of the better H/T’s out there. (Not that they aren’t all great, I just like this one a lot).
October 10th, 2007 at 9:15 pm
uh this isn’t gonna end up an h/t lol i never said who she was snogging…
October 11th, 2007 at 3:30 am
Lol, great as usual! From your biggest fan, you have done a great job!!!!
October 13th, 2007 at 11:13 pm
NO I’M HER BIGGEST FAN!!
October 14th, 2007 at 2:49 am
love ur story but it would be better if you could hurry up and add on!!!!
October 14th, 2007 at 10:00 am
ok lol how bout you tie for biggest fan?
October 16th, 2007 at 11:54 pm
NEVER! i am your BIGGEST fan EVER!
October 21st, 2007 at 3:37 pm
*sighs* whatever i can have a fan club i suppose lol…
October 26th, 2007 at 5:32 am
I shall be the leader and we will stalk you!
October 26th, 2007 at 4:30 pm
lol. How? I live in scotland remember!
October 26th, 2007 at 6:24 pm
Well… I guess I could steal a plane from the untited Italian Airport and then some how get to the U.K. unless my followers don’t live in Italy that could be a problem…
CONTINUE!
October 27th, 2007 at 10:19 am
uh Jelly….why don’t you just buy a ticket to scotland? much easier
hee hee i’ll come. (im not stalkin anyone thou) lol
October 27th, 2007 at 5:53 pm
I thought that stealing a plane from Italy to Scotland would be much easier I mean no security! lol plus it would have so much adrenaline rush!
October 31st, 2007 at 3:43 am
I really liked the story , I really wish u’de continue.
October 31st, 2007 at 5:51 pm
ok lol but i am starting to get scared!!! i thought i was safe on my little united kingdom island!!
October 31st, 2007 at 9:42 pm
lol ohhh that’s funny! safe from people like me!
November 5th, 2007 at 1:14 am
i think no one is ever goin to be safe from jelly….she will always find a WAY!!
lol
November 5th, 2007 at 1:24 am
Dun dun dun dan dun dun dun dun dan dan dweedele dee dweeldle dee doooooooooooo! My new theme song! pretty spyish huh? oh wait you can’t hear it! Oh well!
November 9th, 2007 at 4:24 pm
We(probably)won’t stalk you if you keep ON WRITN’!I’m not sure about Jelly.Just keep the updates and stories a-comin’!
November 10th, 2007 at 9:43 am
lol write stories or get stalked by a person with a theme song that we can’t hear
November 11th, 2007 at 9:37 pm
lol
November 11th, 2007 at 10:08 pm
plz continue? *puppy dog eyes* *turns evil*
NOW!!!! grrrr.
November 11th, 2007 at 11:39 pm
lol again , PLZ CONTINUE , PLLLLZZ UR A TOATLLY AWESOME WRITER! and i neeeeedd to read ur stories!!
November 16th, 2007 at 2:15 am
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March 24th, 2008 at 3:40 am
Hola, i like the story, especily the SOS part
P.S. how do u do the smile?
March 24th, 2008 at 4:40 am
wat smile ??
:’(
March 24th, 2008 at 4:56 am
wait a moment….i only jsut read hapter 6……NO!! THAT CANT BE THE ENDING!!! theres to many opitunities for good ideas!!! reconsider???