Foaly’s visit

Written on September 7th, 2007 by 1crazyhollyfan

Story Details

Sort of a cute little story. I do not own Foaly, but I do own Lauren and her family. Please no flamers, but all reviews are welcome. Please enjoy.I was in my basement, working on my new invention. Wait, before I begin to tell you the story, let me tell you a bit about myself. I was in my basement, working on my new invention. Wait, before I begin to tell you the story, let me tell you a bit about myself. My name is Lauren Garrent. I’m 13 years old, and I’m quite honestly a genius. As you will notice in this story, I am not nearly as formal as my idol Artemis Fowl, but I am nevertheless a genius. I live in Greenbow, Alabama, but I am not a redneck. Back to the story.

I was in my basement, working on my new invention. Wait, before I begin to tell you the story, let me tell you a bit about myself. My name is Lauren Garrent. I’m 13 years old, and I’m quite honestly a genius. As you will notice in this story, I am not nearly as formal as my idol Artemis Fowl, but I am nevertheless a genius. I live in Greenbow, Alabama, but I am not a redneck. Back to the story.I was in my basement working on my latest invention, the Imaginator. Lame, I know, but it describes it. I’m not going to go into too much detail as not all of you are genii like me, but basically it makes whatever item you imagine become reality. If you wanted to imagine an apple, then you would step inside the 10 x 10 circle and it would appear in your hand.But if you wanted to imagine something bigger, say a car or a person, then you would stand outside the circle and attach a pair of electrode to your temples, and the item would materialize inside the circle.

Since the machine was a prototype, I didn’t want to start with anything big. I had been working on the Imaginator all night and I was starving. So I stepped inside the circle and pictured a banana clearly in my mind. Within seconds a perfectly ripe banana appeared in my open hand. I wolfed it down and decided to try something bigger. First things first, an Artemis Fowl character.

But which one? Artemis was obviously my first choice, but I wanted someone who would really appreciate my inventions as much as I did. Foaly, I decided, would do. I attached the electrodes to my head and stared at the circle nervously. It was one thing to imagine an inanimate object, but it was quite another to procure a living being. And a creature that didn’t even exist? I had no idea what to do. I closed my eyes and since I had no mental image of him, I just concentrated on the word. Foaly.

After a few seconds of waiting nervously, a four-legged creature began to materialize inside the circle.

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18 Reviews for “Foaly’s visit”

  1. 1crazyhollyfan Says:

    first comment dance! do you like it?

  2. Vinyaya Says:

    yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. lil.arty Says:

    like it? it was awsm….
    r ya gonna addd more??

  4. artyfowl3 Says:

    heehee! i like it!! it would be cool if you would add more, it’s really good.

    (hm…Lauren…genius…you didn’t happen to read “Fairywings” in the past did you? just kidding. ;)

  5. fowlgirl19 Says:

    i love this! can you add more? please?

  6. Vinyaya Says:

    yup please?????

  7. 1crazyhollyfan Says:

    what du u want me to add? romance? i will if u want. no i have never read fairywings

  8. fowlgirl19 Says:

    romance is fine.

  9. fowlgirl19 Says:

    did u read the new chapters of my story?

  10. fowlgirl19 Says:

    love the ending

  11. 1crazyhollyfan Says:

    what stroy may i ask? ive read alot of storys and get the authors mixed up…

  12. fowlgirl19 Says:

    girls don’t interest me, but why does she?

  13. 1crazyhollyfan Says:

    yes, i have

  14. MMK Says:

    This is a very sweet story. Foaly’s so… nice. And a bit OOC. But I did enjoy your story… I’d like to see Artemis or Holly brought into Lauren’s world. :)

  15. lil.arty Says:

    YAY I lUV IT.
    (begins to cry) if i cry hard enough will u add more? *sniff*

  16. Holly Short 99999999 Says:

    I don’t think so. Maybe or maybe not. It is really intersting.

  17. lil.arty Says:

    (crys even more) i think i created a puddle :)

  18. Jelly Says:

    No you flooded the world and now I am soaking wet! ( crys because she can’t swim)

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