Depression for Minerva Paradizo
Written on June 28th, 2008 by HelenStory Details
(6 votes, average: 3.5 out of 5)
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Artemis had Holly move over from Haven to his manor immediately the next day. Just as they started moving, Artemis remembered about Minerva. She was staying in the manor too. Well, never mind. It would only hurt her more to see Artemis and Holly walking together arm in arm.
Artemis and Holly were sitting on the bed in Holly’s room and talking about random things when Minerva burst in. “Minerva. Did you have to intrude upon my privacy just like that?” It was more of a statement than a question. Minerva turned instantly red from rage at the repulsive (to her) sight before her. She started to cry again. She shouted at Holly “You! You are such a bitch! You seduced my Arty!” Things were really getting out of hand. Artemis decided to step in.
”Miss. I would be grateful to you if you were to move away from my girlfriend and stop insulting her.” Minerva was stunned. She had never heard Artemis speak to her like that before. As if she was worth absolutely nothing at all.
She pleaded. She tried everything from puppy dog eyes to clutching at his feet. Artemis had no choice but to call Butler. “Butler. We have Miss Paradizo on the top floor. Please remove her from my company immediately.” She cried louder.
Butler arrived and pulled her away from Artemis. Artemis regarded her coldly. Strangely, he no longer felt any emotion for her, only a deep contempt. “And Butler? I will be immensely happy if you were to keep Miss Paradizo away from me in the future.” He walked in to Holly’s room and shut the door.
June 28th, 2008 at 10:41 am
Hey! Why isn’t anybody commenting???
June 28th, 2008 at 1:03 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!!
June 28th, 2008 at 1:05 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!! When are you going to update?
June 28th, 2008 at 1:47 pm
I just updated the same day as you put the review. I added a brand new chapter. I appreciate your review very much. The others *pout* didn’t review at all! Shocking, isn’t it? Haha.
June 28th, 2008 at 9:14 pm
LOL. That is so funny.
June 29th, 2008 at 4:10 pm
I’m sure Artemis actually isn’t really that harsh and why does everyone write about Holly hating Minerva and both of them like-liking him? It’s wierd and as you can tell I’m a M/A shipper so I’d like variation.
June 29th, 2008 at 6:02 pm
I’m going to comment, and u asked 4 reveiws, so don’t get mad or anything
I like the breaking up thing, but I think its a little weird having Holly as AF’s gf…
I mean, interspecicies relationships are a little, well, u know….
The depression thing is a little dramatic…
I like the rest of it though!
:-)
June 29th, 2008 at 6:04 pm
I think that everyone hating Minerva is kinda too much
anyway, get AF and MP back together!
June 30th, 2008 at 9:35 pm
hahaha! i like it. it’s really funny! keep it up!
July 9th, 2008 at 12:19 am
I like it! Ha! Ha! Ha! I don’t really like Minerva but I think Artemis is over doing it.
July 21st, 2008 at 12:40 am
Forget what I said in my last comment. MINERVA MUST SUFFER!!!
July 30th, 2008 at 2:29 pm
YES!!!
Minerva must DIE!!! I’m going to make her suffer real bad and then she is going to DIE.(or not)I haven’t deciided yet. You gotta help me make up my mind.
August 15th, 2008 at 1:25 am
Minerva MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!! Does that make up your mind? ^___^ And Holly is awesome for Arty! Except when it’s H/T and NOT A/M!
August 19th, 2008 at 12:53 pm
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
DIE MINERVA DIE!! (though she really didn’t deserve THIS) but MWAHAHAHA!! BTW I am a A/H shipper!!
*mwah*
August 25th, 2008 at 12:40 pm
I totally agree with you guys who are A/H !!!