Depression for Minerva Paradizo
Written on June 28th, 2008 by HelenStory Details
(6 votes, average: 3.5 out of 5)
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“Artemis, I can’t live without you… I love you!”Minerva’s tiny body shook as she sobbed pathetically, sprawled on a comfy armchair. “Minerva, you know I cannot stand your crying. But this time,cry all you want. I have had enough of your affairs with others.” Artemis’s voice was cold and completely empty of emotion, chilled her to the bone.
Artemis had found out about the many flings of Minerva’s. Each time he had forgiven her, due to her relentless sobbing. But this would be the last time. This time he would not forgive her, no matter how sad she was or would be.
He turned away from her tear stained face and walked away, taking no notice of her increase of volume in crying. Artemis’s feelings were in turmoil. He did not want to leave Minerva just like that, he wanted to punish her for cheating him, Artemis Fowl, the criminal mastermind. At the same time, he loved her too. He did not know what to do.
At last, he decided to punish her for her unfaithfulness to him. Artemis went home to get ready for the blow that would most likely destroy Minerva Paradizo.
June 28th, 2008 at 10:41 am
Hey! Why isn’t anybody commenting???
June 28th, 2008 at 1:03 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!!
June 28th, 2008 at 1:05 pm
I like it. The characters might be a little OOC, but I’m not sure. It’s really, really, good!!!!! When are you going to update?
June 28th, 2008 at 1:47 pm
I just updated the same day as you put the review. I added a brand new chapter. I appreciate your review very much. The others *pout* didn’t review at all! Shocking, isn’t it? Haha.
June 28th, 2008 at 9:14 pm
LOL. That is so funny.
June 29th, 2008 at 4:10 pm
I’m sure Artemis actually isn’t really that harsh and why does everyone write about Holly hating Minerva and both of them like-liking him? It’s wierd and as you can tell I’m a M/A shipper so I’d like variation.
June 29th, 2008 at 6:02 pm
I’m going to comment, and u asked 4 reveiws, so don’t get mad or anything
I like the breaking up thing, but I think its a little weird having Holly as AF’s gf…
I mean, interspecicies relationships are a little, well, u know….
The depression thing is a little dramatic…
I like the rest of it though!
:-)
June 29th, 2008 at 6:04 pm
I think that everyone hating Minerva is kinda too much
anyway, get AF and MP back together!
June 30th, 2008 at 9:35 pm
hahaha! i like it. it’s really funny! keep it up!
July 9th, 2008 at 12:19 am
I like it! Ha! Ha! Ha! I don’t really like Minerva but I think Artemis is over doing it.
July 21st, 2008 at 12:40 am
Forget what I said in my last comment. MINERVA MUST SUFFER!!!
July 30th, 2008 at 2:29 pm
YES!!!
Minerva must DIE!!! I’m going to make her suffer real bad and then she is going to DIE.(or not)I haven’t deciided yet. You gotta help me make up my mind.
August 15th, 2008 at 1:25 am
Minerva MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!! Does that make up your mind? ^___^ And Holly is awesome for Arty! Except when it’s H/T and NOT A/M!
August 19th, 2008 at 12:53 pm
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
DIE MINERVA DIE!! (though she really didn’t deserve THIS) but MWAHAHAHA!! BTW I am a A/H shipper!!
*mwah*
August 25th, 2008 at 12:40 pm
I totally agree with you guys who are A/H !!!