Hacked!!!
Written on November 26th, 2007 by 017350Story Details
(11 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Loading ...Foaly the centaur was working on a new gadget. He called it “The Omniwatch 1.0.” It could be used as a camera, a 200 watt lamp, an x-ray, a communicator, and more! It could also hack into any computer. Just then his cell phone rang. It was Julius Root the commander of the LEP. “Hello” said Foaly in a casual voice. “Foaly, we have a problem,” Commander Root replied. “Our computers have been hacked by an untraceable source!” “Don’t worry, Julius,” said Foaly in a cocky voice. “There isn’t a computer in the world that I can’t trace!” “Don’t call me Julius! And why don’t you come on over here and take a look for yourself!”
In a few minutes Foaly was there, and taking a look at the computers. “Hmmm… Something’s wrong.” said Foaly blankly. “I guessed that much.” said Commander Root sarcastically. “But what type of virus is it? Can you take care of it? And who or what sent it?” “First of all, what files did they hack?” said Foaly. “All our Section 8 files.” replied Commander Root. “The ones you said were ‘unhackable’.” “No fair,” whined Foaly. “You were the one that told me to lessen the security so that you could get in!” “Quiet!” barked Commander Root. “Just get back to the problem!”
It was an hour later when Foaly finally finished with the computer. “I give up!” said Foaly in a frustrated voice. “This is one powerful virus!” Commander Root looked up from the newspaper he was reading. “So you can’t trace it?” he asked. “Hey, give me a break!” said Foaly. “One centaur can’t do everything!”
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November 26th, 2007 at 11:08 pm
RR&R
November 26th, 2007 at 11:35 pm
By the way… I wrote this story all by myself except for 7 words that harrygz helped me with. But that’s all.
November 26th, 2007 at 11:42 pm
I helped him a bit more than he said I did
November 26th, 2007 at 11:44 pm
Not true! Seven words: the, Omniwatch,in, a, casual, voice, untraceable. That’s all!
November 26th, 2007 at 11:47 pm
hmmm….. This story has a lot of potential but if I were u I would submerge both chapters and then in bold where the 2nd chapter is I would put IN KOBOI LABS but I’m not u soooo.
Also a question for u editors 1 time I got onto someone else’s stories reviews so I could edit them. I didn’t do anything to it but I was wondering how in the world that happened! I thought only editors could edit pplz stories!!
LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
November 27th, 2007 at 12:20 am
Thanks for the suggestion. I just became a member today. So, I don’t know how to title the chapters yet.
November 27th, 2007 at 12:22 am
that’s OK u don’t name the chapters.
November 27th, 2007 at 1:46 am
LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!! TOTALLY WANT U TO CONTINUE!
November 27th, 2007 at 4:27 am
you should make the chapters longer. when i first started writing stories, my chapters were short, too, so don’t feel bad. otherwise, this story is really good and entertaining! pls continue soon!
November 29th, 2007 at 10:16 pm
okay , I loved taht u cont, its nice , plz cont
November 30th, 2007 at 12:46 am
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 2:08 am
OMG!!! I love the update! I haven’t read this in a long while!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 5:49 pm
Thank you Jelly. I think naming files is fun. I remember I named the file vbrs/q.7 for a reason. but, I don’t remember why. Sorry if this comment makes no sense, whatsoever.