Hacked!!!

Written on November 26th, 2007 by 017350

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  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: General
  • Author: 017350
  • Word Count: 1301
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      Opal Koboi was in her lounge after just hacking the LEP Section 8 computer. She was somewhat proud of herself for hacking the “unhackable” computer. She had just found out some valuable information. Like what jail her 4 companions were in, and what the password to unlock their cell was. She had also found out that there was a closed chute near her that wasn’t heavily guarded that led to the surface. That wasn’t all she found out though. She had also found out much more information about the LEP Section 8 that could prove useful in her plans to overthrow it. Revenge. That’s what it was all about for Opal Koboi. Ever since her previous attempt to overthrow it, all she wanted was revenge. And that’s what she was determined to get!

      Opal got up and walked over to her computer. She was going to hack Foaly’s computers now. She warmed up her hacking program, hac.28449. She had invented it herself. It was the strongest computer hacking program ever made! She looked at the timer. It read: 1:42. She had to wait that long before hac.28449 booted up. She still had a while to wait.

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13 Reviews for “Hacked!!!”

  1. 017350 Says:

    RR&R

  2. 017350 Says:

    By the way… I wrote this story all by myself except for 7 words that harrygz helped me with. But that’s all.

  3. harrygz Says:

    I helped him a bit more than he said I did

  4. 017350 Says:

    Not true! Seven words: the, Omniwatch,in, a, casual, voice, untraceable. That’s all!

  5. Jelly Says:

    hmmm….. This story has a lot of potential but if I were u I would submerge both chapters and then in bold where the 2nd chapter is I would put IN KOBOI LABS but I’m not u soooo.

    Also a question for u editors 1 time I got onto someone else’s stories reviews so I could edit them. I didn’t do anything to it but I was wondering how in the world that happened! I thought only editors could edit pplz stories!!

    LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  6. 017350 Says:

    Thanks for the suggestion. I just became a member today. So, I don’t know how to title the chapters yet.

  7. Jelly Says:

    that’s OK u don’t name the chapters.

  8. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!! TOTALLY WANT U TO CONTINUE!

  9. foalygenius Says:

    you should make the chapters longer. when i first started writing stories, my chapters were short, too, so don’t feel bad. otherwise, this story is really good and entertaining! pls continue soon!

  10. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    okay , I loved taht u cont, its nice , plz cont

  11. Kgerred Says:

    AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!

  12. Jelly Says:

    OMG!!! I love the update! I haven’t read this in a long while!!!

  13. 017350 Says:

    Thank you Jelly. I think naming files is fun. I remember I named the file vbrs/q.7 for a reason. but, I don’t remember why. Sorry if this comment makes no sense, whatsoever.

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