Grow up
Written on December 29th, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(8 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Loading ...“Holly, ” came a voice “Good your awake. That was a close one-you could have been really badly hurt and don’t worry the mission went fine.”
Holly looked up confused
“What are you on about?” she asked.
“You’re in hospital Holls, don’t worry you’re OK now.” said the cheery nurse. “The commander’s here and I’ve been at your appartment checking up on everything.”
Holly looked at the nurse’s badge because the writing was so small she could only make out the bold print Amanda Black.
“My bestfriend has the same name as you.” she said quiet impressed “You look like her a bit, are you realated or something? She goes to my school.”
“Holly- what are you on about? I am your bestfriend- I’m Amanda!We went to the same school.” she looked at her puzzled was this a joke?
“Don’t be silly.” she said laughing “Amanda’s only 62, same as me.”
“62? But Holly you’re…79, you’ve just became an LEP officer.”
Again Holly laughed she was just a kid. But she wasn’t.
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December 29th, 2007 at 9:50 pm
like it keep going??/
December 29th, 2007 at 9:57 pm
It’s good. I am wondering about a lot of stuff like what happened and why she doesn’t remember anything…
I see alot of potential.
December 30th, 2007 at 1:24 am
seems really good. potenial and all. plz do contiune
December 30th, 2007 at 3:17 am
interesting. why doesn’t she remember? keep going, you’re onto something awesome.
December 30th, 2007 at 1:02 pm
COULD YOU TELL US WHAT HAPPENED FOR HER TO BE IN THIS STATE OF MIND?.?.??
January 2nd, 2008 at 2:02 am
Cool story!
January 2nd, 2008 at 2:58 am
I luv it! pllllzzz conitnue!
January 4th, 2008 at 12:35 am
oo pleeses upd8 i like it!
January 8th, 2008 at 5:11 am
just read chapters 2.3.4 and its fantasic!
February 18th, 2008 at 8:47 pm
UPDATED!
July 3rd, 2008 at 9:25 pm
Good job! I like it. The only problem is that Holly is a bit OOC. Besides that, 5 out of 5, maybe even more.
July 4th, 2008 at 12:36 am
I really like this! This story is interesting to read, I can’t wait for the next chapter
July 19th, 2008 at 8:44 pm
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! That is an awesome story. Please keep going. @>->–
August 6th, 2008 at 6:20 am
Wonderful story I am interested in seeing the outcome of this story.
August 24th, 2008 at 4:05 am
Interesting!
plz update soon