Depression for Minerva Paradizo
Written on June 28th, 2008 by HelenStory Details
(6 votes, average: 3.5 out of 5)
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Each time Minerva saw Artemis and Holly together, it was like a thorn in her heart. She ached for Artemis so badly that she would sometimes feel real physical hurt where her heart was supposed to be.
Minerva cried at night too. She was often loud and those who were awake would here her sobs echoing in the night. She also had eyebags. Purple ones. She didn’t comb her hair, wash, brush her teeth - in other words, Minerva had stopped caring.
She stopped eating and drinking. She moped around the house with her lank and greasy hair hanging from her head in clumps. Artemis found her very unsavoury to look at. He turned away from her each time he saw her.
Butler alone was concerned about her. So he took her to a doctor and found out she had a mild form of depression. Her phsycological state was not good. At all.
Butler tried to talk to Artemis about Minerva but he was adamant about it. To quote him, “She is a total disappointment. I refuse to talk about it.” And when Butler had insisted, Artemis ordered Butler to get out.
Butler knew, of course, about Minerva’s affairs. But she should not be treated like an animal, so Butler took care of her himself.
He took her her meals and persuaded her to eat them; he made her wash up… In other words, he was her nursemaid.
June 28th, 2008 at 10:41 am
Hey! Why isn’t anybody commenting???
June 28th, 2008 at 1:03 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!!
June 28th, 2008 at 1:05 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!! When are you going to update?
June 28th, 2008 at 1:47 pm
I just updated the same day as you put the review. I added a brand new chapter. I appreciate your review very much. The others *pout* didn’t review at all! Shocking, isn’t it? Haha.
June 28th, 2008 at 9:14 pm
LOL. That is so funny.
June 29th, 2008 at 4:10 pm
I’m sure Artemis actually isn’t really that harsh and why does everyone write about Holly hating Minerva and both of them like-liking him? It’s wierd and as you can tell I’m a M/A shipper so I’d like variation.
June 29th, 2008 at 6:02 pm
I’m going to comment, and u asked 4 reveiws, so don’t get mad or anything
I like the breaking up thing, but I think its a little weird having Holly as AF’s gf…
I mean, interspecicies relationships are a little, well, u know….
The depression thing is a little dramatic…
I like the rest of it though!
:-)
June 29th, 2008 at 6:04 pm
I think that everyone hating Minerva is kinda too much
anyway, get AF and MP back together!
June 30th, 2008 at 9:35 pm
hahaha! i like it. it’s really funny! keep it up!
July 9th, 2008 at 12:19 am
I like it! Ha! Ha! Ha! I don’t really like Minerva but I think Artemis is over doing it.
July 21st, 2008 at 12:40 am
Forget what I said in my last comment. MINERVA MUST SUFFER!!!
July 30th, 2008 at 2:29 pm
YES!!!
Minerva must DIE!!! I’m going to make her suffer real bad and then she is going to DIE.(or not)I haven’t deciided yet. You gotta help me make up my mind.
August 15th, 2008 at 1:25 am
Minerva MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!! Does that make up your mind? ^___^ And Holly is awesome for Arty! Except when it’s H/T and NOT A/M!
August 19th, 2008 at 12:53 pm
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
DIE MINERVA DIE!! (though she really didn’t deserve THIS) but MWAHAHAHA!! BTW I am a A/H shipper!!
*mwah*
August 25th, 2008 at 12:40 pm
I totally agree with you guys who are A/H !!!