Dimension Jumping

Written on March 3rd, 2008 by Hunter

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  • Category: General
  • Author: Hunter
  • Word Count: 2245
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           Artemis groaned. He had been sooooo close in getting that huge pile of gold! Curse that dimension traveler thingy. Artemis blinked. Did he just say thingy? All the traveling must have gotten into his brain!

           He looked for Butler and Holly. They seemed to have landed on a bench, and they were waving crazily at him. Artemis wondered why they were so frantic.

            Butler and Holly were waving their hands crazily at Artemis. At least Butler was. Holly was waving one hand in the air, and glueing Butler’s Big Saucerto the bags handle. THen Butler’s phone vibrated. He had a text from Artemis: Can’t move. Dimension traveling side effect.”

           Butler sighed and was about to get Artemis when a chubby man appeared with a michorphone. “Good evening, everyone!” he boomed. Butler looked up. It was morning. Welcome to the fifth offical pokemon 8 test battles event! Butler heard someone whisper, “It’s supposed to be the fourth.” This test will be strictly for endurence only. When the read light turns green, Charizard, Blastiose, Torrtera, Empoleon, Garchomp, Metagross, Dragonite, and Magniton will use a powerful move one the red X, then hold it for as long as they can. Who ever is last using their move will be the winner. The record is 12 min. 36 sec. We’re are hoping for some breakers!

           Butler got another text from Artemis: Where is the red X? Can’t see it.

           Butler studied the field for a monent, then sighed. Deeply. He sent a message.

           Artemis’s phone vibrated. Good. An answer. He opened up his phone.

                                       “Look underneath you.”

Artemis smacked his head with the plam of his hand…

 

                                            14 min. and 49 sec. later…

           A wind picked up, and blew Butler, Holly, and a couple of ashes away.

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15 Reviews for “Dimension Jumping”

  1. Hunter Says:

    Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Review. Get the message?

  2. symojen Says:

    *FCD* Love it. This is incredible. Please add on, I want to read this. It’s really interesting and captures the reader. Nice job. :)

  3. mahi101 AF Fan Says:

    LOL nice job, it was kinda confusing but I get it , nice job, are u ganna continue?

  4. foalygenius Says:

    I like it, good job! Please continue!

  5. Olive Says:

    There isn’t a lot yet to go on but please continue. I like the title a lot.

  6. mayqueen17 Says:

    Poor Arty! His head was glued to the screen!

  7. Derek Says:

    Great! Really funny for sure. You even added Barney in it!

  8. Star Jinin Says:

    HA HA HA HA!!! *choke* Too funny! I wonder how the children will react… and the dimention is for 3 and under part was good!

  9. Simetra16 Says:

    Lol! This is so funny! Please add on it’s hylarious!

  10. Simetra16 Says:

    :) Aaah! I can’t stop laughing! :D

  11. Symojen Says:

    Lol this is so funny

  12. Angeline Fowl Says:

    Oh dear arty is glue on the computer……

    HAHAHAHAHAH *choke* THIS IS SOO FUNNY HAHAHAHAHAHA I hope butler didnt destory the house

  13. Steven Says:

    That was hillarious!

  14. Opal Koboi Twin Says:

    Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahah.*croaked from laughing so much* I’m back. Man that was hilarous. How did you come up with this.

    Tell me please.

  15. Hunter Says:

    My friend once made a joke about Naruto going through a rent in space, landing in Barneys world, and then wrecking chaos everywhere. I just adapted the joke.

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