Fire and Ice
Written on January 11th, 2008 by Holly314Story Details
(8 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
Loading ...Chapter 2: Meet Erisu
Erisu hated school. Even this private school stank. She rememebered how hard public school had been, and involuntarily shivered. Her wings still hurt. She landed gently on the doorstep of her house, stepped inside and took off her sandals. She brushed back her black hair, which was still sticky from her getting highlights, and opened the door.
As soon as her bookbag was on the floor she was watching T.V.
“Dad! I’m home!” no answer. “Dad!” She got up and reluctantly headed towards his room.
She entered to find him asleep on his bed. She sighed inwardly. Just then she heard a cold voice behind her. Her violet eyes turned and met one blue and one hazel eye. She jumped back.
“Do not be alarmed.” he said. Just that voice made her shiver.
“Who are you, freak?” He smiled.
“I am The Hunter. Nice to meet you.” Just then, Butler stepped into the room, and pricked her arm with a hypodermic needle. Everything collapsed into darkness.
January 11th, 2008 at 4:15 am
fcd - i read about erisu in a stroy before , i think u metioned her as a charecter or something , w/e , plz continue , this seems intresting.
January 11th, 2008 at 4:58 am
i really like it. you captured artemis very well, and especially his leacturing nature.
January 11th, 2008 at 10:19 pm
oo i like it
January 12th, 2008 at 12:20 am
ME like it!
Just so ya know…. I’m the one who gave it 4 stars!!!!!!!!!!
January 12th, 2008 at 1:56 am
Oh wow. Just wow. This is AMAZING! I REALLY like how you make Artemis sound like … well Artemis! PLEASE continue! RR&R, and I can’t tell you how much I like this piece. You give the characters character. Who else is involved?
PS: Because of Spelling Grammer and Story plot I rate FIVE. Plus, just wondering, how many stories have you wrote? Because you could really choose your career as an author. This is fantastic. I could write a whole PAGE full of how much I like it — and thats just two chapters. And, I’m kindof a story critic at this point. Like a food critic only about stories. I guess everyone is really …
OH and … “So go easy please?” What are you talking about? Like anyone would give a BAD comment for THIS work of art!
AS GOOD AS EOIN HIMSELF BY THE WAY
January 12th, 2008 at 5:27 pm
Ok also … what does OOC mean??
January 12th, 2008 at 6:59 pm
out of charecter.
January 14th, 2008 at 1:59 am
All I can say is, MORE!!!!
January 14th, 2008 at 2:06 am
interesting….three words thou…PLZ ADD MORE!!!!
January 14th, 2008 at 2:13 am
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
January 14th, 2008 at 5:01 am
i really like it! update!
January 17th, 2008 at 5:29 am
The latest update was a bit confusing but otherwise wonderful, as usual. Keep it up!
January 26th, 2008 at 3:56 am
was that all!!!!
January 26th, 2008 at 3:58 am
cooooooooooooooooooooolio! I will read somemore.
March 28th, 2008 at 4:00 am
Awesome story! I don’t think Artemis if ooc at all. Dragons are so cool and so is your story. Please update as soon as u can