Dimension Jumping

Written on March 3rd, 2008 by Hunter

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  • Category: General
  • Author: Hunter
  • Word Count: 2245
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           They heard the sound of the car go away. Holly came back from the window. “The coast is clear.” she said.

Everyone breathed a sigh of relief.

“But there’s a huge bomb set by Opal coming to blow us all up.

Everyone smacked their heads.

     BOOOOOMMM!!!!!!

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15 Reviews for “Dimension Jumping”

  1. Hunter Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 12:53 am

    Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Get the message?

  2. symojen Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 12:58 am

    *FCD* Love it. This is incredible. Please add on, I want to read this. It’s really interesting and captures the reader. Nice job. :)

  3. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 1:22 am

    LOL nice job, it was kinda confusing but I get it , nice job, are u ganna continue?

  4. foalygenius Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 2:23 am

    I like it, good job! Please continue!

  5. Olive Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 5:10 am

    There isn’t a lot yet to go on but please continue. I like the title a lot.

  6. mayqueen17 Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 10:09 pm

    Poor Arty! His head was glued to the screen!

  7. Derek Says:
    March 7th, 2008 at 4:01 am

    Great! Really funny for sure. You even added Barney in it!

  8. Star Jinin Says:
    March 7th, 2008 at 4:48 am

    HA HA HA HA!!! *choke* Too funny! I wonder how the children will react… and the dimention is for 3 and under part was good!

  9. Simetra16 Says:
    March 8th, 2008 at 8:35 pm

    Lol! This is so funny! Please add on it’s hylarious!

  10. Simetra16 Says:
    March 8th, 2008 at 8:36 pm

    :) Aaah! I can’t stop laughing! :D

  11. Symojen Says:
    March 9th, 2008 at 3:42 pm

    Lol this is so funny

  12. Angeline Fowl Says:
    March 21st, 2008 at 12:05 am

    Oh dear arty is glue on the computer……

    HAHAHAHAHAH *choke* THIS IS SOO FUNNY HAHAHAHAHAHA I hope butler didnt destory the house

  13. Steven Says:
    March 28th, 2008 at 12:28 am

    That was hillarious!

  14. Opal Koboi Twin Says:
    April 6th, 2008 at 3:07 pm

    Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahah.*croaked from laughing so much* I’m back. Man that was hilarous. How did you come up with this.

    Tell me please.

  15. Hunter Says:
    May 7th, 2008 at 5:11 am

    My friend once made a joke about Naruto going through a rent in space, landing in Barneys world, and then wrecking chaos everywhere. I just adapted the joke.

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