Disowned
Written on July 7th, 2009 by yourfaceStory Details
(4 votes, average: 4.75 out of 5)
Loading ...This should teach you Jessica! no more Arty Fowl for you lil missy!!!!! or should i call you RORY! OR HOW ABOUT (o yes i went ther) MESSY JESSI!
54 Reviews for “Disowned”
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July 7th, 2009 at 6:00 am
Continue please. It is quite good, I only spotted one or two mistakes. The other FGers will never figive you if you don’t continue.
Please?
July 7th, 2009 at 6:01 am
You should definitely continue! And your spelling gotten better too! Please update soon!
July 7th, 2009 at 6:04 am
*squee!* uh… I spotted Artemis.
On the other hand… I have support! keep going!
July 7th, 2009 at 7:51 am
Continue. This is a really good start.
July 7th, 2009 at 1:27 pm
ok… weep weep … cry cry…. poor Artemis… !!!! :T.T:
UPDATE and CONTINUE
sooooooooooooooooo awesome!
July 7th, 2009 at 5:26 pm
Okay I’ll continue my work. Thanx
4 the good criticism. *sniffle* just wait for what happens next lol I’m meen
July 7th, 2009 at 6:50 pm
U SHOULD REALLY CONTINU!!!!!
CAN DOM KIK ARTY’S DADZ ARSE PLZ??????
July 7th, 2009 at 7:52 pm
Please update!!!!!! And please don’t do what Toushiro suggested. *in sarcastic tone* As much as we’d all like to see it *out of sarcastic tone* it would somehow take away from he gravity of the situation. Now UPDATE!
July 8th, 2009 at 2:25 am
lol Toushiro your hilarious
July 8th, 2009 at 5:44 am
I love the update! It seriously made me cry.
Please update again! I love this soooooo much!!!!
July 8th, 2009 at 9:06 am
Really good update. This is so sad and deep, really good job.
July 8th, 2009 at 4:24 pm
THNX BUT CN U NOT FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAH I’M IN A REALLY BAD MOOD 2DAY!!!!!
1ST ITS POURIN DWN WIV RAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
2ND THE FILM I’M TRYIN 2 DWNLOAD ON2 MA MP3 WNT WRK!!!!!!!!
3RD U HVNT FINISHED IT YET!!!!!!!!!!!
July 8th, 2009 at 5:01 pm
Okay just a few things. Angeline’s nickname for Artemis Sr. is Timmy, not Arty.
meet eye contact
through his tears
Just to name a few mistakes. You really should have someone beta this. Other then that I love it! You have to update!!!!!
July 8th, 2009 at 5:46 pm
WELL EXCEPT 4 THE FACT THAT…..THEIR AINT NO BETA-ERZ!!!!!!!!
July 8th, 2009 at 5:48 pm
Yeah but they can email it to a beta-er. They still check their email, they just don’t have enough time for here.
July 8th, 2009 at 6:20 pm
K………
July 9th, 2009 at 2:28 am
LOL I’ll update asap
July 9th, 2009 at 4:15 am
good
July 9th, 2009 at 6:47 am
Aww! this is so sad
July 9th, 2009 at 7:07 am
U-P-D-A-T-E-!
July 9th, 2009 at 3:13 pm
CONTINUE!!!!
July 9th, 2009 at 4:19 pm
THIS CENTURY WOULD B NICE……….????
FINISH!!!!!!!!!
July 9th, 2009 at 5:39 pm
WOW Jess LOL this is good!! What is Artemis Fowl Tho??? You said this website would enplane something. all its explained is your emotions are stronger then the avrge person, and i already know that! LOL who els do you know that changed her name 6 times for the fun of it??? LOL
July 9th, 2009 at 5:40 pm
LOL go away David LOL
July 9th, 2009 at 5:43 pm
U DNT KNO WAT ARTY FOWL IS??
Y R U ON A ARTYFOWL FANFICTION???
July 9th, 2009 at 5:47 pm
I told him to read some of the fan fictions after he read the book, but did he listen??? NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! LOL bff are anoying some times
July 9th, 2009 at 5:57 pm
YEA I KNO WAT U MEAN………THNK GOD NONE OF MA M8S HAV THE HTRL 4 THIS SITE…
July 9th, 2009 at 7:16 pm
LOL yah
July 9th, 2009 at 7:49 pm
yourface, are you jess and whoo is david?
!!!!!!
dear david
IAMveryoffendedthatuhavenotreadartyfowl!
from iwuvarty….
July 9th, 2009 at 7:52 pm
UPDATE! barrage of smileys time!
: 
:tinfoilhat: This has been a random smiley momment. NOW UPDATE!
July 10th, 2009 at 1:34 am
yes iwavarty i am jess, david is 1 of my best friends but he’s being stupid at the moment, and i to am extreemly ufended that he has not read the book. David is curently reading over my solder and he says hi, and f*ck of…… sorry
he can b a jerk
July 10th, 2009 at 2:44 am
update now
July 10th, 2009 at 11:55 am
YEA WE CAN TELL!!
SOM OF MA M8S H8 BOOKS!!!!!!!
LYK THE 1 I’M SITTIN NXT 2 NOW!!!!!!
YEA CRYSTAL SAYS: HI!
TELL DAVID THAT TOUSHI SAYZ 2 BUGGER OFF IF HE DNT GET ARTY FOWL!!!!
July 10th, 2009 at 12:38 pm
tell him that is soooo rude of him!
x: Hmmmp!
July 10th, 2009 at 6:19 pm
I will, i have, he knows. lol hes sitting next to me again this time reading AF sweet sweet success }:)
July 11th, 2009 at 2:24 am
Update plz plz plz!! I’m crying! i need to read a funny story cause my mood ring is blue. Blue is sad.
July 11th, 2009 at 2:43 am
I didn’t see an update! All I saw was the old chappy three! That is NOT an update!
July 11th, 2009 at 7:04 am
Nope, no update!
July 11th, 2009 at 7:07 am
I know! The liar! BURN THE LIAR AT THE STAKE! *guy whispers in my ear* WHAT’DYA MEAN WE CAN’T DO THAT? Fine I’ll have to settle from this. *ties yourface to a chair in a locked room with Barney and Paris Hilton albums playing* Now do a REAL update! Or else I put Elmo and the teletubbies in that locked room too.
UPDATE!
July 11th, 2009 at 4:54 pm
LOL
@KAGOME: WHO SAYZ WE CNT BURN THE LIAR?
@YOURFACE: THIS IS CALLED N UPD8!!!!!!!!!????????
July 11th, 2009 at 6:12 pm
*muttersstupidmodswon’tletmeburnheratthestakemutters*
July 11th, 2009 at 7:52 pm
He he sucess!!
and urface? r u working on this?
July 11th, 2009 at 8:18 pm
Yes yes….. How… another missing chapter!!!!!!!!!! i must investigate! I need an evil mastermind right now
my stuff keeps disappearing! *sighs* don’t burn me at the stake and i escaped your locked room with my magic mind force of Jess powers MWAHAHAHAHAHA! lol maybe Foaly doesn’t like my righting 
or possibly Artemis thinks I’m an armature for having his dad disown him. o well I’ll try to update… no I WILL UPDATE! as soon as i can figure this problem out
July 11th, 2009 at 8:25 pm
There problem solved. Some one (my ex boyfriend i think) was hacking my com.!!! so i hacked back and they backed of
July 11th, 2009 at 8:41 pm
I love the update! Now excuse me while i go kill Artemis Fowl Sr. *walks off with seashell sword in hand* JK! I bet Opal mesmerised him. Grrrrr
Now excuse me while I go off to kill Opal! *walks off with seashell sword in hand, again*
July 11th, 2009 at 9:11 pm
LOL!!!!!! mabye she did!! but i don’t think so
July 11th, 2009 at 9:37 pm
Err I forgot to tell you, you do know you pely Myles wrong right? And Beckett. Oh and, THANKS FOR THE UPDATE! And I’m slightly dissapointed that Opal didn’t mesmerise Artemis Sr. Aw well, I already killed Opal. What’s done it done. *shrugs*
July 11th, 2009 at 10:03 pm
OHH YEY!! You go girl Hacking him back!
But I would have simply asked Butler or Juliet (Juliet would probably help more) to uh take revenge on ur ex bf.
Don’t mind if I ask but what did u do to ur ex bf?
July 11th, 2009 at 10:44 pm
My big brother mike said he tide him in a knot and David said he made him eat bird poo, and i hacked him back. so i geuss we all did are part in makeing him back of. But Mike still wants him dead for even tempting to get at me. Damb kid screwed up my spell chek to, so sorry if my spelling sux.
And yes Ally Kat I know, but i haven’t gotten to do muck with theme yet so just hold on okay, and two Thanx 4 killing Opal. And three have you thought of any one that would want to get revenge on Artemis?? Or perhaps…. possibly, the past could be repeating its self??
July 11th, 2009 at 10:54 pm
OH and adding to the thing with miles, this situation has changed him. and he’s determined to stay strong and be more like his more emotionality retarded older brother that he may never see again. Artemis being the genius that he is, see’s this, so to help Miles be more like himself he gives him the nolige the fairy’s, because obviously they’ve helped change Artemis, why cant they change Miles to?? DEEP? I think so.
July 12th, 2009 at 2:14 am
Bie Bie! fixed my Jess problem!
July 12th, 2009 at 2:38 am
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TONY!!!! This isn’t you! You ruined all my hard work you jerk!
July 12th, 2009 at 6:36 am
*starts cussing at the stupid imbecile who ruined Jess’s work*
GO RUIN SOMEBODY ELSE’S LIFE YOU UTTER JERK!
Jess, your ex-boyfriend is indescribably cruel. *muttersIdon’tknowwherehelivesotherwiseIwouldpummelhimmutters*
July 12th, 2009 at 3:35 pm
freak