Dust

Written on June 27th, 2009 by Helen Raspberrih

Story Details

Dust.

Dust is when something glorious falls apart, and nothing can stop it.

Dust.

Dust is when the flames die.

Dust.

Dust is what is left when your heart is broken.

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16 Reviews for “Dust”

  1. Ally Kat Says:
    June 27th, 2009 at 3:20 am

    that’s soooooo sad! I love it though… yes I’m an oddball who loves heartbreak and death when I’m reading or watching TV. five stars! :cry: :) :cry:

  2. Yoshi Says:
    June 27th, 2009 at 3:48 am

    Oh, so sad! *dies of complete and total heartbreak* You just had to make him marry Minerva too… I have so many names to call her, and none of them are taught in kindergarten.

    Long story short, I don’t like her.

    *first comment hula for Ally Kat*

  3. hitsugayatoushiro Says:
    June 27th, 2009 at 10:55 am

    EVIIIIIIIL
    Y MINNIE????
    EVIL COUNCIL, YOSHI U MUST JOIN ME IN MA MISSION 2 INNIHALATE MINNIE ND THE COUNCIL SO THAT ARTY ND HOLLY CAN B 2GETHA!!!!!!!!!1

  4. beckett simple-toon Says:
    June 27th, 2009 at 12:44 pm

    oh that’s realy sad and… :cry: i know yoshi will probably rub this in my face *takes deep breath* “I DONT LIKE MINERVA ANY MORE!!!” so there you go Yoshi, you got what you wanted.

  5. ArtemisFowlfan96 Says:
    June 28th, 2009 at 2:16 am

    lol bst… so sad!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE NO!!! BTW, there’s something at the end of that, so look at it.

  6. Ally Kat Says:
    June 28th, 2009 at 5:07 am

    I didn’t see anything AFf96

  7. Helen Says:
    June 28th, 2009 at 8:43 am

    Um, it was supposed to be nothing, I think. You have to be truely crazy to see it.

  8. Valeria Says:
    June 28th, 2009 at 3:35 pm

    A great story as usual Helen… arg.. die Minerva! I hate you!!! GRRRRRRRRR

    5stars

  9. EvilOpal Says:
    July 2nd, 2009 at 6:03 pm

    I really like how you made the chapters really short. It adds to the feeling of something that’s gone. Oh, I wish that you could add on to this story to make it A/H again!!! Please, please make it be a story with a sad beginning and a happy ending!!!! PLEASE TAKE OFF GTHE complete SIGN!!!!!! I’M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty please?

  10. banana Says:
    July 11th, 2009 at 7:56 am

    this so sad…DIE MINERVA, DIE!!!I KILL U!!

  11. Cheese Says:
    July 12th, 2009 at 6:47 pm

    Artemis+ Holly are wrong together.
    I think he goes better with Minerva.

    What is with the dusty bit at the beggining?

  12. Shadow Light Says:
    August 8th, 2009 at 3:48 am

    Cheese: It’s to add to the emotional and dramatic flare of the story….. If you didn’t get that, you aren’t exactly an author…or a good reader. No offense though. But interesting opinion on the pairings. But prepare to face the wrath of some of the Minerva haters here.(wow this was long)

    Helen: I LOVE you and you’re story to bits! I’m going to send you HUGS and LOVE! So much that you suffocate!!!! And then hopefully you’ll magically resurrect and continue to update your other stories. =)

  13. Helen Says:
    August 8th, 2009 at 4:58 am

    uh… you could get Miasaki to ressurect me right now, seeing as… *help!* big hearts floating around! more and more!

  14. ArtiHoli180 Says:
    August 30th, 2009 at 1:08 am

    MORE!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!! THEY GOTTA GET BACK TOGETHER!!!!! AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  15. TheSaltyOcean Says:
    August 30th, 2009 at 1:27 am

    Normally, I would complain about the tiny chapter things, but this story is perfect with them. =] Good job. I loved it.

  16. Hermione Fowl Says:
    January 9th, 2010 at 4:06 am

    So sad. =( I loved it =)

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