Dreams
Written on December 30th, 2008 by The_Right_GirlStory Details
(6 votes, average: 4.17 out of 5)
Loading ...The moon? But- no, it is not the moon, it is a pale face, with black, black hair. His eyes…I can’t see, everything is too blurry. Is he death? The light is slowly dimming. I catch a glimse of red, is it blood? No, just another person, hovering behind the pale person. Is this death? Black, black Is all I see again. I am afaid, though I have outgrown the fear of night, of this blackness, for I fear that it is death, If I have not already reached it.Yet…The red gives me hope. Perhaps I can still be alive…No, it is impossable. I have fallen from a towering cliff, in to the hateful sea. I cannot be alive. And yet, I still have hope…
I’M GETTING TO IT!! JUST WAIT!! THE CHAPTERS WILL BE LONGER SOON!
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December 31st, 2008 at 12:11 am
First comment dance and first reader dance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IS ARTY NARRATING? what is he talkin’ about??????
TOO MUCH SUSPENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
December 31st, 2008 at 6:04 pm
OH MY GOSH!! What happened before? What happens after? This is really suspenseful, and also poetic. It’s really awesome, but I won’t rate until you update! UPDATE!
January 1st, 2009 at 4:31 pm
OK,Ok, My adoring fans! I will update! This is not what you think it maybe.
The_Right_Girl
January 1st, 2009 at 4:44 pm
I WILL NEED SOME MORE CHARACTERS!! (Not too many!) So please give me some, and you might be in the story!
The_Right_Girl
January 2nd, 2009 at 7:13 pm
Okay, you updated, I rated it: 5\5. THIS IS AWESOME!!! It’s really cool how you repeat some phrases, and how it’s all mysterious, and it’s just so COOL!!! Do you mean characters, as in, us? If so, this is me. If I’m wrong, then sorry.
Name: Sarah
Age:11
Personality: rather hyper, smart, a bit crazy, obsessed with certain book series, and a Sagitarius.
This story is so awesome!!! Please update it!
January 3rd, 2009 at 8:59 pm
I will try to find the time to update often, but I will be really busy. My school is starting again the day after tomorrow, and I have(FINALLY!) been able to play my new L.o.Z Phantom hourglass.
The_Right_Girl
January 4th, 2009 at 1:09 am
WONDERFUL! update ASAP!!
Ane, evilopal, I think she needs to know weather you’re on the good side or bad.
UPDATE!
January 4th, 2009 at 1:25 am
woah… please update!
It makes more sense after ch.3, but I still dont understand.
What is her name?
What happens next?
Please update!
January 4th, 2009 at 1:29 am
I NEED MORE CHARACTERS!
and do you want to be a ceak out dude/girl,waiter/waitris,etc.
LET ME KNOW!!
The_Right_Girl
January 28th, 2009 at 1:13 pm
DOES NO ONE LIKE MY STORY?!?! SHOULD I DISAPPEAR FOREVER, AND JUST AS I WAS DISCOVERING MY HIDDEN TALENT?
GOOD BYE, CRUEL, CRUEL WORLD!
January 28th, 2009 at 1:44 pm
OMG sorry the character should be a girl
March 18th, 2009 at 6:55 pm
UPDATE!!!
i only understood it properly after chappie3 but plz carry on i’m dyin from the suspence.
April 14th, 2009 at 4:17 pm
HELLO!!! NoOnE HaS GiVen ME PEOPLE!!!!
WAHAAAA!!!!
I’M NOT UPDATING UNTILL YA’LL DO!!!!!
May 13th, 2009 at 11:00 am
Shesh, people! didn’t ya’ll hear? I won’t be up d8ing till I get more charater w details!
May 13th, 2009 at 11:30 am
Name: Zeke
Age: 14
Appearance: Black hair pale skin almost black eyes.
personality: Hard to say…Rough? Never shows emotions?
history: ???
Another character.
Name: Melody
Age: 13 1%2
Appearance: Green hair chestnut skin brown eyes.
personality: Happy up beat. gets angry easily.
History: ???
May 13th, 2009 at 3:28 pm
I got no ideas, but i love this story. Wait there’s on
Name: Nikki
Age: ??? (looks like teen)
Appearence:Chocolate brown hair,green eyes, thin as a stick
personality: Mysterious, anger issues, seems gothic.
history:delinquant
May 28th, 2009 at 10:27 am
Warning, warning. All readers attend.
I can no longer update for a long, long time because my cowpog parents have this site ‘parental block’ed at home, so I was only able to write this info. on my school computer during a lunch ‘acadimich’( SOME one can’t spell) ‘class’ ( more like detention)
SO SORRY!!! It’s blocked because my parents thought I was on here reading instead of doing my homework, and don’t believe I can multitask, either. ( my ‘teacher’ says she’s doing this ‘voluentary.’ LIAR!!)
Bye!!!
May 28th, 2009 at 9:36 pm
…….. i wish i had an idea for you but im fresh out……. *sighs again*
July 6th, 2009 at 9:15 am
*It was night when I woke again, and a full moon seemed to call to me. I looked around with out moving my head, and saw that there was no one in the room with me.I very slowly got up, like a snail, untill I sat up. I then continued to my feet. That hurt a bit, but the pain wasn’t as strong as it might of been, due to the pain killers. I walked to the door way, and when I reached it, I heard a slight snore and I spun around. Opps. My head spun and turned the room to bright colors, but I held on to the door frame, determined not to go back in to darkness.
I managed to win, and after my vision cleared, I could see that the slim, raven haired boy was in a plush arm chair next to my bed near the headboard. Not so alone after all. I slowly walked out to the hall way, and made my way down it, using the walls to keep me upright. I got to a steel door,
And I have to go now! Darn!
Bye!
Your adoring Author!
The_Right_Girl
July 6th, 2009 at 10:06 am
I’ll give you a character if you update!
Name: Ivy Rose
Species: Elf
Age: 15(if she were human anyway)
Appearance: Red hair, green eyes, abnormally pale skin for a fairy.
Personality: Mysterious, would do anything for her friends, never backs down from a challenge.
Occupation: Volunteering, currently at a hospital(you know witch one).
July 12th, 2009 at 7:39 pm
up *titch* date
September 24th, 2009 at 6:33 pm
CANT UPD8!!! not now, at least. finally found a way to get around the block! my parents made! uh oh! gotta go! Bye! see ya!