Dimension Jumping

Written on March 3rd, 2008 by Hunter

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  • Category: General
  • Author: Hunter
  • Word Count: 2245
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           Artemis quickly ran over to the computer, “Lets call on those Dr. Seuss cleaner guys. They should be able to clean up this mess.”

 

           And clean up they did. In less then 40 seconds, the house was shiny. Then Holly ran back in the room. “Artemis! They cleaned up everything! Everything! The house is completly empty! Even the toilets are gone!

 

“Uh Oh…”

 

           THE END

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15 Reviews for “Dimension Jumping”

  1. Hunter Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 12:53 am

    Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Get the message?

  2. symojen Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 12:58 am

    *FCD* Love it. This is incredible. Please add on, I want to read this. It’s really interesting and captures the reader. Nice job. :)

  3. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 1:22 am

    LOL nice job, it was kinda confusing but I get it , nice job, are u ganna continue?

  4. foalygenius Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 2:23 am

    I like it, good job! Please continue!

  5. Olive Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 5:10 am

    There isn’t a lot yet to go on but please continue. I like the title a lot.

  6. mayqueen17 Says:
    March 3rd, 2008 at 10:09 pm

    Poor Arty! His head was glued to the screen!

  7. Derek Says:
    March 7th, 2008 at 4:01 am

    Great! Really funny for sure. You even added Barney in it!

  8. Star Jinin Says:
    March 7th, 2008 at 4:48 am

    HA HA HA HA!!! *choke* Too funny! I wonder how the children will react… and the dimention is for 3 and under part was good!

  9. Simetra16 Says:
    March 8th, 2008 at 8:35 pm

    Lol! This is so funny! Please add on it’s hylarious!

  10. Simetra16 Says:
    March 8th, 2008 at 8:36 pm

    :) Aaah! I can’t stop laughing! :D

  11. Symojen Says:
    March 9th, 2008 at 3:42 pm

    Lol this is so funny

  12. Angeline Fowl Says:
    March 21st, 2008 at 12:05 am

    Oh dear arty is glue on the computer……

    HAHAHAHAHAH *choke* THIS IS SOO FUNNY HAHAHAHAHAHA I hope butler didnt destory the house

  13. Steven Says:
    March 28th, 2008 at 12:28 am

    That was hillarious!

  14. Opal Koboi Twin Says:
    April 6th, 2008 at 3:07 pm

    Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahah.*croaked from laughing so much* I’m back. Man that was hilarous. How did you come up with this.

    Tell me please.

  15. Hunter Says:
    May 7th, 2008 at 5:11 am

    My friend once made a joke about Naruto going through a rent in space, landing in Barneys world, and then wrecking chaos everywhere. I just adapted the joke.

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