Hacked!!!
Written on November 26th, 2007 by 017350Story Details
(11 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Loading ...Foaly was in Section 8 with Holly, and Commander Root. “So, we need you to track her down for us,” Commander Root said. Holly was quiet for a minute. “Sure,” said Holly with a sigh. “Good,” said Foaly. Commander Root nodded his approval. “Trouble Kelp will accompany you,” he grunted. Holly nodded and left. Commander Root followed.
Foaly decided that he would work on the Omniwatch 1.0. He opened the files for it, but to his surprise they were gone! He realized at once that he had been hacked! He called Commander Root at once! “Hello,” said Commander Root. Foaly told Commander Root about how he had been hacked. “And I was just about to add a detachable security camera too…” whined Foaly.
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November 26th, 2007 at 11:08 pm
RR&R
November 26th, 2007 at 11:35 pm
By the way… I wrote this story all by myself except for 7 words that harrygz helped me with. But that’s all.
November 26th, 2007 at 11:42 pm
I helped him a bit more than he said I did
November 26th, 2007 at 11:44 pm
Not true! Seven words: the, Omniwatch,in, a, casual, voice, untraceable. That’s all!
November 26th, 2007 at 11:47 pm
hmmm….. This story has a lot of potential but if I were u I would submerge both chapters and then in bold where the 2nd chapter is I would put IN KOBOI LABS but I’m not u soooo.
Also a question for u editors 1 time I got onto someone else’s stories reviews so I could edit them. I didn’t do anything to it but I was wondering how in the world that happened! I thought only editors could edit pplz stories!!
LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
November 27th, 2007 at 12:20 am
Thanks for the suggestion. I just became a member today. So, I don’t know how to title the chapters yet.
November 27th, 2007 at 12:22 am
that’s OK u don’t name the chapters.
November 27th, 2007 at 1:46 am
LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!! TOTALLY WANT U TO CONTINUE!
November 27th, 2007 at 4:27 am
you should make the chapters longer. when i first started writing stories, my chapters were short, too, so don’t feel bad. otherwise, this story is really good and entertaining! pls continue soon!
November 29th, 2007 at 10:16 pm
okay , I loved taht u cont, its nice , plz cont
November 30th, 2007 at 12:46 am
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:08 am
OMG!!! I love the update! I haven’t read this in a long while!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 5:49 pm
Thank you Jelly. I think naming files is fun. I remember I named the file vbrs/q.7 for a reason. but, I don’t remember why. Sorry if this comment makes no sense, whatsoever.