Hacked!!!
Written on November 26th, 2007 by 017350Story Details
(11 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Loading ...Opal Koboi was in her lab trying to put together the Omniwatch 1.0. She hadn’t had much success so far. These parts Foaly was using didn’t come cheap, either. She finnally gave up it, and returned to her computer. She booted up hac.28449, and the timer started.
When Opal saw that the timer read: 0:00, she immediately started hacking the Haven City Prison computers. She deleted her friends jail time, and wiped out their criminal records (as well as her own)! Then, she hacked into a couple of her friends computers and discovered that one of them had plans to murder her once she gained power. She immediately went back onto the Haven City Jail computer, and put a mass murder, a bank robbery, and more onto her “Friend’s” criminal record. Then, she gave her a lifetime inprisonment. “That ought to show her” she thought aloud. She then shut down hac.28449. Then, she returned to trying to put together Foaly’s Omniwatch 1.0.
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November 26th, 2007 at 11:08 pm
RR&R
November 26th, 2007 at 11:35 pm
By the way… I wrote this story all by myself except for 7 words that harrygz helped me with. But that’s all.
November 26th, 2007 at 11:42 pm
I helped him a bit more than he said I did
November 26th, 2007 at 11:44 pm
Not true! Seven words: the, Omniwatch,in, a, casual, voice, untraceable. That’s all!
November 26th, 2007 at 11:47 pm
hmmm….. This story has a lot of potential but if I were u I would submerge both chapters and then in bold where the 2nd chapter is I would put IN KOBOI LABS but I’m not u soooo.
Also a question for u editors 1 time I got onto someone else’s stories reviews so I could edit them. I didn’t do anything to it but I was wondering how in the world that happened! I thought only editors could edit pplz stories!!
LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
November 27th, 2007 at 12:20 am
Thanks for the suggestion. I just became a member today. So, I don’t know how to title the chapters yet.
November 27th, 2007 at 12:22 am
that’s OK u don’t name the chapters.
November 27th, 2007 at 1:46 am
LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!! TOTALLY WANT U TO CONTINUE!
November 27th, 2007 at 4:27 am
you should make the chapters longer. when i first started writing stories, my chapters were short, too, so don’t feel bad. otherwise, this story is really good and entertaining! pls continue soon!
November 29th, 2007 at 10:16 pm
okay , I loved taht u cont, its nice , plz cont
November 30th, 2007 at 12:46 am
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:08 am
OMG!!! I love the update! I haven’t read this in a long while!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 5:49 pm
Thank you Jelly. I think naming files is fun. I remember I named the file vbrs/q.7 for a reason. but, I don’t remember why. Sorry if this comment makes no sense, whatsoever.