Depression for Minerva Paradizo
Written on June 28th, 2008 by HelenStory Details
(6 votes, average: 3.5 out of 5)
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Minerva walked to the edge and stared down into the space there. It seemed hopeless to live, now that Artemis had hooked up with Holly Short. Minerva’s feelings of sadness quickly turned to anger. How dare that… that… thing come and steal her Arty away from her? She wasn’t even legal!
The darkness welcomed her, drawing her into itself, sucking her spirit from her, leeching her fear away. Suddenly the darkness looked peaceful, a respite from the weary days of the living. Might as well end it all… end it all… all…
Falling gracefully into the earth, she felt finally happy. There was nothing to worry about now, she could not go back even if she had wanted…
Artemis and Holly watched helplessly as Minerva fell into the active volcano. Imprisoned by Minerve in their own house. She had left a camera, though.
Artemis was shattered. The plan did not call for Minerva to commit suicide. The plan was to hurt Minerva badly, that’s all. But he could not control his feelings and now he realised that he had loved Holly all along. Crystal tears spilling down their cheeks, they bowed their heads together in rememberance of Minerva, united both by their sadness that a human life had been lost, and love for each other.
June 28th, 2008 at 10:41 am
Hey! Why isn’t anybody commenting???
June 28th, 2008 at 1:03 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!!
June 28th, 2008 at 1:05 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!! When are you going to update?
June 28th, 2008 at 1:47 pm
I just updated the same day as you put the review. I added a brand new chapter. I appreciate your review very much. The others *pout* didn’t review at all! Shocking, isn’t it? Haha.
June 28th, 2008 at 9:14 pm
LOL. That is so funny.
June 29th, 2008 at 4:10 pm
I’m sure Artemis actually isn’t really that harsh and why does everyone write about Holly hating Minerva and both of them like-liking him? It’s wierd and as you can tell I’m a M/A shipper so I’d like variation.
June 29th, 2008 at 6:02 pm
I’m going to comment, and u asked 4 reveiws, so don’t get mad or anything
I like the breaking up thing, but I think its a little weird having Holly as AF’s gf…
I mean, interspecicies relationships are a little, well, u know….
The depression thing is a little dramatic…
I like the rest of it though!
:-)
June 29th, 2008 at 6:04 pm
I think that everyone hating Minerva is kinda too much
anyway, get AF and MP back together!
June 30th, 2008 at 9:35 pm
hahaha! i like it. it’s really funny! keep it up!
July 9th, 2008 at 12:19 am
I like it! Ha! Ha! Ha! I don’t really like Minerva but I think Artemis is over doing it.
July 21st, 2008 at 12:40 am
Forget what I said in my last comment. MINERVA MUST SUFFER!!!
July 30th, 2008 at 2:29 pm
YES!!!
Minerva must DIE!!! I’m going to make her suffer real bad and then she is going to DIE.(or not)I haven’t deciided yet. You gotta help me make up my mind.
August 15th, 2008 at 1:25 am
Minerva MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!! Does that make up your mind? ^___^ And Holly is awesome for Arty! Except when it’s H/T and NOT A/M!
August 19th, 2008 at 12:53 pm
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
DIE MINERVA DIE!! (though she really didn’t deserve THIS) but MWAHAHAHA!! BTW I am a A/H shipper!!
*mwah*
August 25th, 2008 at 12:40 pm
I totally agree with you guys who are A/H !!!