Firetop- Part One (chptr 3 added!)
Written on September 22nd, 2007 by captainshort101Story Details
- Category: General
- Author: captainshort101
- Word Count: 896
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(8 votes, average: 2.75 out of 5)
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“You, Vinyaya, have just displayed behavior despicable enough to get you expelled.”
Vinyaya still glowered angrily, her nose in the air haughtily.
“I shall be writing to your parents.”
“Parent. My father is dead.”
“Parent, then,” Commander Cedar said.
Vinyaya didn’t care. Bibi would understand,She always did. Bibi would just say that it served the teacher rightly. He had no business insulting her daughter lke that.
“It seems, Vinyaya, that my words are having no effect on you.”
Vinyaya risked it. “They aren’t, sir.”
The Commander sat up straight in his chair, staightening his tie. “Well, Vinyaya, it seems that I will have to punish you badly enough so that this kind of behavior will not happen again.”
Vinyaya drew herself up to her full height and said boldly,” Do your worst.”
The Commander smiled. “You will sit next to Glider Verbil.”
Vinyaya paled.
“you- can’t- make- me-”
The Commander sighed wistfully.
“Only for the rest of the term, Vinyaya.”
Vinyaya then realized that this was probably the only way she could try to get the locket back.
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September 22nd, 2007 at 1:06 am
i am very disturbed that someone rated my story 1/5. may i remind that person that the first part of the story is firetop,plain, old, firetop. I know that my story is not worth a 1 and i know this may sound conceited, but i am really offended.
other than that, sorry about chptr 2, i know it doesn’t have anything, but i will update as soon as i can. Thank you.Constructive critiscism will be appreciated.
September 22nd, 2007 at 7:46 am
who ever gace this a 1 is an idiot, i liked it.
September 22nd, 2007 at 9:52 am
it is good i would never give it a 1 lol i will go and give it a five now…
September 22nd, 2007 at 7:44 pm
i love it! i gave it a five =D
September 24th, 2007 at 12:28 am
I’m still enjoying it a lot- you’ve really given Vinyaya much more character than she has in the books.
What happened to the beginning of the story, though?
November 3rd, 2007 at 7:44 pm
WOW… I LOVED IT!!!!
November 3rd, 2007 at 8:21 pm
Oh this is sooooo good! This is a way better story than *insert story worse than this on here* ( I can’t say it would hurt the person’s feelings) I can’t wait for more!