Greensleves
Written on September 27th, 2007 by Holly314Story Details
- Category: General and Editor's Choice and Poetry/Songfictions
- Author: Holly314
- Word Count: 517
- Read 217 times
Okay, I’m probably going to use something like this in one of my stories, but this is more of a poetry story.
A step on the beach,
A print washing away,
A whisper of breeze,
It seems to say,
What child is this,
My only son,
Who holds the secrets,
That helps the one….
It fades away,
No longer there,
But the notes of somber music,
Picked up by a boy of raven hair….
The words go on,
The prophecy new,
Speaking of the one,
Or the very few…..
He walks up the beach,
Sweet sadness of love,
The one who will come,
Music soft as a dove….
He sees her red hair,
Like Cardinal wings,
Spread wide, with flair,
That outward flings.
A flute of bone,
It’s music low,
held to red lips,
Held up like a bow.
The song it plays,
Known over the seas,
Is one of Nice Christmas,
Known here, as Greensleves.
She didn’t know he was there,
But he knew she could tell,
He touched on her shoulder,
A clock’s chiming bell,
Tolled midnight that night,
A crisp winter’s eve,
Where two lovers met,
In a song of misery.
Greensleves……Greensleeves
The wind whispered high,
As lips joined and parted,
The clouds took off to fly.
What Child is this, Who is so blessed,
He changes all tomorrows,
Replacing tears with reborn years,
In hearts once Dark, and Hollow…
Trans-Siberian Orchestra, The Lost Christmas Eve
Ok, I like Greensleves, It’s been going through my head all day,
and I hope all you people who might not be christian aren’t offended X)
R&R pleez

(6 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
September 27th, 2007 at 2:07 am
believe me, im christian and i wasnt offended. that was beautiful!
September 27th, 2007 at 3:16 am
What A nice poem!!
September 27th, 2007 at 5:06 pm
yeah it is really sweet!
September 28th, 2007 at 6:31 pm
I loved it. It was just so beautiful. I love the song Greensleves too. I love playing it on the piano. I just love this. You have a real gift for bringing out the beauty in a song or poem.
I look forward to reading more of your poems, stories and maybe songs
October 1st, 2007 at 1:28 pm
B.E.A.U.T.F.U.L
October 14th, 2007 at 12:18 pm
imchristian!itwassoogoodilovedeverylittledetaiitwasamaving.sereiosleyyouaresogoodatwriting!!!!!!!!!!!!
January 7th, 2008 at 4:19 am
Oh wow, that was very nice.
I loved it. It was descriptive and beautiful. Good job.
January 7th, 2008 at 11:54 pm
I saw this before I joined and then I couln’t find it again! My mom has a Kenny G. (No idea) CD and this song was on there and I remembered this FanFic! Very nice!
January 8th, 2008 at 12:00 am
this is a song that we get to choose to sing in chorus!