girl of his dreams.
Written on January 14th, 2008 by mahi101 AF FanStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: mahi101 AF Fan
- Word Count: 1055
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(6 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
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Artemis stared at how slow the school had gotten, it’s reputation had dropped ten-fold!
“How in the world did it end up like this?” Artemis said in gym and suprisingly Caroline showed up behind him ,”Well do you really want to know the story?” She said sitting down on the bleachers.
“Do tell….” Artemis replyed sitting next to her.
Caroline let out a sigh, “Fine, but promise not to go crazy, when you left the school’s grade point average went down immediatly , seems like you were the thing that kept everything in order, that’s why people were OKAY then, BUT when you left………..well, the school’s grades went down , evryone started slacking off.So they decided to merge with an all girls school, and the boy’s.. well they were ihn puberty… so it began… boy’s and girls… couples, popularity. Then they kept their mind on their status more then their work…………”
Artemis stood up.”Oh, if that’s it…. then……”
The gym teacher called his name, “Fowl! “
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January 14th, 2008 at 5:02 am
FCD I love where it’s going. Keep writing!
January 14th, 2008 at 8:22 am
ohhhhhhhhhhhh i like the sound of it
January 14th, 2008 at 9:20 pm
I agree. Keep on writin’!!!!
January 14th, 2008 at 11:58 pm
I probably shouldn’t even comment. I don’t know enough to really say anything so just KEEP GOING!
January 15th, 2008 at 12:37 am
there’s not much going on except you can tell by the tittle , i need one more comment and i will continue.
January 15th, 2008 at 12:44 am
I don’t really think ne1 us gonna b on ne more 2nite…
January 15th, 2008 at 1:50 am
lol neither do i… awww………NO ONE IS EVER ON.
January 23rd, 2008 at 12:51 am
keep going…!
January 23rd, 2008 at 1:33 am
well…..yeah… i will in time…
February 1st, 2008 at 10:12 pm
OMG!!!!!! I can’t believe this !!!!!! You were right!!! The First Chapter is so like my “My Day With Arty” !!!!!
grrrr…Now i feel like an idiot….But My story is very different (hopefully), cuz allnof this really funny stuff is gonna happen to Arty and there will be twists and turns and….stuff.
Your story is very @wesome though. I think its great. And as for mine being a lot like it….Great minds think alike. And I swear i wrote way before I read yours…actually, now that I think about it, I wrote that first part of “my Day With Arty” before I even found this site. So I really didn’t try to copy yours. Its just a REALLY weird and cool cawinsadence(sp?)
February 1st, 2008 at 10:50 pm
I know you didnt copy it… actully , what I was palnning to do with my story ( I have it written up) sounds A LOT LIKE ASSASIANS game! WHICH FREAKED ME OUT BECASUE I HADN’T EVEN POSTED IT YET! So don’t wrorry , yours and mine will turn out completly different.
February 2nd, 2008 at 12:53 am
JUST LIKE YOU SHOULD KEEP ON TRUCKIN’…
KEEP ON WRITING WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITENING!
February 2nd, 2008 at 1:09 am
Okay , actully I was thnking of updating Dimension Bomb……. Which one should I update , this or Dimension Bomb?
February 2nd, 2008 at 3:05 am
This. And I definetly know that you didn’t copy it of cousre!!! plus yours was on here first anyway.
MWAHAHAHAHSAAA, My Day With Arty actually started out with me imagining what I would do with Arty if i had complete controll over him, and unlimited resources..Although in real life I am Definetly not like Alex.
Anyways your story is @wesome, not just awesome, its my special @wesome which is only reserved for really awesome stuff. Continue!! It ROCKS!!!!
February 2nd, 2008 at 3:19 am
lol! yay! I feel like updating now…. ( looks at desk which is full of text books and homework ) After I finish my homework…… lol i love the a in awesome used with an @ it makes it more @wesome! that looks so kewl!
February 2nd, 2008 at 6:20 am
You can use it if you want…Its kinda like my own version of this word my frien made up: xawesome …….I wonder if it will ever catch on?…*hopefull smile*
February 2nd, 2008 at 7:54 am
1337 1$ fu/\/ @/\/d y0ur $70ry 1$ R3411y
@\/\/$0/\/\3
February 2nd, 2008 at 7:55 pm
cool….
February 2nd, 2008 at 10:20 pm
:) Hey Mahi. Great story so far! Please continue… Please… Right now, really… Stop reading this and continue.NOW!! lol
February 2nd, 2008 at 10:21 pm
JK
February 7th, 2008 at 5:18 am
how come nobody reviewd my story “My Day With Arty”…..Did I do something wrong????????
Does it suck????
I’m worried now…..
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And amazing chapter by the wway. Keep writing..your completely @wesome.
February 7th, 2008 at 5:33 am
thanx, also I reviewed “my day with Arty” check it out.
Oh yeah , thanx ariel (even though I always have to TELL you OR CALL YOU so you read the update BECAUSE YOU ARE NEVER ON! MY GOD!)
March 20th, 2008 at 1:24 pm
pretty good! HYPNOTISING…..
YOU WILL COMPLETE THE STORY
May 11th, 2008 at 3:43 pm
using the mesmer continue NOW