Hacked!!!

Written on November 26th, 2007 by 017350

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  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: General
  • Author: 017350
  • Word Count: 1301
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      Foaly went home puzzled that day. Who could have created a hacking program strong enough for him to not be able to stop it, or even trace it for that matter. Then, the answer hit him. “Of course…” he whispered to himself. “Opal Koboi!”

      Opal Koboi had recently escaped from prison and had gone into hiding. They knew that it was somewhere around Haven City, but noone knew the exact location. Foaly knew this. He pulled out his cell phone and called Commander Root. After a moment, Commander Root answered. “Hello,” he said in a bored tone. Foaly quickly explained what he thought about this whole situation. “If it is Opal Koboi, then she knows a lot of information that we don’t want her to know.” said Commander Root “Call Holly, I need to see her. Tell her it’s important.”

In Koboi Labs

      Opal Koboi looked at the timer. It read: 0:00. Time to do some hacking. She started with the “Recent” folder. Then she clicked on the file titled: “Omniwatch 1.0″. The file containing the uses of the Omniwatch 1.0 popped up. As she scrolled down the list of things it could do, her eyes widened. Ingenius! She then copied that folder and the folder containing the instructions on how to make it onto her computer. Then, she deleted it on Foaly’s computer! After looking at a few more files, she shut down hac.28449.

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13 Reviews for “Hacked!!!”

  1. 017350 Says:

    RR&R

  2. 017350 Says:

    By the way… I wrote this story all by myself except for 7 words that harrygz helped me with. But that’s all.

  3. harrygz Says:

    I helped him a bit more than he said I did

  4. 017350 Says:

    Not true! Seven words: the, Omniwatch,in, a, casual, voice, untraceable. That’s all!

  5. Jelly Says:

    hmmm….. This story has a lot of potential but if I were u I would submerge both chapters and then in bold where the 2nd chapter is I would put IN KOBOI LABS but I’m not u soooo.

    Also a question for u editors 1 time I got onto someone else’s stories reviews so I could edit them. I didn’t do anything to it but I was wondering how in the world that happened! I thought only editors could edit pplz stories!!

    LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. 017350 Says:

    Thanks for the suggestion. I just became a member today. So, I don’t know how to title the chapters yet.

  7. Jelly Says:

    that’s OK u don’t name the chapters.

  8. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!! TOTALLY WANT U TO CONTINUE!

  9. foalygenius Says:

    you should make the chapters longer. when i first started writing stories, my chapters were short, too, so don’t feel bad. otherwise, this story is really good and entertaining! pls continue soon!

  10. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    okay , I loved taht u cont, its nice , plz cont

  11. Kgerred Says:

    AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!

  12. Jelly Says:

    OMG!!! I love the update! I haven’t read this in a long while!!!

  13. 017350 Says:

    Thank you Jelly. I think naming files is fun. I remember I named the file vbrs/q.7 for a reason. but, I don’t remember why. Sorry if this comment makes no sense, whatsoever.

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