Edward, Bella, and Artemis
Written on November 12th, 2007 by arty_and_holly_4everStory Details
- Category: General
- Author: arty_and_holly_4ever
- Word Count: 192
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(3 votes, average: 2.67 out of 5)
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Warning, if you have not read twilight or the sequals, this might not make sense. If you dont want spoilers to eclipse, do not read this, tho i would perfer you did read this, its not my bussiness.
“Why wont you change me already?????” i complained, “you promised that after we got married you would.”
“I wanted you to have more fun before i take your soul. just try to have fun in Ireland will you,” Edward smiled his awsome smile.
I sighed, it was impossible to stay mad at him for very long with that smile. Something, or rather some one, caught my eye. “hey, that guy looks so pale he could be one of you.”
Edward snifted(spelling sucks i know, editors, you can fix my spelling if you want to. Back to the story) the air. “Huh, well hes not. But i cant seem to hear his thoughts etheir.”
Sorry, i have to go off the computer. I will write more. Tomarrow. Yep, i so will. Comment Please, i really need to know what i am doing right and wrong. So tell me.
November 12th, 2007 at 2:44 am
I really feel that I should read the book , ” twilight ” its been mentioned two times now , who wrote it?
November 12th, 2007 at 3:03 am
oh yah , i forgot , first comment dance!
November 12th, 2007 at 4:48 am
yea i think i should read this twilight book too. coz im confused
November 12th, 2007 at 9:02 am
I like this story. im not sure why. i jsut like it.
November 13th, 2007 at 11:32 pm
You NEED to read the books, they are so cool!!!! its by stephanie meyer and she is an awsome writer, almost as good as eoin, accually, they are tied!! But, the 2nd book is pretty depressing. :}
November 13th, 2007 at 11:37 pm
how many books are in the series?
November 27th, 2007 at 11:12 pm
3 right now, and 2 more coming.
November 27th, 2007 at 11:23 pm
kool! Ill ckeck my library…
November 29th, 2007 at 11:15 pm
idk if it is at the library, i had to buy it so yea, awsome site about stephenie meyer http://www.stepheniemeyer.com/
December 21st, 2007 at 12:25 am
I agree twilight is awesome! Jacob should just leave Bella alone! Awesome story, please update!
March 19th, 2008 at 1:38 am
OMG TWILIGHT!!!!! LOVE!!!! Two of the most perfect stories merged into one. Great fic, a bit short though, and you must write more please.
March 19th, 2008 at 1:41 am
i no, but rite now, i have like 3 projects i need to do. sigh
May 30th, 2008 at 4:38 am
AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
This is the first time anyone has made a story like this and I’m really glad you did. I am a huge fan! (See my name)
Edited by MMK so that it doesn’t stretch the page- please don’t use so many exclamation marks next time.
May 30th, 2008 at 10:33 pm
…the Twilight series isn’t TOO bad, but you’ve just defamed it. The spelling/grammar needs improvement, and Bella and Edward are WAY too out of character…wow. It seems that Artemis is mistaken for a vampire in every story
July 7th, 2008 at 6:16 pm
WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Where’s Jacob? Emmett? Jasper? (Sorry crazy obsession with thohse three!!)
July 7th, 2008 at 8:00 pm
OKAY!!! this isnt done, but i kinda have writers block
Jasper is pretty darn awesome!
August 14th, 2008 at 5:08 pm
I LUV THE TWILIGHT SERIES NOW!!!!!!!1! THANK YOU 4 RECOMMENDING IT, THANK GOD IN BREAKING DAWN JACOB IMPRIMTS ON SOMEONE, BUT Y RENESME????? UGHH……. anyway, it all worked out, and I WANT U TO UPDATE, NOW!